Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 05:22 PM · On: I've got you
Yay, Bobby to the rescue! And I loved it that Dean took the bed that he thought would put him beteween Sam and danger - you are keeping the characters very consistent. And the hug was fine! I certainly don't think Dean and Sam should do it every 5 minutes, but they lead incredibly dangerous lives, they only have each other, and they should be able to hug when one of them is breaking into tiny little pieces - in my humble opinion! Thanks for such great work, see you again soon!
Author's Response: I love Bobby! He's brilliant and well, I love him. Thank you for the compliments, they really do mean so much :D and I'm glad I'm receiveing no death threats about the hug, lol.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 05:20 PM · On: I've got you
Don't mind the hug... This story really is scaring the crap out of me. And really, I don't scare easily. OK - just to flesh out my own closet nightmare - picture one of those fold open kind of closets with slated wood for the top half and a long cigarette holder protruding from the slates (like the penguin had in the old Batman series in the 60s)... shudder... Really looking forward to some Bobby action!
Author's Response: Thanks! Great compliment. That's one creepy tale... I think it was more the monster under the bed that scared me but I do like having my closet door shut even now :) I'm just a big kid.
Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 11:41 PM · On: Fragmented Memories
Really good story so far :D Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Update coming very shortly.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 10:27 PM · On: Fragmented Memories
ooohhhhh - creeeepy! Fabulous chapter. Poor Dean. Of course he would still be able to see it because of that part of him that is still so childlike. Hope Bobby is going to be the calvalry to come to the rescue. Can't wait for more....
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm far too cruel to Dean but I can't help it. He is super childlike and I love it about him. :D
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 09:48 PM · On: Fragmented Memories
That flashback to Dean's first encounter with the closet monster was seriously creepy! I love it that in your story something from Dean's past is still after him...it makes a nice change from the demon always being after Sam. And "I'll be back for you" Brrrr. Great line! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm very much a Dean girl, I love all three Winchesters but I am a total Dean girl... which doesn't really explain why I'm so cruel to him... still, I love it when the bad guys after Dean instead of Sam because like you say, it's always Sam.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 06:43 PM · On: Fragmented Memories
ok, i love everything in this story ! the writing style, past and present, the dialogues, and especially the fact than for once, something is after Dean. Keep up the good work !
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! So kind. I can't help my stories, they all just go Dean centric... Dean is not safe in my mind. >:D
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 03:04 PM · On: Calling the Cavalry
so did little sammy ever saw it ? because if he can't now... And how did John and Bobby get him back that time ? And and and...
Author's Response: You'll be pleased that I actually answer your first question (kinda) in the next chapter. Yey! As for how John and Bobby got him back... you'll see, or read or whatever, lol.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 02:24 PM · On: Whispers
so sweeeeet, between Sammy and the closet even though he's so afraid. God we do like Dean, don't we ?!
Author's Response: I'm a Dean obsessed girl... mind you the amount of hurt I put on that guy in my stories you'd think I was rather sadistic. Thanks!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 02:17 PM · On: Watched
love it love it love it.
Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 02:02 PM · On: Creaks
you know, when i was around seven, i told my parents i was hearing noises under my bed. Of course i got all the "don't be afraid of the dark" speech. But it freaked me out during weeks til my father noticed that some kind of termites were eating my wooden plinth ! So, nothing supernatural in this little story of mine, but a damn child terror i swear. OK, now back to your story, wich looks very good, oh and eight chapters for your first update, even better !!!
Author's Response: Hi! I know you're sent more than one review and I'm gonna respond to each one seperately. That's a pretty creepy story... I think I'd have preferred there to be a monster under my bed - I have a serious bug phobia (don't tell anyone). I uploaded this story elsewhere and I have an account on here so I thought... what the hell? Why don't I put it up. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dri (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 12:14 PM · On: Calling the Cavalry
Excellent story. The dialogue, character portrayal and story progression are superb. Nice job building the suspence. I'm hooked! Don't abandon this one.
Author's Response: Thank you! For each thing you mentioned I thank you. I won't abandon it - it won't leave me alone, it haunts my daymares.
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 11:38 AM · On: Calling the Cavalry
Nice Imagination you have this is cool!
Author's Response: You mean twisted imagination, lol - I have a very dark side to me. >:) Thanks!
Reviewer: gbfreak1 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 07:34 AM · On: Calling the Cavalry
Awesome story! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: :D Thanks!
Reviewer: peachblossom (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 12:49 AM · On: Calling the Cavalry
Great story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanking you! I'm hoping to put the next chapter up shortly.
Reviewer: iriseyes (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 12:12 AM · On: Calling the Cavalry
this is one of the better fics that have been posted lately. i can't wait for the next chapter. i like the way the past and present run side by side.
Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 11:03 PM · On: Calling the Cavalry
I hate it when I catch up - mainly because I am so hopeless at waiting! This is the best chapter so far. I love Bobby, I love the mystery, loved Sam realising he had to be careful about how he handled the situation with Dean - loved the flashbacks. You're getting the idea, right? This is terrific work, great fun and I'm really enjoying it. I'll be watching out for the next instalment! Oh, and apologies to lam! When I started my first review it had Reviews -0 on the screen, but you beat me to it! So now I am the second person to review this piece Rae, didn't take the credit on purpose!
Author's Response: I think Bobby is my favourite Non-winchester character. I love including him in my stories, even if it's just a quick phone call. :D Dean should have a T-shirt printed saying 'handle with care' - ahh, but I love him the most and I dunno about ca... I'll stop there before my mind falls into the gutter.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:53 PM · On: Hesitation
Yikes! Dean can see the creature and Sammy can't, the creature seems to remember Dean, how did John get Dean back the first time? I have a nasty feeling I am going to catch up to you before you have a chance to answer these very pressing questions!
Author's Response: There is an important reason why Dean can see :D plus I like making him special. You ask some very good questions! I want to tell you but you will find out! Hopefully I won't leave any holes, at least not any big ones.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:30 PM · On: Common Factor
Terrific dialogue in this chapter, especially between Dean and Jacob. And I'm wondering, does Dean not remember his earlier experience? Can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: Thank you! Does Dean remember? My next chapter (as in chapter 9) answers that, in fact the chapter is pretty much based around that.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:27 PM · On: Morning After
You are building the suspense really well in this chapter, and I loved this part because it was hilarious and so Dean: “I know how you feel, believe me. Little brothers have a way of getting themselves into trouble quite a lot but I promise you it was NOT your fault and I am going to do everything I can to get him back so you can kick his… er, tell him off.” “You were gonna say ass.” Jacob smiled mischievously. Great stuff!
Author's Response: Somewhere else I mentioned that this was a stepping stone chapter and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have no idea why I included that line but I'm pleased I did. :D
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:25 PM · On: Whispers
That flashback was just so beautiful - Dean shoving his own fear down in order to protect Sam. He was asleep on the floor in Sam's room! Awww Dean. The guy was obviously a hero from birth, and I do so love that! Really enjoying this, thank you.
Author's Response: I thought I'd have a bit of fluff seen as how I was doing a bit of wee!chesterness. Some people are just born to shine - Dean is definately my hero!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:21 PM · On: Watched
Great parallels again, between Dean in the past, the victims in the present and Dean in the present. I like the way you have bracketed this chapter too: He grew cold inside and shivered, he swore he saw the shadows move and as he continued to stare into them, his eyes locked with a pair of cold grey ones. Great work, thank you. I'm off to chapter 4!
Author's Response: Hi again! Thanks! It just felt right repeating that line so I'm happy it worked :D
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:18 PM · On: Brave Young Man
I love your take on why Dean isn't afraid of anything - that he won't be allowed to protect his brother if he shows any sign of needing looking after himself. Kind of sad when you think about it, but probably spot on! And I love the way you bracketed the chapter with this line: He pouted silently, telling the darkness that he wasn’t a kid and in reply, came a creaking noise. Spooky! On to chapter 3!
Author's Response: I'm still getting used to this 'responding' link thing, I keep clicking the wrong one. I'm terrible when it comes to big brother Dean who'll do anything for Sammy... I have a really bad soft spot for him. And the repeated line at the end, glad it worked 'cause it just felt right adding it at the end.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:15 PM · On: Creaks
Hey Rae666, looks like I'm going to have the honour of being your first reviewer here. This chapter is a great start, I love Dean telling Sam to close the closet door - I suspect that may become important to your plot. Reading straight on now!
Author's Response: Hi! Responding to each chapter review individually 'cause I have way too much spare time. I love how you caught up on that 'important to the plot' part about the closet door. :D
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 10:10 PM · On: Calling the Cavalry
Great story! I love how you cut back and forth between past and present. I'm finding this reaaaallly creepy because I was afraid of things in my closet when I was a kid (not really unusual I guess, but I do have a very vivid memory of it, and like Dean, I still have to have the closet door closed when I sleep). Can't wait to read more....
Author's Response: Thank you! I like trying new things when writing and the past and present thing is definately a new area for me, so I'm glad you like it. I was really weird when I was younger... I'm not even going into detail about it because the fears I had about the monster in the closet and under the bed will make you just want to back away and call the funny farm - one of my fears was that it wanted to steal my slippers...
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