Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

HELLL NOOOO!!!

Damn, if i can request one thing. I am one official LOYAL reader to your work, besides two others. I love this story and i was wondering if i can possibly get a copy of this story.

i just recently lost two important human beings in life and i have not quite gotten over it. maybe for one for i ihave been able to see and speak with her.

im sorry, since the age of four i have been able to sense things, feel presence of entities and even speak to them. im a natural born freak sorry.

i don't tell many the things i can do that others can't. I have lost many and been hurt by many for being able to do this. these beings come to me. . .i don't ask them to come to me they jsut do and many of those old friends thought that i was able to do . . .something. . .so they got upset becuase i was not able to reach their family or whatever.

anyways, i leave you my email for if you are willing to send me a copy. if it would be okay with you if i do get a copy. . .i would like to read this and many more to my SUNSHINE SIS. . .that is up there ahead of sceduale without me or my brother.

She was his one and only TRUE GIRL, that was there and that is two of the major yernings and wantings for this copy if possible so i could read this to them . . .for once my brother was SAM and JESSICA was my ANGELIC KORINA. . .I MISS HER. . .very much and this story just made me feel much more closer then anyone can ever sense or feel so thank you for your GOD given work in writting. Keep up with the good work LOL.

RATING:PEACEFUL AND ANGELIC

lamix1mana@yahoo.com

 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 11

This should be more then a story, it should have beeen a part of the series of SUPERNATURAL. . .

This story not only protray's and judges Bobby,Mary,Dean, Sam; but more importantly John to show finaly that hidden mask that was behind the original scolding, hard core marine in action of takeing care of his one and only family.

this one hit hard core with more then action, thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

till the never ending story.

the compusore of sam is scaring me. the twist and turn of dean was marvelously done.

how spirtual Bobby was when speaking in an authorized voice of concern to sam.

please keep Dean and Sam together as one.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

man, even the ol' man had doughts on him. what a huge ass jerk.

this is his soon you tood stool.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/05/10 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 5

this is hospitality in of course SUPERNATURAL FORM.

i do like the verations of how Sam was getting depleated by Louise cooking and makeing him try to feel better.

an outstanding overview of how the torment of his brother was going through hell and Dean was able to mimick his father for being a jerk to Sam when he went to collage.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/05/10 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 3

i love the ending critic that you left now its all in SUSPENSE!!!. . .Please tell me more.

I do enjoy the monolog between Dean and Sam "chick flick moment" their is a main concer though. . .what would a spirit keep return for?

 i do find it touching how you elaborataed the facts or not in regards to cartell of Al Capone.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/05/10 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

she is to me resembling the woman in white, but different.

let us hope that this incedent dosen't happen again. for if it does, then sam will get his rear end kicked and it wont be by his brother or uncles bobby.

it is as if she is a becon for him. . .she is representing to him jess, and sam as to her late husband. now maybe it will easy and factor the situation between both couples.

though i don't like the action that sam is doing in order to make contact with her. she is dangerous. i do loveingly approve of this story thanks.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 04/10/09 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

Poor Dean, still not quite believing that Sam was back from the dead until he heard that little "Ow" when he dropped his brother. Could picture him quickly scooping Sam back up again and holding him so tightly that Sam couldn't breathe properly - lol.

And that was lovely that Sam and John got to clear the air between them. Nice moment when John caught Sam before he hit the floor and just cradled his son for a while.

Gotta love Bobby, though, keeping his head while the ambulatory Winchesters were lost in the emotions. And that was a nice little sharing moment with John telling Sam how it was for him losing Mary - really, John was the only one who could help Sam through Jess' death.

Loved the image of Dean trying to feed a very reluctant Sam and getting syrup all over him - LOL.

And I really love the fact that the title of the story could be taken two ways - Jess waiting for Sam in the afterlife, and Dean waiting for him in the here and now.

Great job, Vonnie.

Ooh, and look! I beat Sabine to review! ROFL!!!!!!!

