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Reviews For Veracity
Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

No real point to this fic, but I liked it anyway. I love Sam, and I love insights into his heart, andI really like this. Thanks.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/11/08 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Okay so in looking for nominations for the ungen 2008 awards I came across this again and I just had to tell you once more how much I love it.  Thanks (again) for the great read - Kel ;)

 

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a stunning piece of work. I absolutely LOVED it. The way you built the boys connection through snapshots of their life, their work - from the mundane to that huge S1 finale. Your peek from Sam's POV was true to both characters - what felt like friction in the beginning was really their connection. The OJ and t-shirt - sounding like bickering but in reality each watching out for the other, truly understanding, was outstanding. And these words "Dean's gasp is pure relief. Sam...He absolves the blame; takes the burden of Sam's choice with that one word" was awesome - both in style and in cementing our understanding of everything Winchester. I was having trouble breathing all the way through your story, but I actually caught my breath here.

I don't know why I haven't found you before this, but I'm now off to read your series of one-shots coz I'm hooked. Thanks for the ride.

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Incredible!  Beautiful!! And so painful....Great job!!

Author's Response: Thankyou so much!  :o)

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

very good story. I enjoyed it through and through :0)

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thankyou so much.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I hope you can read this review because I can barely see to type it. It's hard to see font this small through tears like this. It's hard to see at all through tears like this.

Thru Terrys Eyes recommended that I check out these one-shots and I have to tell her thank you because the were fantastic. Moving, real, fundamental... you made the boys seem like people you encounter every day -- not characters on a TV show.

There was nothing unreal about any of the illustrated fundamental truths you showed us through Sam's eyes. Even the hunt of the jinjin felt like something people just do every day.

And the recount of the end of Devil's Trap... the way it played through Sam's eyes in this story was so moving and heartbreaking and... I have goosebumps just thinking about it.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much, what wonderful feedback.  I am so, so pleased that my take on the boys was real to you - that is a huge compliment for a fic writer.  :o)  I'm also pleased that it worked as a series of 'every day' shots; up until the last one, that's what I was aiming for.

Thankyou for reading.   

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

...I love your style!

Author's Response: Thanks heaps!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great job, fanastic fic!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. 

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great work... even when the boys are verbally sparring their concern for each other is so obvious - Dean with the fresh juice and Sam caring about the t-shirt! Loved it, well done.

Author's Response: Thankyou.  I was trying to capture their concern in their sparring, so I'm pleased that worked.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

very, very nice.

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: JMDoody (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well damn. That was good. I liked the style you wrote that in. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to see what else you have up here.

Author's Response: Thankyou.  I'm glad you liked it.  :o)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

ahh...very nicely done!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! Just an awesome take on a story we've all heard. I love how you build up the layers leading to the final scene. Again, wow!



Author's Response: Hey, thanks.  I'm so pleased it worked for you!

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