Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 10:43 AM · On: The truth is sometimes hidden by the lie
Very good chapter, a lone figure, looking forward to finding out what it is.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Yep :D Long figure waiting... watching and waiting.
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 01:10 AM · On: The truth is sometimes hidden by the lie
Great story so far..I love your Dean stories. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm definitely a Dean girl at more than just heart. *hugs him tightly* oh yeah, love me some Dean. Thanks again!!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 10:03 PM · On: The truth is sometimes hidden by the lie
OOOOhhhhhh ominous lone figure dude... and disappearing in a blink... Demon? Spirit? what??? cant wait to find out whats messing with Dean's head.. Loved the role reversal here. It was listening to Dean tell Sam in BUABS how they would figure it out- that it COULDNT have been Sam. Loving this so far!
Author's Response: ^_^ I thought it was about time to start introducing other possible suspects and a lone mysterious figure seemed as good as any. It's really strange that you should mention BUABS because I keep thinking of that episode whilst writing this and I keep trying to get a mention of it in there but no luck of that just yet. ^_^ Thanks so much for reading Tree! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 07:04 PM · On: The truth is sometimes hidden by the lie
Gahh, the building tension within Dean as to whether he is guilty is killing me. Fantastic internal torment! I love Sam's completely unwavering belief and determination, perfectly balancing along side Dean's absolute condemnation of himself. But, don't for one second think you've got me fooled...almost making it seems as though this chapter didn't end on a dramatic note or clif. Dean's fallen into another agonizing nightmare hasn't he? That's the most dramatic ending yet. Keep em coming...I'm getting the shakes. x
Author's Response: I was slowly moving away from the guilty factor seen as most people were definitely in denial about it being possible >:D But the damn guy wanted to keep feeling responsible. Need to slap some sense into him and get down to business. And I do love writing Sam having that belief in him. It's kinda nice after all the heart break of season 4. I can barely bring myself to write anything from season 4 'cause I hate writing the pair at odds with each other... LMAO! *looks innocent* What? He's sleeping. :D The poor boy's tired. *evil grin* Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 06:13 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier not to see
Oh, how you slay me...and like it being the evil chick that you are :P This was a fantastic addition, some great descriptives through out. But somehow, his stomach managed to find a few bits and pieces that it wanted rid of -- dude, rofl, I shouldn't even be laughing. Great cliffies as usual but thankfully, the next chap is up.
Author's Response: Me? Evil? >:D I've been having great fun writing this one so far and playing around with the descriptions, it's a nice break from knowing exactly what's going to happen in the next chapter and how many words I need for this and that... very nice break. And yesh... cliffies are love... as is Prototype :D Which I really wanna play now ^_^
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/09 10:47 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier not to see
Damn, Rae, I am trying to figure out how you are gonna get poor Dean out of this one, but I'm coming up blank and that really just bugs the hell out of me...damn you!! Awesome job building the suspense! Get writing!!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading B! I have a plan :D A considerably evil plan... but you know what they say, the best laid plans of mice and writers... ^_^ Thanks again B!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 06:53 AM · On: Sometimes it's easier not to see
Well things are looking pretty bad for Dean. Great chapter,looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Yeah, things are gonna get even worse soon when things really start to unfold. >:D
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 12:13 AM · On: Sometimes it's easier to disbelieve
Oh, the suits!! I love the suits!!! How did i miss this being posted?? Loving the angst, Rae, and am dying to see where you are headed with this. Awesome as usual. Bambers;)
Author's Response: I just love the idea of those two boys in suits... it's too damn sexy. And those coats... gah!! Thanks B! I'm loving writng this one :D
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 10:15 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier not to see
AHHH! Dang it! You weren't kidding when you said you had plans for the knife! Oh, man, Dean is in TROUBLE! Oh no! :) This of course means you're doing a great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So glad you're enjoying. ^_^ Yep, things are going to get pretty bad and it's gonna take awhile before they start getting better again. >:D
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 08:00 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier not to see
OMG!Dean's nightmare came true, it's not bode well for him. Riveting, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^_^ Yes, things start coming together to form the beginning of something sinister... *insert evil cackle* This is only the start >:D
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 07:24 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier not to see
Things are looking so bad for Dean!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! I have one warning, things are gonna get worse before they get better.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 07:07 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier to disbelieve
Sam got a great idea, what is the best way to research than putting a suit on, flashing a badge and getting easily information about what happened to that girl. I can't wait to know what they'll find.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading :D Yeah, figured that getting out there would be much more productive ^_^
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 07:28 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier to disbelieve
I missed a couple chapters of this... but I'm glad I spotted it (note to self to fave it...lol) Anyway- totally love where you've taken this so far. It totally has shades of Sam's first vision in Home... the confusion, the pain... Yet after everything the guys have been through- it cant be something as simple as that... Can't wait to see where this develops and I totally love the interaction in the dialogue.
