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Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 09:40 PM · On: epilogue

aww! such a cute ending! this story was WAY beyond anything i could have ever imagined and it was kind of awesome! i totally enjoyed it.  although you seem to have a thing for taking away dean's ability to walk. i mean in this it's both legs in another story it's one leg...but you always seem to give him a happy ending and that's what matters.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 11

in all honesty, i wasn't sure about this story just because of how the prequel ended, but it's actually pretty good and i'm assuming it only gets better. i love the world dean woke up to though and dean in track pants....LOL! now that's a visual i just can't see.  but i love this so far...plenty of humor. I'm just hoping that sam's not dead.

Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 31/07/07 05:39 PM · On: epilogue

Hello!

I've just read the whole of Phantasm (having read Weston House last night), and have to say a really big WELL DONE to you for a couple of fantastically good stories! I think 'cos I read them both in (virtually) one sitting, I feel like they're one complete story, and I loved the little epilogue at the end that wrapped everything up.

The stories read like an actual episode of Supernatural, you've done a really good job of keeping Sam and Dean in character, and introducing the minor characters (I'd include John and Mary Winchester in that) in a sympathetic, thoughtful way. Definitely no Mary-Sue's here!

So, again, yeah, well done - fab fic!

Reviewer: Meagan096 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 09:26 PM · On: epilogue

it ended T___T the story was really great!!! i hope that there is another one soon!!!

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 07:23 AM · On: epilogue

Loved the ending. What a great way to help Dean see that there was hope for him.  Especially like the comparison of handicaps and the realization that he wanted and needed to be in "his" world. Jenny

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 02/05/07 09:10 PM · On: epilogue

Great ending. I really like how you tie up all the loose ends and was really happy that you filled us in on what happened to altDean. Love the metaphor of the handicaps. Thanks for a great story.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you caught the metaphor - ironically, you're the first person to mention that either time/place I posted this.  Thanks so much for following this all the way through.  I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 02/05/07 07:59 PM · On: epilogue

Standing ovation!!!! Take a bow, because that was FANTASTIC!!!! AWSOME!!!! BRILLIANT!!!! Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for following this all the way through.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much - really makes my day to know my writing is so well received.  You rock!

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 02/05/07 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 15

That was totally BRILLIANT!!! I'm glad you are explaining what happened to the 'other' Dean too, cause I was wondering. 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 15

Wow. I didn't see that coming. It does make sense, though, that poor Dean even in a "perfect" world would have to suck it up and be the good soldier. I love that Dean's friends exist in the "real" world. You've really done a great job with all the little details of this story. I'm sad that it's almost over, but looking forward to the epilogue.

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wait til Sam finds out what actually happened!!!! This is brilliant!!

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 14

I wondered what Dean would find when he returned -- I like the fact that he returned to save Sam. I had forgotten he could pick the time and place.  Interesting that Sam wished Dean a life with a family and no hunting.  Can't wait to hear the discussion they have about it.  Excellent job!!  Jenny

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 14

I was worried this might be the last chapter, but you obviously have more in store for us - yeah!!!! Dying to know what Dean is mumbling....

Reviewer: Brittany (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 13

i cant wait till the next chapter. i've really enjoyed reading this story so far

 

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 13

EEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!! Please don't leave me waiting too long for more!!!!! 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 13

OMG!!!!! Just a stunningly fabulous chapter!!!! I don't think that I've ever read a chapter that fast. Great action - of course, I'm still dying to know if Dean will make it back to realSam.....

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 12

OMG!!! Is this gonna work??? Is the 'other' Sam alive??? Will Laura in this world find love with this world's Dean???? These & many more questions need to be answered ASAP!!!I'm loving this!!!!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 12

OH, I have a bad feeling about this... Will it really work? Will Sam be alive in the other world? Will Dean be alive in the other world? I knew that eventually Dean would not be able to reconcile his pride to having to ask for help. I'm definitely on the edge of my seat for this one.... Please post soon....

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 25/04/07 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

Another great chapter. I loved Dean's scars being emotional as opposed to physical even though they manifested that way. Buffy reference was hilarious. Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

Well, well, things begin to get very interesting! Dean in a wheelchair taking non-hunter Sammy on a hunt - yikes! I think things may go very wrong....

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

This just gets better & better!!!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh, poor Dean! Why can't anything ever be easy for him? Keep those chapters coming...

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

You are breaking my heart. What a great chapter. You do a great job of capturing all of the things Dean has missed. Will it be a fair trade off for his legs? Will he eventually start to really realize that he will never have the active life that he was used to? Will he soon get bored with normal? Can't wait to find out....

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is such a great concept for a story - parallel universe/parallel story. But Dean has to get back to "real" Sam. But is "real" Sam still alive? I'm starting to worry about him. And when will Dean's situation finally come crashing down on him? He is afterall a very active guy in both universes and he is paralyzed...

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 6

Evil, evil cliffy! Is there anything better than a stoic Dean? Love Mary's discovery of Dean's scars. If that doesn't completely seal Sammy's belief in an AU nothing will. Atlas is a great touch too. Looking forward to more....

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!!!! This has me on the edge of my seat too!!!! What a predicament!!! More soon please.

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