Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
I'm so excited! Something heavy going on here. A curse? Hoo doo? And who is the woman from the previous chapter?
Author's Response: Oh my! - You're awesome, girl! - And, yeah- some bits of all that - ;) The woman from the previous chapter is the same from many of the previous chapters - (um- bwahahahah!..?) I guess it's all an enigma, but I'm still trying to see it from the reader's pov - Um- anyway, new chapter in the coming next few days- Am pretty sure of that, I think..... (heh) BTW - Thank You So Much!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
I love the repetition of "but you’re here, and you just have to see her…" He's obviously obsessed.
Author's Response: Oh yes, poor Dean! - Really being put through the wringer on this one-- Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
Fantastic! I have to find out what happened and who is helping Dean.
Author's Response: Hmm - think it might take a little while to sort it all out - and is someone (or something!) actually helping Dean here...? Or is it just an illusion... hmmm..... I really appreciate the review, hun!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 7
Amazing! this is getting better with every chapter! I can't type fast enough to get to the next chapter.
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment - Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow! That got my heart pumping a bit fast.
Author's Response: Ahh - That was my goal ;) Thank you!!
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 23/07/09 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
aaaagh! A cliffhanger! I really hate those. :p
Author's Response: Aww, sorry about that, honey - And sorry about the delay for the next chapter -- It'll be soon, though- real soon -- Thanks so much for the R&R!!
Reviewer: downbythebay (Signed) · Date: 09/07/09 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh my my, such compact emotion really packs a punch.
Author's Response: Yes - I think emotion is one of the few things you can have play with in a drabble, & I'm glad you've noticed it on the page here - Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
Creepy! gotta find out if the bald man is good or evil.
Author's Response: I know- ahem, eewwwww! -Maybe (or, like, not...) the next chapter will tell -- Love your reviews, though- Thank you very much!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
It was different and i loved it!
Author's Response: Yeah, so different that I had debated whether or not to put it out in the first place - but Cal (my Beta) said it worked, and so I went with it -- I really, really appreciate the review :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
Amazing that so few words can amp up the suspense so intensely. Incredible piece!
Author's Response: Wow! - You're way too kind, and I don't deserve it! - But I'm just eating the praise up anyway -- Thanks!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh my stars! what happened?! you're evil to keep me in suspense this way.
Author's Response: Bwahahahah - Evility is my trademark in this one - I thank you (from deep in my black heart, no less!) for the review :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! what happened? i'm rushing off to read more...
Author's Response: Ooh! - Glad you are! - First real genuine cliffie I'd ever written (and here, I'd only intended it as just a stand-alone drabble, heh...)
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 5
Wow - that is like distilled adrenalin. Tense stuff, it makes for a very convincing, I see it very clearly. Fantastic job with Dean's suffering and Sam's helplessness - don't know if I trust (so-NOT) Johnny- come - lately!!!!! Great up-date, worth the wait. Hope the RW stuff gets better! Abi.
Author's Response: Aw -- Thank you, Abi- Thank you! Another lovely review -- You are so kind, and so encouraging -- Appreciate it more than I can say!!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
Nice description of the spirit coming into being. Sorry to be dense - but are the quotes from the book the spirit was in? Is it a particular text? Still loving this - he different view points are so well done that they are recognizable even with the word constraint. Good job! Abi.
Author's Response: Oh yes - something in one of those old books is conjuring the thing here - as well as something in the boys' past -- hope to update again before this weekend, btw -- And thanks so much for the review- and the stars!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 3
Loving this - it's like droplets of honey. It works really well from both POV's. The intensity of what is happening is heightened by the less is more aspect of your drabble. Do you do this a lot, you have a real talent for it?! Who IS that shimmering chick?!!!!
Author's Response: "...Like droplets of honey...." Aww - I love that! Thank you for the wonderful review!! I'll be updating tomorrow :)
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loved; "his shallow breaths searing sharp shards of alarm through your ears" Loved the opposite responses the library draws from the boys - very in character!!! ;-) What's going on with Dean - cause it sounds really good ... you know in that bad way!!!!
Author's Response: Heheh -- Yeah, Dean's in a bit of a spot, I think -- R&R much appreciated!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/09 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Always in awe of people who can squeeze meaning out of words this way! Interesting challenge you have set yourself - great start, can't wait to see where it's going.
Author's Response: Oh- Thank you for the encouragement! -- It's great, considering your own stories are so awesome :)
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting.
Author's Response: Hi! - R&R much appreciated!
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/09 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
I hope that is a cliff hanger and there is another chapter to follow!
Author's Response: Oh yes- There is more to come, I assure you -- Thank you!
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