Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 05:22 AM · On: Fan-freakin'-tastic
A very good chapter,i'm really loving this story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you're loving the story.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 08:07 PM · On: Fan-freakin'-tastic
Another awesome chapter, this story is rolling along nicely. Loved how Dean's previously favorite bacon double cheeseburger now 'tasted far too keenly of seared flesh and ash'- poor baby. And then he hallucinates or dreams (not sure which) that Dad is on his case, too. Sam knows something's wrong, I'm wondering how long it's gonna take before he does something about it, other than look the other way and let Dean keep his pride intact. Eagerly waiting for more! Ah, and this is kind of an odd request from me, but you're delving heavily into Dean's mindset, are we going to get the same glimpse of Sam's thoughts at some point? Sue
Author's Response: I'd guess you'd say hallucination--it's one of the symptoms of sleep deprivation--seeing and talking to people who aren't there. I'm trying to work in a bit of Sam's thoughts too. Perhaps not as deeply (not sure yet on this point). Good to hear you're still enjoying.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 07:38 PM · On: Fan-freakin'-tastic
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm loving that you're enjoying the read.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 07:00 PM · On: Fan-freakin'-tastic
I'm hooked and need more, poor Dean he's in such pain and having a hard time dealing with Sam's cruel words. Please post again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, Maureen. I'm so happy to hear you're hooked. More to come soon, I promise.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 04:56 PM · On: Stumbling Ahead
Oh wow, a great beginning. I can't wait to read more, but I'll have to since you haven't posted it yet. :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it so far. More to come so.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 07:57 PM · On: Stumbling Ahead
Good portrayal of atmosphere here, the tension between the brothers is papable. Do you use mapquest for figuring distances out between cities? I do, and then I chop an hour or so off, taking into account the DWDF (Dean Winchester Driving Factor).
Author's Response: Thanks, Sue, for the kind review. Yep, I do use MapQuest to try and map out distances, at least close approximations. I didn't, however, think to take into account the DWDF. Darn it. hehe
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 04:33 PM · On: Stumbling Ahead
Another excellent chapter, both Sam and Dean are in so much pain at the moment.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're still enjoying it.
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 02:14 PM · On: Stumbling Ahead
I like this so far. Hope you post again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. More to come soon.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 07:24 AM · On: Watching Sugar Melt
Oh Ness that just oozes guilt and irritation and distress and sorrow. very realistic, Hunny. Bev xx
Author's Response: Oh, Bev, I can't tell you how much I love the fact that you say this oozes all of those things. Truly, that is exactly what I was hoping for. Thank you so much for the review.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 11:49 PM · On: Watching Sugar Melt
Hi Ness, Nice start, Dean can't sleep necause Sam's words keep pinging around his brain. Yes, they definitely need to talk, but that's not gonna happen anytime soon. Nice setting with the diner breakfast scene, and Sam dug up 3 hunts! I wonder which one he's gonna choose.... my money's on the haunted bar, bec he thinks it's the one that would appeal most to Dean. Just a guess, can't wait to read the next chapter and see if I'm right! Sue
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sue. I'm really glad you enjoyed the first chapter, and I hope you enjoy the coming ones equally well.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 10:07 PM · On: Watching Sugar Melt
Uh oh! Trouble's a-brewin' with the boys! You know, Sam's lucky on the show that Dean lets things go as often as he does. Because he's a had a few "I only said it 'cos I was possessed/enraged by a spirit/under a siren's spell" incidents by now and it's the same recurring theme with him. The "Boo hoo" thing was just SO below the belt. And when you consider that Dean didn't say anything mean while he was under the influence of the spell... He was just being completely honest.
Author's Response: I agree that Sam has indeed had a number of those moments. Yet, like Dean, I still love the boy to no end. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 09:03 AM · On: Watching Sugar Melt
I'm so glad you posted this here, Ness. It's a wonderful start!! I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: If you're happy, I'm happy. :-)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 08:41 AM · On: Watching Sugar Melt
A great start, i'm looking forward to more of this story.
Author's Response: So happy you enjoyed it. Hope you like the future chapters as well. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
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