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Reviews For Bean Stalker
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/12/09 03:23 PM · On: Epilogue

Thoroughly enjoyed learning Alexa's fate. Glad that Bobby was canny enough to trick her just as she tried to trick the brothers. Though I think I'm with Sam in thinking that Bobby's solution was a too kind. 

Impressed by how well you tied in the very real world of fanfic and Winchester whump with this story. Not that I could ever believe any of us would ever be so cruel to the boys as Alexa if we found they were real. They're just too easy on the eyes. 

Much as I don't like Zachariah, for once I'm glad he stepped in and forced Chuck to write an epilogue to this story. Whilst an open ending would have had us all worrying and begging for more, it's equally nice to know Alexa/Alice didn't get to hurt Bobby and won't be hurting anyone else again any time soon.

Finally this was a great read and I will be rereading my printout again sometime probably soon. Alexa is such a great baddie.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/12/09 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm a bad girl - I start reading a story, reviewing chapters and then disappear. Trouble is I don't quite know what happens but I keep finding I've missed the final chapters of great stories. And I'm afraid I've done it again with Bean Stalker.

Found myself thinking about this story a few days ago, took me ages to find it again, but have since printed it out and reread it all and found two chapters I hadn't read! Bad me.

Now for the review of this chapter. You had me on the edge of my seat with Alexa burning the garage complete with Dean and the Impala inside. But yet again the Impala provided Dean with a safe haven and save him. The sound of her horn constantly blaring (OK so Dean was leaning on it) attracted Sam's attention and then she had the strength to break them all out of their fiery prison. Perfect. 

Loved the use of Sam's talents to herd the flames away from his family, and love the chick flick moments in the motel bathroom at the end. 

Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 09:00 AM · On: Epilogue

It's fun to read and enjoyed it terribly. Should not enjoyed when people being tortured or injured. :"). But it's Dean and couldn't help it.

Reviewer: Eleri McCleod (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 08:20 AM · On: Epilogue

Well, this 'crazy fan' thanks you for the wonderfully disturbing romp through Misery-land.  I'm sure Dean had loads of fun letting you test your ideas out on him.  <g>  There's just something you have to love about a fandom where we can take pot-shots at ourselves.  I loved the wrap up through Chuck's writings.

Keep writing!

Eleri



Author's Response: *g* And this crazy fan thanks you for your lovely reviews! And of course we need to make fun of our selves! Show me a fandom that doesn't have a couple of crazies in it and I bet you that its a very boring,very dead fandom ;o)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 05:30 AM · On: Epilogue

Brilliant, for a moment i thought that that was the real ending lol, this has being a great story, i have loved reading it. i'm looking forward to your next story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it, because it was a riot to write it :o)

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/09 11:35 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved this story, glad that it was created and shared. At first I saw that "the end" and I was scrunching up my face all confused, going from those two words to the scroll bar seeing that there was more to go. Lol. Again, thanks and really good job. 

 

-Tori :)



Author's Response:

Hehehe! Call it an innocent prank ;o)

Thank you so much for all of your wonderfull reviews and I'm very glad that this story has managed to grip you from start to finish :oD

Reviewer: 0kieD0kie (Signed) · Date: 05/08/09 11:06 PM · On: Epilogue

What an awesome story! Those guys should fear the Supernatural fandom. What messed up minds we have, lol. So sad to see this one end!



Author's Response:

We truly are a menace *g* the things we can cook up...

Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/09 08:11 PM · On: Epilogue

Cute ending.  I thought for a moment that you left of hanging, but I'm glad the angel talked Chuck into finishing.  :p   I really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to reading your next one.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! This was a pleasure to write, even more so because people have enjoyed reading.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/09 06:51 PM · On: Epilogue

Great ending- you seriously had me going there for a moment... was like OH NO SHE DIDNT.....

 I loved Castiel giving Chuck crap about the original ending--- basically I was doing the same...

But the final-final ending was fantastic.... hope to see you back with another story soon!



Author's Response:

It was Zachariah, not Castiel who was giving Chuck a hard time. Castiel is a fan of the books (or at least he seemed to be in the episode *g*).

I've very glad you liked it! Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/08/09 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

Wow, this chapter was outstanding,lots of action and some lovely brotherly moments. I'm really looking forward to reading the epilogue.

Author's Response: Thank you! This one was a blast to write. Epilogue will be up shortly and it will be... sort of different ;o)

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

I can't believe I never spotted this fabulous story before. I love it. Keep up the good work and more soon please.

Author's Response: Glad you did! Welcomeabord, you've arrived at the perfect time... no more waiting around for lazy updates, because in just a couple of hours, this story will be done and over *throws confetti*

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

Very very good. Bravo! This was a fantastic story, I'm glad that you wrote it and shared it with us here on snville because it was just magnificent, nail biting, and perfect.I'm excited for the epilogue. Great job.

