Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 06:37 AM · On: Part 2
shhhh, I'm here incognito! I'm on a weekend with hubby and promised no computer. But he's out for his forced thirty minutes of walk, so I quickly fired it on anyway, lol. Had to know how Caleb was doing!! I really enjoyed the story, glad this time Dean decided to be the one to catch Caleb if he falls, as usually it's 'What Calebs Do', but it's a two lane road right. The only thing I could critisize, is that Caleb in 1980 would be nine years old, and seing how my seven years old daughter thinks, speaks and reacts, nine years old Caleb sounds younger. But it doesn't diminish the cuteness of the family scenes. So thanks for the read, and guess what, I'm waiting for the next story now! Should I say impatiently? Lol...
Author's Response: Haha!! You're like everyone else I know. How can people expect us to go without the computer AT ALL lmao Glad to see your name here anyways and Im glad you enjoyed it. Caleb is actually supposed to be like 6 ... it was the date i have apparantly wrong ... opps. Dates are my enemy! I'm terrible with them. So yeah anyways ... he sounds younger coz he wasnt supposed to be 9 sorry bout that lol And yeah, I think this idea appealed to me. Having Caleb have issue and Dean there for him :) Hope you have a great weekend with your hubby :) Tara x0x
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 04:51 PM · On: Part 2
Great story, Tara
Author's Response: Thanks :0 Glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know what you thought :) Tara x0x
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 09:46 AM · On: Part 2
Worth the (short) wait!!! Great ending, soft and still bringing a hard lump to my throat because you know what is about to happen. The softer side of Caleb is usually hinted at, but so satisfying to read here. Loved theWinchester defense League!!! LOL! John's response to the danger was very well done. All in all wonderful work, this was my treat before my challenging nigtshift tonight, but at least now I am smiling!! Look forward to the next one - book me a place? ;-) Abi.
Author's Response: Glad you liked! I did enjoy showing that child like soft side of Caleb as well lol Your place is booked ;) Tara x0x
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 06:50 AM · On: Part 1
LOL!!!! Obviously meant "write" not "right"... but still great work alright?!!!! ;-> Abi.
Author's Response: LOL dont you hate it when you find those typos lol Thanks so much for coming by and reading! I knew I recognised your name from somewhere. Now that I know your from Ungen now it all makes sense ... part 2 coming up ... talk soon :) Tara x0x
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 03:12 PM · On: Part 1
Great Chapter - utterly spellbound by your tale. Got to love hurt Caleb - he's so damn readable! Especially how you right him!!!! Wonderful fix - can't wait for the rest!!!! Abi.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 12:33 AM · On: Part 1
oh yes I missed you!!! Great chapter, gotta love a hurt Caleb and the Winchesters on rescue. Can't wait for part two, hurry!!
Author's Response: Hey there :) Feels good to post brotherhood again ;) Hurt Caleb is ... well its fun to write and its fun to read lol Part 2 coming right up ;) Tara x0x
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 03:49 PM · On: Part 1
awesome chapter!! cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Hope the next one is just as enjoyable for you. Thanks for coming by and reading ;) Tara x0x
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