Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
Aw wow this was so sad! poor Sammy!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/09/09 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
hey Hun. Okay so now I'm intrigued...is this slit throat/dead Sammy happening in reality or in dream/vision/AU? Is this a real deathfic? My own personal view is that if, and it's a big if, Dean ever did get to the point that he saw no option but to kill Sammy, he would do it out of a sense of duty but it would be with huge regret and sadness. The anger you have him display here is a very different way to go. Bird x
Author's Response: it's a dream, definitely a dream. and it's actually key to later on and it will inspire sam to make a terrible decision and dean will have to stop him, as usual. don't worry it's nothing bad like destroying the world or anything, it's more like sam goes all emo
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/09/09 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hey hun Another interesting chapter. So has castiel actually 'Fallen' ie: lost his 'grace' or are you meaning he is out of favour with heaven but he still has his grace intact? I like his development of emotions and Dean's anger at Chuck is an interesting counterpoint to cas's encroaching softness. bird x
Author's Response: thanks. no cas still has his grace, he's just not on the top of God's Christmas list anymore if you will. i'll clarify that later on
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well Tiffany That's an interesting concept, having the arch-angel inked to Chuck banish Lucifer and I think you're right that Lucifer would have been far more powerful that an arch-angel. So you brought in Sam, but didn't Sam loose his 'mojo' in the battle with Lillith? I had it in my head that Dean 'the righteous man' was gonna have to be the one to stop Lucifers rise...but I could be wrong. Or maybe you're just exploring another angle? Anyhow it made me think which is good. Bird x
Author's Response: yeah, i know it's supposed to be dean who stops him, but i just could not figure out exactly HOW he could stop him, so i went ahead and had sam do it. even though, sam did lose his 'mojo' killing lilith, i'm just kinda screwing around with the storyline a bit. keep reading, though, coz it's only gonna get more and more intense.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
I liked it.
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start to your story, I believe you should give yourself more credit than you posted in the summary. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Bambers;)
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