Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
An excellent drabble! So beautifully written that I could see it in my mind. Kripke should have added a scene like this in the series.
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you. I could see it as I wrote it too. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Damn you! Breaking my heart like that! So sweet and sad... poor Dean.
Author's Response: Hi Rae Sorry. *hands over glue* Poor Dean indeed, got to love him. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, how very sad. Lovely, though
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you, Mary xx
Reviewer: akumabarai (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. That was fantastic. I loved the line "A smile graced his face even as the tears filled his eyes..." A very true, very real moment.
Author's Response: HI there Thank you so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. I liked that line too. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awww, this was just heartbreaking. What a wonderful idea, Dean calling his dad's phone to hear his voice and leave a message for him on Father's Day. Fitting somehow, too, that he'd delete it right after. The last line was especially poignant. Poor Dean, I wanted to cry for him. Really great job!
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you, I'm glad you liked this. It would be nice if you could still hear your loved ones after they were gone, I sometimes think that is why Dean keeps his dad's phone. The last line says a lot of how he feels. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
very good!! it's so sad to see the suffering dean causes himself just by hearing his dad's voice. that man manufactures guilt bu the second. ::pets dean::
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you. Dean was carrying so much guilt about John, wasn't he? And you're right he does manufature guilt, I never really thought about it that way before. *pets Dean too* Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
So sad! :( this stole a tear from me, I have to admit it...very emotional and very heart wrenching. Thanks for sharing x
Author's Response: Hi there It stole one from my too as I was writing it so you are not alone. I wanted to show that Dean misses John, even with all his faults, he's still his dad. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is just so Dean to me, especially the instant erasure of his message. Great job! Sue
Author's Response: Hi there I could see Dean doing this in my head as I wrote it, and he wouldn't want Sam to hear the message so I think he would delete it. Get it out and move on. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Dottyoz (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just found this so very touching and heartbreaking. I need to go and hug my Dad now.
Author's Response: Hi there Thank you, I wish I still could still hear/hug mine sometimes too but that is life. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was wonderful, and hits home because my mother-in-law still keeps her husband's phone message, and plays through it just to hear his voice too.
Author's Response: Hi there I've got an old video tape of my parents that I watch sometimes and my dad was in my wedding video too. It's nice to have something like that. Thanks, Mary x
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Mary, Great drabble, hearing that voice again, both heartbreaking and reassuring. Well done. Crystal
Author's Response: Hi there I would love to hear/see John again too! Glad you liked, Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
A beautiful drabble, loved the idea of leaving a text.
Author's Response: Hi Lindsay Thanks! It was a voicemail honey but I know where you're coming from. Mary x
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