Reviewer: Mickie28 (Signed) · Date: 27/11/08 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 8
Such a sweet story. Grammer and punctuation needs work but even the greats have editors to help with that. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thanks, Mickie, I have to say I agree with you completely this one was a bit of a mess, thankfully I've managed to pick the brains of several great betas since then and have improved a bit. I would love to someday go back over it and get it up to par. Glad you still enjoyed the story - Kel ;)
Reviewer: Huey Riley (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hey Kel;) This was a great read, original idea. I'm starting to like wee'chester! I liked the constant change between now and then. Corey x
Author's Response: Too sweet, thanks Corey, though you're really trolling through my older stuff...lol. Hope you're doing well, and I'll catch you around the site - Kel
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
Sweet ending.
Author's Response: Glad you liked and thanks so much for the reviews. It's always great to hear people's thoughts. Thanks for reading - Kel
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 4
The pranks you put in are priceless and very Winchester!
Author's Response: So glad you liked.. I'm not much of a prankster myself so I'm glad they worked..lol. Happy to see your still enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like the intrigue that is building up. Questions, questions....
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying so far, hopefully it'll hold your interest. Thanks for taking the time to review - Kel
Reviewer: Candice (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 8
Again another excellent story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, though not the best by any standards I always really loved this one. So glad you enjoyed - Kel
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
*Sighs* Is it really over? The best ending I could've hoped for. That was a helluva rescue eh? I really felt for the boys when they had to leave afterwards. What about the letter? What did it say? You Big Tease!!! *Claps with approval* Loved this story to bits Kel, beautiful ending. Schelz xxx
Author's Response: Thanks so much Schelz and I'm really glad you enjoyed, this was written a while ago and though rough, I've always loved the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review - Thanks
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
Love this chapter kel. He locked her up??? Cruel bastard...deserves a beating for the state he left poor Grace in. At least we can count on the boys to rescue her;) I knew John would come through, I love him!!! Ahh, The winchesters *Sighs* My heroes.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chappy. 'So who's beating her and why don't you have the balls to stop them?' Dean asked harshly---gotta love Dean's brash behavior. Poor Grace;( John can be so darn harsh sometimes but I can't help but love him, I have the same blind faith as Dean. He'll come through....I hope, he will won't he??? Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
Love your style Kel, its like reading two different stories that mesh beautifully as one;) I love Grace in this chapter, she means business!!! where the pranks are concerned, I have to say the best retaliation is no retaliation, so clever! Dean will be on edge for ages now. Hehehehe Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love the transition from past to present. So sweet how Sam and Grace play hide n seek in the library, living dangerously I see. Lol Love the brotherly love at christmas;) Excellent come back from Dean...hilarious!!! Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
Another great chapter, I was smiling the whole way through. Love the HOT bacon burger for Dean--go Sam! Hope he enjoys his victory coz I know it won't last long. Lol Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 2
What an adorable chapter, Sam's excitement over getting to attend the same school as Dean was oh so sweet! Schelz
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love the start of this, love how Sam bargained with John for Dean to stay in one school;) Schelz
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
Some of the transitions from past to present were a little rough. Nice story, I was interested to see who this person is & what her relationship is w/ the boys (Dean particularly). I got to say that your writing was good, pretty solid. I become disinterested in the original character and found myself unable to continue with the story past chapter 7 (6 or 7). When she yelled at John, I don't know, it just seemed to unreal to me & kind of Mary Sue-ish. You did portray the brothers (both current & past) very well.
Author's Response: Hey sorry this one didn't get it done for you. It was actually one of the first stories I'd ever written, so I know it was a bit rough. Thanks for taking the time to let me know your thoughts..K
Reviewer: sammylover (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wonderful is all I can say.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, this was one of my first stories so it's a bit rough, but it's also one of my favorites, I so appreciate that you enjoyed it and reviewed, thanks so much - K
Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 8
One of the best I've ever read!!!! Congrats ~kika
Author's Response: Thanks so much, this is one of my all time favorites....Glad you enjoyed thanks for taking the time to review. - K
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great work bringing another genuinely interesting character to life. I have to say theat I love reading EVERYTHING you write. You have a true knack at capturing these characters! Keep it up I am hooked you're my new favorite author!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. It means the world knowing you guys enjoy these stories. - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
very nicely done. A happy end from time to time can't hurt...
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great story - loved the happy ending. But.... what did Dean say in his letter?
Author's Response: Gotta use the old imagination. Sorry. :)
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
Another superb update! I am really enjoying this story! More soon please! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Here you go Kayla hope the ending works for you :)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
hey, two good chapters here, looking forward to learn more about the past and present events...
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying I'm thinking two more ought to wrap it up nicely. KW
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 6
Two great chapters. I knew there was something not quite right with that cop! It's no wonder Dean has no respect for "authority" figures. Hopefully, John will come to his senses and help...? Loved the scene in which Dean gives it to the doc with both barrels.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 5
I am loving it, and I am looking forward to another chapter! Great job! ~Kayla
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 4
hahahahahaha! White chicklets, indeed! Great chapter. Is the cop possibly going to be connected to Grace's bruise in some way? Or are we looking at two potentially large problems for Dean? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh, Dean's about two have quite a few problems. Stay tuned.
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