Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 04/04/10 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Oak Below
Well, what can I say, I enjoyed the gore fest! And there were so many twists and turns, then Abe at the end shot himself...kind of sad that. I loved the Lich, very nicely evil. Thank you for sharing the story. Jacq xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments and for leaving faithful and praising reviews as well as stars :) Thanks for the words. Really really awesome to hear your liked it enough to catch up especially since it was such a long break in between some chapters. Thank you :D
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 04/04/10 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Little House In The Desert
Err, Sam bit Dean! This is scary, and I am wondering how they get out of this one! Moving on...good one again. Jacq x
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 04/04/10 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 7: Desert Platoon
Hey there, thought today I'd catch up on all the stories I need to erm catch up on...lol. More gore! Thank you, much cringeworthyness! And I wasn't expecting Alyssa to be munched, that was a suprise. And Sam is not at all well, am wondering if Abe will survive now. Good chapter, on to the next. Jacq x
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Skeleton Song
OMG thank you for the gore warning, and what a gore fest!!!!! really great chapter, Jacq
Author's Response: *bows humbly* Thank you, hun :P I LOVE the stars!
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 5: Divided States
Sorry I missed this being posted, you leave us there!!! And no updates for such a long time, cruel...lol This is warming up, blood oh no! Look forward to more blood and gore...give us a wave on the shout box when you get back. Jacq x
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for the kind words. I promise to try and get a move on with the story, but my inspiration dwindled a little after the first dour chapters. I'm gonna post! Soon! I promise you :) And as for checking in when I get back - Oh yeah! Thanks for the stars :D
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: Divided States
It is certainly getting interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, especially since I know the updates are far and few. I'm so glad to hear it's still interesting :) Thanks so much for the stars!!! :D
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 4: Heatstroke
I can feel the heat burning and the temprature rising, oooh that was a dire moment, Wasn't sure if Abe would give the gun up or someone would get shot, mixing the song with the dialogue was good. Will look out for the next chapter. Jacq x
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment :) I felt that would go nicely. Could have chosen a better one, but Zeppelin just says it all. Thanks for the stars!! Good to know I'm infecting my readers with the same heat I'm putting into the story :) Makes it all worth while!!
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 4: Heatstroke
That was another exciting chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) The tension is building... slowly.... veeeery slowly....
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: Summer in the city
Oops Wendigo was in epi2 I think? How could I forget...lol but I still think it is as good as that. Jacq
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: Summer in the city
The tension is building nicely, the fight between Sam & Dean scary and i love the description of the Lich, reminds me of the pilot episode and how they built the tension with the Wendigo, will look out for the next chapter, good one Jacq
Author's Response: Hehe one slip-up is permitted :D I'm so glad you like the tension building and thank you SO much for the stars!!!
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 3: Summer in the city
Another cliff hanger!!!! :) I can't wait to read the next chaper.
Author's Response: I know the build up is slow, but I'm planning (or trying to) for as much fear as I can possibly put into words. The story is actually inspired by a movie called Welcome To The Jungle.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 2: Throw caution to the wind
Oh no, broken down and no rescue in sight ooh err, things are getting hotter, good chapter Jacq
Author's Response: Thanks. Not much exitement, but it's coming ;) Thanks for the stars.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Trav'lin' philosopher
There is so much I like about this one, a VW camper van, always wanted one of those, Dean and Sam being themselves, and I have a feeling that something dire is headed their way, Your Summary is great, it really pulled me into wanting to read more, and am now eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Jacq
Author's Response: Thanks for the summary critique! I usually suck at writing them; they either come out too vague or overly descriptive ;) Glad to know you like it so far. I'll hurry up and post another chap :) And thanks for the stars!!!
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