Reviewer: iriseyes (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 04:49 PM · On: Some things are worse than silence
god this is great. keep it coming. i love the banter between the boys. you've got them donw to a tea.
Author's Response: Thanks! Thought it was time for a little light hearted stuff before getting too heavy :D
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 04:36 PM · On: Some things are worse than silence
AW Rae! You're killing me here! God dude - write faster! hahahaha! Get Bobby there. Save Dean! Seriously though - "clockicidal" love that one! I've been there a time or two.
Author's Response: He he, thanks. I'm opening up Word right now and sorting out the next chapter, lol. Glad the 'clockicidal' worked :D I love making words up.
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 08:45 AM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
Love the menace you put into the things words when it talks to Dean.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that this creatuer seems to be a good bad guy... if that makes sense.
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 08:43 AM · On: I've got you
I like it when they hug, it's nice
Author's Response: I'm glad... I like the occasional hugs too but still... I was kinda worried about threats, lol.
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 08:40 AM · On: Calling the Cavalry
"tastier too" Great line, love it.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 08:34 AM · On: Watched
Tree66 recced this story and i've been reading it, to lazy to review, but i gotta tell you I actually lived in a house when i was a kid that the closet door in my bedroom did open and close by itself. I still won't go to bed without making sure the closet doors are closed.
Author's Response: Ahh, creepy. I hate when things move by themselves, not that it happens a lot to me but still, it's even worse that it was the closet door . I can actually be quite guilty of being too lazy to review sometimes, I'm too lazy for most things actually, lol.
Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 02:16 AM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
kwl kwl, the story is still great, i think it is one of my favourites now :) i like how you update regularly, sometimes it takes ppl ages to update :( but not u!!! :D YAY! thx. lol
Author's Response: I think I've mentioned before, when I first started I updated weekly but the story just keeps playing on my mind, hence the regular updates. One of more stories isn't so lucky, it's kind of taken a back seat to this one and the update for that one are really slow.
Reviewer: peachblossom (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 01:30 AM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
I've got major heebie-jeebies now! Keep it coming! :-D
Author's Response: Thanks! My story must be doing it's job.
Reviewer: iriseyes (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 10:10 PM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
this is great keep it coming. youve got me on the edge and TOTALY adicted. love it,
Author's Response: Thank you! It's great to hear... er, read that. :)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 09:14 PM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
What does this thing want from Dean? Both in the past and the present? Very suspenseful chapter....I'm hanging out for more here!
Author's Response: :D Thanks. In one of the next couple of chapters I'm going to spill what it wants from him. So hope you're not dissappointed.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 06:49 PM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
Hurry up John! and Bobby! And you - more please sooooon! Great job keeping up the suspense.
Author's Response: Thanks! They shall be coming shortly, I promise :)
Reviewer: Deansno001grl (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 03:47 PM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
awww poor Dean. this is really really good. please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! Update coming pretty soon.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 02:18 PM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
do you know i have two closets in my bedroom ? Actually it seems my whole house is full of closets !!! But i have so much chaos in each and everyone than no monster can hide in there. I hope. I'm sure. Of course not. I hate you.
Author's Response: Mwuahahaha *cough cough* sorry, something got stuck in my throat there... *looks at flashlight below chin and quickly hides it behind back* you don't hate me, not really :P Just don't go hiding in any of those closets. >:D
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 01:36 PM · On: Sweet Sweet Child
Rae - I'm so glad you update fast- otherwise I think I'd go nuts with waiting. You've created a pretty scary flashback here - and that thing that's got Wee!Dean - well - let's just say that I'm glad my closet doors lock!
Author's Response: Thanks... I used to update weekly but this story won't leave me alone. This is actually my first update on here that didn't seem to need verifying! Yippee! Your closet doors lock? No fair! I want locking closet doors!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 10:51 AM · On: I've got you
more more more
Author's Response: hehe, thanks"
Reviewer: peachblossom (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 02:26 AM · On: Dead boys can't talk
This is soooo creepy - I LOVE it! You're making me afraid that I have closet monsters! :-) A slaughterhouse? I think the freaky factor multiplied by 10 with that little addition. Good call! Poor Dean! What a horrible, horrible situation to be in, especially with a dead kid right next to you. I thought it was so sad when Dean started talking to him. It's a good touch to the story that Dean and Sam blocked out everything that happened. It's also typical Dean to blame himself for what's happening now. I can't wait for John to rescue Dean in the backstory and for Bobby to show up in the present! I'm also curious about what Sam saw that made him block it out - the poor little kid! I am REALLY enjoying the story. You are doing a fantastic job! I hope this story will be nice and long! :-)
Author's Response: Hey, thought I'd rub my slight fear off on other people, lol. Thanks, just had to use a slaughterhouse 'cause well... they're cruel places, or atleast this one was. Dean likes to blame himself for stuff doesn't he... he must have a lot of weight on his shoulders. Rescue, soon, Bobby, sooner and Sam... poor kid, soon. :) Again, thanks!
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 09:25 PM · On: Dead boys can't talk
Can't wait for Bobby to get there. Really like how you are weaving the various strands of this story together. Please don't leave us in suspense for tooooo long!
Author's Response: Thanks! No, won't leave you in suspense for too long, I promise!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 07:36 PM · On: Dead boys can't talk
Ewwww a slaughterhouse! Nice touch! The flashbacks are really well written and the dialogue between the boys is great. I knew Dean would get around to blaming himself some time! And Tree is right, it does have a "Something Wicked" feel to it -and I loved that episode. Thanks!
Author's Response: I wanted something creepy that even though it's been done, it hasn't been overly done and I honestly tried researching slaughterhouses but I couldn't really find much for the specific era... Anyway, thank you. And I just love that episode, one of my fave.
Reviewer: iriseyes (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 07:18 PM · On: Dead boys can't talk
absolutly love it. is easily one of my favorites. can't wait for more. love how the boys block out memories that are to harsh.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm keeping the updates on this regular so the next chapter should be up shortly.
Reviewer: snscum (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 07:17 PM · On: Dead boys can't talk
I am really enjoying this--I like the suspense & I like your writing style. Can't wait for more. Thanks!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying. I love writing and it's great to see people liking the story.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 06:47 PM · On: Dead boys can't talk
Another great chapter Rae - can't wait till Bobby gets there- and can't wait to hear how they got Wee!Dean away from the thing way back when. Like how you're writing the guys- keeping Dean the strong silent one- it has a "Something Wicked" quality to it! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love the episode 'Something Wicked', it's definately one of my all time favourites. You'll find out how they got him back soon... but not too soon.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 08:05 AM · On: I've got you
well, a little hug from time to time...
Author's Response: he he :)
Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 07:09 PM · On: I've got you
Im seriously enjoying this story so far!! Keep up the great work. i cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: You won't have to wait long. Thanks for the review! :D
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 06:39 PM · On: I've got you
HEheh liked it hug and all!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 06:30 PM · On: I've got you
Rae I just read all this in one sitting and was riveted. Love how you go back and forth so easily between past and present. I'm not normally a big Wee!Chester fan- but I'm loving this. As Ceil said- I love how you still had Dean take the bed closest to the closet- despite his fear- maybe because of what he knows- to still protect Sam. Can't wait to see what Bobby does to help out! Great job- looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love trying new styles of writing with my stories and jumping back forth between the past and present has been fun so far but I'm also glad that you like how it works. Plenty more of Bobby to come because like I keep saying, I just love him. I love playing around with other peoples characters, makes a change from messing with my own little creations.
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