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Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 07:34 PM · On: Watched

I would leave more of a comment here, but I'm too eager to keep reading. See ya in the next chapter!

~Kayla

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 07:31 PM · On: Brave Young Man

oooohhh! What is it? You've got me hooked already!

~Kayla



Author's Response: :D Thanks

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 07:27 PM · On: Creaks

I loved the ending line! lol. Great job! Can't wait to read more!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Ooo, loads of nice little reviews from you to say thank you for. Thanks.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 04:56 PM · On: Dead boys can't talk

Nice Job, you can be proud. - K

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Angela Shelly (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 04:46 PM · On: The things we do for love

Wonderful! Very suspenseful and i like the flashbacks. Tastefully done!

Author's Response: Thank you again. Hope you keep enjoying.

Reviewer: Angela Shelly (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 04:20 PM · On: Dead boys can't talk

Ooooooh..... I like it. I reallly really like it.

*Shudders in excitement*

Darn you and all your talent! Will you write more?



Author's Response: Thank you! More coming.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 03:13 PM · On: I've got you

Great story so far, I love that Dean takes the bed between the closet and Sam - K

Author's Response: Thanks! It's one of his quirks that I see him having. :)

Reviewer: Deansno001grl (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 01:09 PM · On: The things we do for love

ooooo. this is getting even better by the moment. i hope Dean's ok. please update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! And update coming soon!

Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 24/04/07 02:06 AM · On: The things we do for love

Hey, this chapter was great :) i love the rhyme the monster was singing. how creative! lol. im angry at dean for going in the closet, but he just wanted to protect sammy. go dean! Keep up the great work :D

Author's Response: Thanks! One day protecting Sammy is going to get him into serious trouble, tsk tsk, oh well. >:D

Reviewer: peachblossom (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 10:09 PM · On: The things we do for love

DEAN!!!!  BAD, BAD, BAD PLAN!!!!!

Again, the monster is just so freakin' creepy!  I got chills when he was calling Dean in that sing-songy voice. 

I can't wait for John to rescue Dean and to see the aftermath of what he went through!

I LOVE this story!  You rock!



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks again! 

I hate to say it, but things are coming together now which means that yip, the rescue shall be soon!

I'm starting to get a soft spot for my little monster, is that wrong? lol.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 07:10 PM · On: The things we do for love

Boy oh boy is Sam gonna be mad! I can't wait for the next chapter, this story has completely sucked me in. I'll be away for the next few days, but I'll be back here to check on this story again ASAP!


Author's Response: Mad, yes, definately especially when he finds out he did it willingly. Thanks! Hope you're away for a good reason and you enjoy it!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 06:58 PM · On: The things we do for love

Another great chapter. But you're right - I'm screaming at Dean big time. NEVER open the damn closet door!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! He's just so stubborn, ain't he?

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 06:47 PM · On: The things we do for love

Dude- Screaming is an undertatement. NO DEAN NO - DONT GO NEAR THE CLOSET!!!  How did I know that Dean was just gonna have to walk into that freakin closet. And Sam - shoulda known better dude! Its probably too much to hope for that Dean's cell will work wherever that thing takes him. At least he went in armed this time.

 

 

 



Author's Response: I told them and I kept on telling them but they refused to listen to me. As for Dean's cell, well, he has it with him, whether it works or not... :) Thanks for the review and for your help.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 11:16 PM · On: Shell of a former self

I really like the notion that Dean may still have  innocence and purity -  because I don't think he's seeing things. It's usually Sam that is portrayed with a halo of innocence....it's nice to think that he might not be the only one!