Author's Response: Lol, thanks Tree!! I'm really enjoying writing this story so far, it's great to take a break and play with a new story for awhile so it should be fun, hopefully. Yeah, I have plans - slightly evil plans for the brothers, and particularly Dean. >:) The visions are just the start of it. ^_^ Thanks again! I'm so glad you like it so far, hopefully it won't disappoint.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 06:24 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier to disbelieve
I love the show of desperation you've created between the brother's. Very awesome chapter, but if I'm honest, I wasn't expecting anything less. You rawk! Oh yeah, small but funny note, I looved that little part with Dean considering a fake lurch to play a joke on Sam. I laughed out loud when he realized it wouldn't be a good idea. -So yeah, no mock lurching. Lmao! I'll try not to jump you randomly and demand another update for my 666 fix. :D <333
Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you so much! You always make me blush! :D He he, I just love teasing people when they're hovering - always fun. So glad you liked that bit :D lol I shall get to work on some more very soon ^_^ I have these images of the next chapter circling around in my head so I can't wait to get them down.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 04:13 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier to disbelieve
A very good chapter, i can't wait to find out more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! ^_^
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 02:57 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier to disbelieve
I am seriously worried about Dean here. This is not a good scenario if his knife really does turn out to be the murder weapon. You've got quite an interesing mystery going on here!
Author's Response: *evil grin* I have plans for that knife >:D Thanks so much for reading. Glad you're enjoying ^_^
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 12:00 PM · On: Sometimes it's easier to disbelieve
Your killing me here Rae! What's hapening with poor Dean? Can't wait to find out so, this one's going to fav. I'm loving this one! Dany
Author's Response: Hey Dany! Thanks so much for reading ^_^ So glad you're enjoying so far, hopefully it won't take too long to update. Thanks again!!
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 03:38 PM · On: A whisper of a lie, a shadow of the truth
Post more chapters. This is good, and I want to find out what is going on with Dean.
Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you so much for reading!! Gonna get working on more chapters v. soon - I promise :D
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 03:22 PM · On: To dream a dreamer's dream
Oh poor Dean what's going to happen to him?!
Author's Response: Torment, torture and a whole lotta angst - well, hopefully anyway >:D
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 03:04 PM · On: To sleep perchance to dream
Oh no what is going on with Dean and who is this girl that he is dreaming about?!
Author's Response: Heya! Thanks for reading! :D
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:16 AM · On: To sleep perchance to dream
VERY intriguing! Dean dreaming of killing someone and then they are missing...not a good sign...Very intrigued...will check in for the other chapters later as I have this mini person distracting me...which makes it take like half an hour to read a chapter! Great job capturing Dean's angst at the thought that he may be a murderer...or..that he could dream such a thing...
Author's Response: He he, mini person. Thank you so much for reading Gen! ^_^ Hopefully you'll enjoy the angst that's to come. Ahh, gotta love angst :D THANK YOU!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 09:56 AM · On: A whisper of a lie, a shadow of the truth
Another amazing and intense chapter, I'm so in love with this idea that I can barely keep myself in check. lol Lots of Dean anxiety and protective, rational Sam. I love it! Thanks for the bday shout out, chick xxx
Author's Response: Thanks so much Schelz! So glad you're still enjoying it :D Yey! I'm really enjoying the thrill of writing this one.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 10:08 AM · On: A whisper of a lie, a shadow of the truth
Poor Dean, i can't wait to find out whats happening to him.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Hopefully more to come soon.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/06/09 09:36 PM · On: A whisper of a lie, a shadow of the truth
What's going on with Dean. Not only he's a wreck emotionally but something wrong with him physically. Rae, you know how to keep us guessing, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Oh yep, I've got something nasty in store for Dean - poor guy, all he does is save lives and us fanficcers just keep putting him through hell. Thanks so much for reading!! ^_^
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 22/06/09 07:50 PM · On: A whisper of a lie, a shadow of the truth
Another enthralling chapter. I'm at a loss for anything constructive right now. Looking forward to the next installment as always. ^^
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks so much for reading ^_^ So glad you're still enjoying :D
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