:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/09/10 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

im so shaking in my tang top and short shorrts this is so freaking me out...u are good. my sense of me viewing what u as the writer is emensable...i feel that i am there. thank you so much, but dont let SAM go please ... yes im a fanatic of sam. so sue me :P :) if i had diposable thumbs id give you more then two for this creative and scary as hell piece :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/09/10 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

damn it no, this is going to be one that i know i will love dearly and if there is a way to get a copy of this i thank you. Killer asshat moment that it freaks the living hell out of me to this point.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 17

That was fast! I expected a struggle but they got Sam when no one was looking. Fabulous! Now it really gets good!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 16

Another jam-packed emotional chapter! Wow! Sam remembering drinking blood has gotta be rough on him!
I was so busy thinking inside the Winchester circle that I didn't wonder what was happening with the rest of the world. Looks like we're in for a fun ride.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 15

what an emotionally charged scene! "You...Sam," Dean voice quivered, "You were front and center in raising Lucifer from hell." What a bomb to drop!
I'm rushing off to see the fall-out...

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 26

Perfect ending for a very good story.
Dany

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 26

This was an excellent way to end an excellent story. I loved the scene in which Bobby was mistaken to be Sam and Dean's father, the scene with Bobby, Dean and Sam in the Impala and the end scene in which Dean was comforting Sam while Bobby looked on. I don't think there was any other way for you to end this story. I really enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to reading your next one.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 14

"Sam glances upward toward the mirror. His wide hazels look fleetingly at Dean, a ghost of a smile crosses his drawn lips before he drops his brother's gaze and stares back out the window." I loved this part! It's so normal. I've done it a million times with my children and we've seen Dean and Sam do it countless times also.
"Turn that damn music down Dean, holy crap, it's already giving me a headache and we just left the house." Man, that made me laugh! Classic Bobby Singer!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 13

"Damn it, why do his boy's always have such a rough time? Is he about to cry? He looks away, focuses on the gun he has in his fingers. He doesn't want Bobby to think he's watching him, nor that he notices the excessive blinking of the older man's eyes." What a very touching passage. Everyone know that Bobby has a huge soft spot when it comes to the boys. This is an emotional time for him as well, watching 'his boys' go through yet more turmoil. Very nicely done!
Only natural that Dean would have a moment of doubt. Another wonderful play of human emotions. You make your characters so believable!
"My Father is on our side, always remember that." Wow! A very simple yet powerful statement. That would give me the courage I needed knowing that an omnipotent being---the creator or everything---was on my side.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/10/09 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 26

Thanks for this brilliant story, i liked the way you ended it.

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 26

So very good!
Corina

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 02/10/09 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Sam! Poor Dean!
I'm enjoying this one so far! Can't wait for the next update!
Oh! And I loved Michael being a woman!
Dany

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 25

very nice!
Corina

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/09 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 25

I liked your word choice throughout this chapter.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/09/09 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 25

Awww, a very sweet chapter, so glad that Sam's starting to pull round.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 24

Wow, a very emotional chapter, at least Cas did something to help.

Author's Response: Thank you for all the nice reviews. I am so happy you like this little story. Almost done now, more to come.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 24

Great job describing Sam's condition and all the characters' emotions regarding Sam's state. Excellent job writing the dialogue as well. I liked Castiel's intervention. This chapter came very close to bringing me to tears. Well Done!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. Your reviews are always so nice and make me do the happy dance when I read them. Thanks again!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/09 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 23

There were so many things I liked about this chapter I don't know where to begin. Fantastic beginning with Lucifer toying with Dean. Excellent job on Lucifer's dialogue. Excellent job writing the scene with Lucifer, Sam and Dean. Both thrilling and heartwrenching at the same time. I liked the twist with archangel Michael. I will be sorry to see this story end. I have really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/09/09 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great chapter, at least Lucifer's out of Sam, thats got to be good.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 22

I loved the beginning scene between Bobby and Cass. Great job on the dialogue there. I liked both Bobby and Dean's thoughts in this chapter. Very brutal scene with Lucifer and Sam. Excellent job on Satan's dialogue. I liked your word choice for describing Sam's possession. This was another thrilling chapter. I look forward to reading the final chapter and the epilogue.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 22

Another fantastic chapter, you've got me on tender hooks here, i can't wait for the next part.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 21

That was an excellent chapter, hundreads of demons, very scary.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/09 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 21

All I can say is wow! This chapter was phenomenal. Great job writing the beginning scene with Sam. Other favorite scenes Dean finding Sam and Dean's interaction with Satan. Very heart pounding and emotionally charged chapter.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 20

The hemp spiraling down until it disappeared in the dark. Great word choice! I liked the dialogue between Bobby, Dean and Castiel. Excellent job writing the scene in which Sam is being held by the demons. I could feel Sam's fear oozing from my monitor. I liked the interaction between Castiel and Bobby. Very amusing. Great cliffie. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 20

A very intense chapter.
Nasty cliffhanger lol.

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