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Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 8

An excellent chapter, so glad that Sam's feeling a little better, because Sam is a good person. i never thought he was evil.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 8

Excellent use of the scene between Bobby and Dean about Sam from When the Levee Breaks. Excellent job writing the scene in which Bobby has to inject Sam with demon's blood to save his life. Very emotional chapter. Very well done. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 7

Excellent job writing every scene in this chapter. I liked your take on Sam's second detox session. Very creative way to handle "curing" Sam of his addiction.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

I liked Dean's thoughts on everything and Dean and Castiel's talk. I could definitely see Castiel looking as bad as you described given what happened in the Season four finale.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! that doctor really gouged Bobby! I'm surprised the old guy didn't try to barter a little bit.
Dean's debate of conscience was fabulous! He tried helping Sammy one way and it didn't work. I wasn't too surprised that he'd changed his mind about the demon blood.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

They're handling Sam's addiction in a logical manner. I just hope he won't have to take the injections his entire life.
I was very impressed that Dean said he didn't care if Lucier took over the world, he wasn't leaving his brother until he was better. Now that's the old Dean we all know and love!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

Reading this reminds me so much of season one. dean and Sam are reverting back to their original roles and personalities. I like that all Sam's roughness is gone and he's the kid brother Dean needs to care for again.
I was hoping Castiel would tell us something important but you're stringing us along for a few more chapters. Damn!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

Geez, Sam is really screwed! He doesn't remember the last four years and he'll be going through demon-blood withdrawals. Dean and Bobby could barely handle it the last tiem.
I think it's fantastic that nothing has happened with Lucifer yet! Everyone would expect him to begin wreaking havoc on the world immediately. This is even more frightening because we don't know what he's doing or why he hasn't destroyed the earth.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

wow! I didn't expect that. And the roller coaster ride begins. woo hoo!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

That's just like Dean to blame himself. you have the boys and Bobby's characters (especially Dean's sarcasm) down perfectly.
Good to see Dean back in his role as stubborn big brother. He does it so well!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wonderful! I love that Bobby refers to Sam and Dean as his boys. Whenever I read that, I feel pride for him.
Dean's mantra that he uses to soothe Sam "it's you and me brother, you and me" is great! That's just what Sam needs to hear right now, expecially since he thought Dean hated him and would hate him even more for raising Lucifer.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great beginning! I like that you interwove the quotes from the episode into the story and added Sam and Dean's feelings.
I' eager to see where you take this!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

Another very good chapter,poor Sam he's in a world of pain at the moment.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

I more then like this story, i love it, looking forward to finding out what you have in store for all of them.

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

Thanks for giving us something to enjoy while waiting for season 5 to begin. I am enjoying this story a lot. I just want to encourage you to continue writing and posting it.

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 6

First I'm Sorry for not reviewing before.... and Second....Thank you for keeping busy during the long Summer... Truly enjoying your Season 5 saga....

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

I think if I were Sam, I would want to mentally erase everything that had happened too. Dean is right, though, it's going to be bad when he remembers. Thank you for writing this. It's definitely helping to fill in the LONG wait to find out what REALLY happens. I like your version.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great chapter, looks like all of them are in for a tough time.

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is a really cool start....can't wait to see what happens next.
See you on the flip side
Soph x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/06/09 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow, another fantastic story from you, i'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is a really good story and just what we need to help us make it until season 5. I can't want to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

Nice twist at the end with Sam. I liked the words you used to describe Sam's condition and Sam's awakening.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

How are you doing? You are doing a fantastic job. I loved this chapter. I loved every word, mannerism and thought. Keep up the excellent writing job!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

I liked Bobby's comparison of Castiel to Columbo. That line brought a smile to my face. I loved your word choice and dialogue. Another great chapter!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am really liking your take on what could happen after Lucifer rising. This was an excellent beginning. Very well written and descriptive. I look forward to reading more.

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