Wow, this is just so fun...fun story, not fun for the characters...y'know, fun...yes, well. This is awesome! I love everything you're doing with this story, like the empathy, and drawing it back into season one, and Amelia not fitting the pattern an' all...really cool.

Ahhh! That was so COOL! And creepy, but COOL! The description in this story is so vivid, I can picture it like it's alive! That's really scary. I don't think I'd want the creepy chick alive...'kay, that's gonna give me nightmares... 

Yes, very much enjoyed...lovely confusion...ahhh, poor Sam and Dean. This is such a good story...*sigh* wondrous story goodness...

Ooooh...this is getting suspicious...my theory still holds...!!!! Hmmm...I like how this is sort of a mystery, and you're spreading it out over a span of chapters instead of one big all-will-be-revealed bit...nice.

Chapter one is indeed enjoyed! This is interesting, and rather unique because of the fact that you thought of it in class...!!! Good job!

Hey this is really getting good, Watcher.  My only suggestion is to double check for grammer mistakes otherwise your story telling is really improving.  You may want to consider a beta, simply to double check on grammer and punctuation.  Nice, Nice job though.  I look forward to reading more. - K

Watcher, nice chapter.  Nice job leading us to Amelia's powers.  You may want to check your font though, it seems a bit small, makes it harder to read.. Otherwise It's coming along nicely - K

Author's Response: huh.... I don't know why its kind of small. Well I'm sorry about that I'll try and fix it if I can. But I"m glade you like it so far. thanks for reading and reviewing!

Lighthousewatcher

Wow Amelia is a really screwed up girl. Wonder what she will do when she finds out that they burned her album.  This chapter gives the idea she may know what she's doing.  Very scary.  Loved the final sentence where she dissolved into blank pieces of paper.

Author's Response: thanks so much. I actually had that sentence in my head sine before I started writing this story. But I'm going to sayone thing. She doesn't...yet just keep reading and you'll see.. thanks for reviewing 

poor Sam, as if his visions aren't enough, now he is an empath too.  That boy is going to be in for some major pain!  

Author's Response: I personally think that the telekenises stuff just doesn't fit you know what i mean? Sam is a really emotional person. It just seems ( to me at at least) that he would be an empath. I mean he's already very awear on other's emotions so it just seems to fit more then him being able to bend a spoon, but that's just me. thanks for reviewing

Nice start - K