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Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/09 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 19

I liked the idea of Satan being able to change his appearance. I really liked the scene with Sam and the devil. Very chilling!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/08/09 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter, stories getting exciting,looking forward to more.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/09 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 18

Excellent job on Castiel's appearance and his dialogue. I liked the cliffhanger at the end.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/09 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

Excellent word choice for describing the night sky. Nice setup for Sam being kidnapped.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/08/09 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

Two excellent chapters, i'm still loving this story.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 12

I was hoping that Dean would tell Sam about John when he told him about Jess---get it all over with at once.
The way you wrote the scene between Sam and Dean was wonderful and heartbreaking!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh no! Here it comes.
Excellent chapter! I feel so sorry for Sam. Having to relive all the terrible moments in your life all at once. That's got to sucker punch you.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 09/08/09 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 16

I loved your word choice for describing Dean after exiting the bathroom. I loved the scene in which Bobby comforted Dean. I loved the way you chose to have Sam remember the rest of the things he had forgotten. Good use of scenes from When the Levee Broke and Lucifer Rising. Great ending! This was a very well written and emotional chapter. I can't wait to read Chapter 17.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/08/09 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16

More trouble for poor Sam.looking forward to more of this story.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/08/09 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 15

A very intense chapter, looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Sam, he's having a tough time, great update.

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 17/07/09 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 14

really great!!!! update soon, please

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 13

A beautiful chapter,loved how Bobby looked after Sam.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 12

I liked the line 'his deep green eyes are the window to his soul.' You did an excellent job writing the scene in which Dean tells Sam about Jessica. I also liked the scene between Castiel and Bobby. Great job on the thoughts and dialogue there.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 12

A very emotional chapter, poor boys and poor Bobby.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/09 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

I liked Bobby's quick thinking to explain the shot he had just given Sam. I liked the setup of the chapter (Dean's, Sam's and then Bobby's perspective). You did a excellent job conveying how hard it is for Dean to decide what to do about how much to tell Sam. Good job on Sam's memories/dreams as well.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/06/09 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh i can't wait for the next part, poor Sam.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 10

I'm interested to see how Dean balances a recuperating brother and a world being destroyed by Lucifer. This is going to take some great juggling.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 9

It's such a relief to have the brothers caring for one another again and not keeping secrets or fighting. Soon enough they're going to have to get back to saving the world, but at least for now they just need to worry about one another.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

Just saw the final episode last night Sunday, and loved it, when Sam's eyes turned all black I nearly died. any who back to your story , it's brilliant, has Sam lost all those years because of the head trauma or something else? Please update again soon.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 10

I really enjoyed this chapter. I thought you did an excellent job writing how unsure Dean is about his role in stopping Lucifer. I think you also captured how Bobby would probably react in this situation as well. Very enjoyable read! This story continues to be entertaining. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 10

Another brilliant chapter,looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Glitterbelle (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 9

Hiya, I just stumbled across this story today. I am really enjoying it so far. I like how you continued the story straight from Lucifer Rising and have been using quotes from the episode. Your story is well-written and easy to follow and its great to see Dean back in big brother mode.
Please keep writing, I really want to find out how its all starting and whats going to happen.
Gemma
:o)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 9

A lovely sweet chapter.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 9

I loved how you wrote Sam waking up. I liked the humorous moments with Sam noticing that he has an odor and Dean helping Sam with his shower. I loved Dean's dialogue in that scene. I liked the end scene when Dean kissed Sam's forehead. That was a very touching scene. Great ending. I can't wait for more.

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