Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 08:19 PM · On: Proud Father
Nice little drabble - makes me kinda sad, though. Not sure who I wanna feel sorry for. Wouldn't have thought to use Adam, either. Good job!
Author's Response: I think this is one of those situations where no one gets to be happy in the end. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 02:00 AM · On: Proud Father
Ack!!! I hate reminders of Adam. They make me so mad at John. And darn you for making the kid so sweet and likable. This was really bittersweet. I think I need to go cry now. Well done!
Author's Response: I didn't mean to make sad! But I'm not sorry either :) I didn't like what John did either, but I still love him. Thank you so much for reviewing! Julie
Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 09:34 AM · On: Proud Father
::grumbles:: this makes me not like john. i get why he didn't tell the boys about adam, but still, the secrecy! but very well done. i like it!
Author's Response: I DO like John. He was imperfect, and wrong in so many ways, but he was also a hero. It's what makes him interesting. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 08:06 AM · On: Proud Father
Man that hurts, to see a moment where John lied, denying Sam and Dean a truth they deserved. I also felt sorry for Adam too...another son is not nothing, he dismissed Adam and the boys, its so sad. Thanks for sharing x
Author's Response: Oh, I agree. I thought it was incredibly cruel of John to not tell the boys about Adam- and vice versa. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Dottyoz (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 11:47 AM · On: Proud Father
It's somehow comforting that John didn't answer Adam's calls either but still so sad that he never told Dean and Sam about him. Good angle on the drabble, I hadn't even considered Adam's point of view.
Author's Response: I love John, but he is definitely a flawed hero. It's what makes him so interesting. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 10:56 PM · On: Proud Father
Oh, really interesting idea, there, Primrose. Makes me wonder what Dean caught in John's expression, that made him ask if everything was okay. Sue
Author's Response: I wondered that too! I played with descriptions of what his expression would be, but nothing worked. I think it was just one of those unreadable combinations of a lot of feelings, which is why Dean noticed. Thank you for your review! Julie
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 08:06 PM · On: Proud Father
Interesting that Adam got "normal" (ball games and such) and Sam and Dean didn't. I like how you continued that.
Author's Response: I always thought that was incredibly unfair of John, even though I understand why he did it. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 06:24 PM · On: Proud Father
Hey Primrose I get to leave you a review for a change! I like that it was Adam you chose, a little outside of the box thinking by picking the third son. Nice. I liked this and freakily enough I had just posted something of a similar nature when I read this...well it was a phone message thingy at least! Thanks for this, Mary x
Author's Response: Hi, Mary! I am so happy to see your review- thank you! I was wracking my brain trying to come up with something for this challenge, and it finally hit me to try Adam at 3 in the morning one night. The phone angle comes naturally of course because that's the only way the boys communicated with John except for just a few episodes. It's a HUGE part of their relationship with their father. If you're interested, I have a few stories that are longer than a hundred words too. I was trying some more out-of-the-box thinking for them, and I was pleased with the results. They're So You Want to Hear a Story, Playing Orpheus, and Omie Wise. I'm excited to see what you've written too. See you there! Julie
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 04:52 PM · On: Proud Father
A drabble and a tag sort of, in one. I could imagine that happening, good one
Author's Response: Thank you! I could picture this happening too- how John managed to keep that secret is beyond me, but they have all been very good at secrets. I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 03:22 PM · On: Proud Father
A very good drabble.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I haven't done much with drabbles before, and they are not as easy as they look, that's for sure! I'm glad you liked it!
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