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Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/06/09 08:44 AM · On: What is a father/dad?

Hmmm... I have a feeling that Dean is the dad in this essay and John the father. Well done!

Author's Response:

Hi there

I have a feeling that you might be right! Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 02:01 AM · On: What is a father/dad?

Like it very much.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 11:59 PM · On: What is a father/dad?

Ooo, he DOES have both in his life!  It took me awhile to figure it out, but I finally got it. Well done! 

Author's Response:

Hi there

He does, doesn't he? Glad you got it!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 08:26 PM · On: What is a father/dad?

Aw - Very good one here, Mary! -- Yes, Sam definitely has issues, but with that upbringing, who can blame him?

Little does teacher know, but Sam literaly was speaking of two different people! - Good job!



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you very much, Sam does have issues with his dad, but your right, his upbringing has a lot to do with that.

Yeah, the teacher was closer to hitting it on the head than she realised.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 05:02 PM · On: What is a father/dad?

Wonderful, loved it.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks Lindsay! Mary xx

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 12:41 PM · On: What is a father/dad?

Love that

Author's Response: Thank you, Mary x

Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 10:33 AM · On: What is a father/dad?

Aw! Very well done! I like how Sammy separated the two, also.

Well thought out. I like it!



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you, glad you liked, Mary xx

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 09:30 AM · On: What is a father/dad?

Loved itXXXX


Author's Response: Thank you, Mary xx

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 06:36 AM · On: What is a father/dad?

Jonh is a father, Dean is a dad. Is there anything left to say?

Great as allways, loved it!



Author's Response:

Hi there

Got it in one! And there really isn't anything more than you can say to that is there? Thanks.

Cheers Mary x

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