Jules

Author's Response: You win first prize for beating Sabine, although I didn't know it was a contest.Hopefully she is still sleeping right now. I'm so glad to hear from you again and I love your review again. Now I can go to bed happy. I too felt that John would be the one to help Sam, he's been there. And You are right, I wanted Sam to know Jess is waiting for him, just as much as Dean is. He had to make the decision to live for Dean because Dean couldn't go on without him, while for Jess time wasn't an issue, she would be there, waiting for him when his time comes. Thanks for reading this story and for all your support and kind words. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 12

This was about the most wonderful coming back I can think of, really felt like Sam was coming home to Dean - always in the end I believe, cause Dean is the most important person in Sam's life. Touching and amazing gift Jess made them, sacrificing the chance to stay with her love for giving the brothers back to each other, some great girl! The moment Sam felt his brother's pain, his decision was made and I just wished Dean would know how much he is loved. What it meant to him was very evident though - "His hands were shaking as he finally reached out and it took him several times before he was able to make contact with Sam's face. When it finally happend though, this face lit up and he took a deep breat of relief. "Sammy..." This image I won't forget, it's one of those rare blessed moments in life you are completely happy. Beautifully written, thank you so much, can't stop smiling!


Author's Response: Thank you so much, I just love your review. I'm so glad you feel the same way I felt when I wrote this. It feels good to make you smile after making you cry in the last chapter. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/09 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 11

Haunting and beautiful all at once, so amazing it hurts! I think as much this chapter made me cry it is my favorite one, it shows so perfectly the very essence of Sam's and Dean's bond - with the wonderful flashbacks (and I would just love to see a wee!story for each scene!) and most of all Dean's actions, how he held his brother and listened to his heartbeat, desperately trying to hold the connection, stunning! For Dean this really must have felt like his whole world ended, he's so much more than just Sam's brother, a parent for Sam from the beginning too and I do believe there is nothing worse in this life than to lose your child and in these boys' case your other half ("They needed one another, because they were part of each other" - so very true!). Overwhelming!

Author's Response: Like always, your review made my day. I think this chapter is my favorite to. I work with dying patients and their families everyday and I wanted to put some of my own emotions into this chapter.Dean's bond with his brother, the desperate attempt to hold on him him is just a little part of this. I also put a lot of me in there. As a mother, loosing a child would be the absolute worst. I'm just glad you like it so much and thought it wasn't just sad, but also beautiful. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 9

Awww, geez.....I've got tears in my eyes after that ending....

So, that was why Sam kept being reminded of Jess - she was trying to communicate to him that it was really her, not Louisa like his tortured mind conjured up. And they're in a sort of limbo between life and death. 

That matches what Bobby's seeing in the physical, with the slow deterioration of Sam's body. 

And oh, no - Sam's decided that he can't go through losing Jess a second time. Hopefully he'll remember in time that his brother really needs him, and will turn around. But it's going to be a hard call. Will Sam be strong enough, or will he succumb to the lure of an eternity with his Jessica, away from the pain and the fear and the devastating loss?

*drags box of tissues closer*.....just in case.....

Jules

Author's Response: It is going to be difficult for Sam to come back and I know only Dean can make him. Bobby is very observant and I chose to let him be the objective person here. It's hard on him, because he is just as emotionally involved, but he knows he has to be strong for the Winchesters. Thanks for another awesome review. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 7

At first I was just as angry at John as Dean was, and the sudden appearance of the Winchester patriarch in the doorway of the motel had my jaw dropping as well. Let's hope he's not too late. 

That was an awww moment when John sat on the edge of the bed and held Sam in his arms. And thanks for that little peek into the past with John and baby Sammy. Stubborn Winchester, just like John - Mary was a wise woman! 

And oh, Sam, he's just getting deeper and deeper, isn't he? And nothing he can do seems to be convincing Louisa that she's the one who is wrong. It's scary that all these memories of Jess are just making him feel more sympathetic towards the ghost's plight, though. 

Poor Dean - standing by helpless while his little brother just fades slowly away. 

Jules

Author's Response: Thanks again, you are so right, Sam is slipping away. I love to do flashbacks, it gives me a chance to write some weechester and also explain some things. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/09 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

Endlessly sad, when Sam thinks Dean would be better off without him, he doesn't have a reason anymore to go back and it seems Jess doesn't know what to do to convince him. It really breaks my heart to see that Sam gave up and what it will do to Dean I don't even want to imagine, it will break him completely. But I still hope Sam will sense somehow what he means to his brother and how much he is loved and needed, he truly is! As always love how wonderfully you write these very emotional moments, you have a great talent to catch the atmosphere.

And to add this here, I'm almost glad I didn't have time before to review, hopefully I won't have to wait that long for the next chapter this way, cause I have to know if our boys will make it, they just have to!! LOL, Sabine

Author's Response: Thanks for this wonderful compliment. I sometimes just get lost in my own emotions. You are so right, Sam needs to go back or it's going to be the end for Dean. Hugs, Vonnie