 

-Tori :)



Author's Response: Oh! Wow! Thank you so much! You know, for me, this was just one more fun thing to write, to play with. So, to see such adjectives apply to it is... it's mind-boggling!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

awww- I'm so sad its coming to an end. What  great thrill ride its been. But- its good to see Dean safe and relatively sound in his brother's care.

Well done- loved every minute!



Author's Response: Thank you! I hadn't realize just how frigging big this chapter had turned out until I had to read it from one end to the other... uff! But yeah, Dean's rescue, Sam got a new ability, Lassie learned to drive and all is well in the world :o)

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 14/07/09 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

please update quick have to know what happens next!!!!

Author's Response: Well, not so much as quick, but hey! It's up now ;o)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 5

A brilliant chapter, poor Dean,freedom was so close,hurry up Sam, i can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Freedom is, literally, just around the corner *g*

Thank you!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

P.S. In case you missed the underlying message in my previous review. I LOVED this update. 

If you want me on my knees begging for more, just say the word.



Author's Response:

*g* And here I was trembling away in a corner, fearful of the next knock on the door...

 "If you want me on my knees begging for more, just say the word." Humm... what's the word again? ;)

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 5

Uh-oh Dean. If he thought he was in trouble before ...  things have just got much worse ... and exactly how far away is Sam?

That is one evil cliff-hanger you've left us with Ophium! You had best have the next update planned and just about ready to go, or I may have to set Alexa on you instead of Dean.



Author's Response:

Lol! Well... wouldn't want Alexa knocking on my door. If I tell you that next chapter is almost written, will that keep her on a leash? :D

Thank you!

Reviewer: 0kieD0kie (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great story so far! This girl seems really messed up in the head! Dean was so close to freedom and the ending with Alexa/Alice pretty much ending Dean's escape gave me chills. Poor Dean! And Sam having to see Dean scream was so sad. Please update soon! :]



Author's Response: Thank you! It's really cool to know when you've manage to cause a reaction in the people reading :D

Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

The seat needs like a sign or something because I almost fell off the edge of it. This is so intense and I am loving it! Gah! You had to end it with a cliffy! UH! Lol. Loved it and can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

 

Tori :)



Author's Response:

Hehehe! Kind of like a 'keep your seats close to the ground to lessen your fall'?

Thank you!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/09 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 5

Definately an AW CRAP moment there at the end... I mean- I knew he wasnt gonna get away that easy- but I had a faint glimmer of hope...

Course- then I also fell for the idea that Sam actually found the right house- you threw me a little curve with Alexa having set up the closed circuit tv thing- for Sam to have to watch what happened to Dean- and the amulet...

Soooo not good....  Cant wait for the next chapter- although- again- not looking forward to what psycho-chick does to Dean for this most recent escape attempt...



Author's Response:

Well, if you're gonna have a villain that's not an insult for your heroes, don't make him/her dumb, I always say :D

I'm glad that Alexa's evowl plans are holding their own against both the minds of Sam and readers :D

Thank you!

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

Geez. How the hell did I miss this update?!

Oh dear heavens. Lmao. I could only imagine where Dean hid that wire. I'm going to be laughing about that for days. Super awesome chapter by the way, it's always a treat to read.



Author's Response: Thank you! So... exactly where do you think the poor guy stuck a sharp wire? 'cause those things can be mighty painful *evil laugh*

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

I dread to think just where Dean has that wire hidden, but at least it made me smile admidst his desperate situation. Hope Sam hurries to the rescue, but I am enjoying picturing his face if he finds Dean still dressed in those purple and pink pjs.

Author's Response: Hehehe! And don't forget the green socks... those are the crown of the ensemble *g*

Reviewer: gapdragon (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

Brilliant.'Maybe Mary even used the same sftener' - priceless, Thank you


Author's Response: :D Thank you! I love the small details that readers notice. It really makes my day!

Reviewer: Eleri McCleod (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is a delightfully twisted piece of work.  Tell your brother I love the way his mind works and to keep the ideas coming.  I look forward to seeing what you have planned for Dean in the coming chapters, although I'm not sure he's going to last much longer the way Alice, I mean 'Alexa' is treating him.

Thanks for writing!

Eleri



Author's Response:

*g* Other than the cool initial plot bunny of the existence of a stalker, my brother doesn't even know that this story exists ;) But if he ever finds out, I'll be sure to tell him you liked it :D

Thank you!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow, this was a very good chapter, so much tension in this one, you had me on the edge of my seat.

Well done.



Author's Response:

Hope that's a mighty comfortable seat, 'cause... well... It's not getting better in the next one ;)

Thank you!

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