Reviewer: kkbelvis24 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 02:46 PM · On: The Rest of the Day
Very believeable story! I loved it! You show such detail. The flamingo's the room itself...the card games. I was shocked when Dean shot himself! Good going! King Dean...Ha! I want a King Dean for a day...okay for longer... Really enjoyed this story so much Thank you for your hard work and passion. Karen
Author's Response: Hi Karen, Thanks for the fabulous, wordy review. Mystery Spot is one of my favorite episodes, so I wanted to write a good, memorable missing Tuesday. And I'm thrilled that you didn't see the ending coming! Sue
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 07:32 AM · On: The Rest of the Day
A very good chapter, i would never have guessed that it would be by Dean doing it him self.
Author's Response: Hi darkhunter, Thanks for the double review! I was trying to think of an original way to end this, keep everyone in character, and keep the readers on their toes. I hope I succeeded. Sue
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 06:47 AM · On: The Rest of the Day
Glad I found this story, yes it really was a believable Tuesday I had thought it may be the knife or a gun may go off, or even a murderous pizza boy, but not suicide! I guess Sam would be glad this once that time repeated. Nice one Jacq
Author's Response: Hi Jacq, Thanks for the double review. Glad I kept you guessing to the end. Sue
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 Tuesday Morning
I keep thinking, is it the oatmeal, then TV eletrocution, then bed collapse err, I'll keep guessing, on to the next part. Good one... Jacq
Author's Response: Hi Jacq, I like your guesses, I think I've read most of them in other Tuesday missing scenes! Thanks for reviewing! Sue
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 06:25 AM · On: The Rest of the Day
Okay, that Tuesday death was particularly chilling especially given how close they were to midnight. Nice job!
Author's Response: Hi Ness, Thanks for the review. The original title for this was "Almost" because Dean almost made it to midnight. I have a tendency to create give-away titles, which I really didn't want to do with this story, so I lifted the title from the dialogue. I think it's a better title, all around. And I just couldn't resist the idea of almost making it to Wednesday... Sue
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tuesday Morning
Great start. Maybe Dean slips on his way to pee,lol i have no clue really,looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response: Hi darkhunter, Thank you for the review, glad you're liking the story so far. Interesting and er, unique guess! Sue
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 Tuesday Morning
Really good so far. Yep, it definitely sounds like a continuation of the ep. Hmmm--guesses? He smothers in his bedcovers...
Author's Response: Hi Ness, Thanks for the review, glad you're liking it so far. Interesting guess, I think someone else wrote that Tuesday (vbg) Sue
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