Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very powerful! The love the father and son have for one another is obvious.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - glad it came across, this is my first drabble attempt and I worried that it would make sense!!!! Cheers for the support. Abi
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awww! Another heartbreaking drabble. So said and touching - awesome job!
Author's Response: Thankyou Rae! Glad you liked it. Abi
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 22/06/09 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Aw - you did a wonderful job on your first drabble -- Very nice!
Author's Response: Thanks Ash! That's appreciated, especially since I am admiring the work you are doing with drabbles in 'Turn the Page'. Cheers Abi.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 20/06/09 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, now this is a different sort of Father's Day tale, very true to character, for both of them. And I just know that the words that ended up on the cutting room floor are between the last 2 sentences, when John beats the tar out of whoever backhanded his son. Well done (and kind of rare at the same time)!* Sue *Sorry, I got on a real men eat beef kick and tried for a really bad pun.
Author's Response: ;-) Thanks Sue, Thank you for the kind review and the Pun - not that bad really!!!LOL! The words that were cut ... not as exciting as your imagination I'm afraid, lots of descriptive ! But John absolutely DID hand out a little retribution. I am flattered you think this was in character, thanks for your time. Abi
Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like it. I like it a lot. It's very Winchester. :)
Author's Response: Thank You! I am glad you liked it. I figured if you lead the Winchester lifestyle holiday sentiments are communicated slightly differently. Cheers Abi.
Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awww, your author's note was so sweet. Loved the image of John kicking butt (I imagine) for people hurting Dean. I liked that Dean getting hurt is what got his attention. Nice first drabble, good job compressing a scene into just 100 words--it's ALWAYS hard, LOL, but there is that feeling of accomplishment at the end.
Author's Response: Hi, Thanks for your kind review, especially s your piece was pure awesomeness and right on the money with it's characterization. Butt kicking, action-Johnny, is exactly what I was aiming for - so glad that worked, and although I do sometimes have a problem with his character not being able to tell his Sons from his Soldiers, I do see him caught out by the path he has chosen. Thanks again. Abi.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Quite an intense drabble, good first one, and your personal bit? I had a little tear in my eye! Sweet... Jacq
Author's Response: ;-) Thanks Jacq, I find it hard to stay away from the intense (managed it once!!!;-> ) guess that means I need to take things less seriously??? (Angst Junkie!! LOL!) *Blush* My A/N? Yeah, my Dad will probably never see that, though my brothers and Mum may - it needed saying.... or rather (as I am a CHIKEN- writing!!!) Cheers for the review , the stars and your time!! Abi.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
A great first drabble, so like Dean to stick up for his dad.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - great encouragement!! As is getting to read all the other takes on "Fathers Day" - some very inspiring pieces out there. Yeah Dean's loyalty to his Father - for me - is beyond question, John knew that whatever had happened, Dean would have been by his side. Thanks for taking the time. ;-) Abi.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Now I REALLY want to see what John "doesn't recall much" :) Good job!
Author's Response: Heee Hee Hee!!! That's sweet - thanks for your interest, and taking time to read and review this. John seeing red - hmmm I see a can opening ... I believe it's labeled "Whoop Ass"!!!! ;-> Cheers again for the thumbs up!! Abi
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Aw!! Good ol' Dean standing up for his daddy. ^^ Very heart-warming.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Trying to get the hang of this drabble thing - tougher than it looks!!! Appreciate the review!!! ;-> Glad you liked it!!! Abi
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