Nice to get some background on how and when Tom became a hunter.

The episode with Mrs. Miller is a good bump in the plot.  Sometimes it's nice to read about problems that aren't completely paranormal.

I'm glad that when all four children are together that they are able to be children.  Also glad that their fathers notice it.

This makes so much sense.  John pushes hunting on Dean because it's his only connection to the boy he used to have.  You give so much depth and heart to your characters!

I really loved this story.  You've done a fantastic job!  I really love how you can see the person Dean will become in the Dean you've written.  Same with Kerri.  Fantastic.

wonderful chapter ! Sad to see this story ending. Great Dean/Kerri relationship, nice introduction of Bobby's character... Feel free to do a sequel anytime, because, the Winchesters can make a few visits right, and that would make a few sequels, till you catch up with "Eternal"...

Author's Response: thank you so much, i am actually planning on another one already, about the second time they meet. 

hey, devon

great !like always!!!!

good point to bring some kerri background!

i have a question?: kerri is ganna tell what she saw that nigh. or not????   to have a idea! of her actitude???

anyway, good work! and i love young kerri! oh yeah!!!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much. to the question, i am not too sure yet. i can tell you that no, she will never tell tom, john, Sam, Evelyn, or Dean, but i still may have her tell the audience just so everyone can know. i do have it all outlined, so she may tell the audience in the next chapter, but the other character wont know. 

I'm not sure what else I can say, this is yet another terrific layer to Dean and Kerri's relationship.  Thanks K

lovin the story hurry with the next chapter hate the store owner funny when Sam cursed at the lady

Cool - love how this is a companion to the previous chapter. Ending is a little ominous though - let me guess, John will factor into bursting Dean's bubble...

Author's Response: well, john has a way of bursting the bubble without knowing it.  he tries, he really does, but he gets a little too cuaght up in things that dont involve his children. thank you so much for the review, i am glad you liked it, and that it matched the last chapter. 

that's a greeeaaat story ! I was so happy to see you updated. I like little Dean, and Kerri, and can't wait to see you bring Bobby in. Update asap please.

Author's Response: thank you so much. this story really is taking on a life of its own.  and to think, the first chapter was originally all it was going to be. 

I'm leaving for Wyoming right now to go and punch Mrs. Miller out!!!! Awesome chapter. As always, it is so nice to have a sympathetic view of John. This is my thoughts on him too. He really did do the best he could under truly brutal circumstances. Love the Sammy-scowl for his Dea...

Author's Response: oh yes, Sadie miller is a b***h.  and there will be more of her and her husband in later chapters. i gotta say, i love john, i think he is just awsome. and baby sammy, just too cute for words. 

HEY, where were u????

like always fantastic!

waiting for more!please .  how many ch. are left????????   i love the story about that two kids.(kerri& dean)

:)   keep going. u can do it! yes u do!!!! 

Author's Response: sorry, i have still been busy with work, plus there have been a bunch of birthdays and a baby shower(for my friend).  i dont really know how many chapters are left, this was originally just a one shot. so it is just flowing. but most of my stories end up around 17 chapters.  

thank you so much for the review. :)