Author's Response: Yeah, Sammy is normally the one with the halo of innocence, what with wanting to believe in good things as well as bad and wanting to give people chances. I think Dean has a different innocence and I love him for it, especially when he has that mischievious smile. Thanks again by the way!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 11:10 PM · On: Scratches

Liked the "or what?" parallels...and the whole chapter! Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 04:01 PM · On: Shell of a former self

 I'm really enjoying this story! I don't usually read stories of the youger Winchesters, but this is a nice mixture of their current and younger selves.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! There's just so many fanfics out there, it's fun going through them and I have a few faves of the wee!chester kind... anyway! Thank you!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 04:00 PM · On: Shell of a former self

   guess they're next room will have a chest of drawers... Well ok the drawer can of course host an evil imp ! No, seriously, i loooove this story. I'm leaving in a few hours for a four days trip to disneyland (ready for a probable overdose of fairy tales but what wouldn't i do for my little girl), so keep up the good work, i'll be back here in no time.

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy your trip! I love fairy tales, well, mainly the Grimm Brothers but as you have probably figured out by reading this story, I'm just twisted. Thanks by the way!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 03:02 PM · On: Shell of a former self

Oh Rae - Dean doesnt think he has any innocence yet- thats just soooo sad to me. God you have him so broken in a way!

I hope that since Sammy knows the damn thing wants Dean so bad- he figures out that they need to get the hell outta that room sometime soon!

 



Author's Response:

If I keep him broken then I have more reason to want to hug him, don't you just wanna wrap your arms around him when those intense hazel green eyes start welling up?

Out the room and to some place without a closet huh? He he.

Reviewer: nelles (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 02:52 PM · On: Shell of a former self

I love this story.  Thought I'd let you know.  I don't write my own, at least not yet, I'm too busy reading others.  You're doing a really good job and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was reading others that made me start writing my own and I've just become addicted to it. :D 

Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 09:56 PM · On: Scratches

Awww. poor dean. i wonder what is inside him that the monster wants so bad? hmm.

i love dean, hes my favourite character so i hope hes ok. lol i love stories about dean so i hope this one is long. im loving it and im hanging off your every word!!



Author's Response:

Next chapter reveals what the monster wants - I just hope it ain't dissapointing. 

He's my fave too (as if you can't tell, lol) and thank you! 

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 05:57 PM · On: Scratches

Hmmmmmm- tasty little Dean! Tasty big Dean - okay- mind outta the gutter- sorry! Excellent as always - can't wait to hear how the rescue back in '88 went.
Scratches on the inside of the closet door - not good and I think Bobby's right- the thing must be tired of waiting- gonna come after him full force soon - evil cliffie woman!

 



Author's Response: Thank you... and I should do that too, get my mind out of the gutter that is... big revealie coming soon!

Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 07:22 PM · On: Some things are worse than silence

hehe clock killer

Author's Response: Lol, glad you like :D

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 06:41 PM · On: Some things are worse than silence

"Clock killer" lol. Wonderful flash backs again, spine - chilling stuff. And Dean can hear the creature in the present, but doesn't tell Sam. Ever the protector....and maybe he doesn't know how to kill it either. Or does he????? Don't tell me, I'll wait anxiously for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D Next chapter coming hopefully very very soon and very moving closer to revelations now. 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 05:51 PM · On: Some things are worse than silence

Great banter - loved the "Yes, never, and no" - but, yeah, I had to go back and check - hangs head in shame - It's just too hard to pay really close attention 'cuz I'm reading so fast to find out what's going to happen next. Not to worry - I've been going back to re-read the earlier chapters! Please, more soon. Don't forget, I've totally got that closet phobia thing going, so I really need to know how to kill it.

Author's Response: I confused myself with that bit so you needn't worry, lol. Thanks and *glances towards bottom of bed* it's the monster under the bed I'm worried about at the moment (he's getting jealous).

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 05:01 PM · On: Some things are worse than silence

  clock killer ! laughed and laughed, the bantering between them is so funny. and the description of the noises so scary. And guess what ? i might not hate you after all...

Author's Response: Yey! You might not hate me! Thanks! I don't know whats worse, the sound of a ticking clock in silent room or the light on a digital clock in a dark room when you just wanna sleep... Thanks!

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