Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/09/09 09:45 AM · On: epilogue
Thanks for the fantastic read, i've enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to reading more of the soul collector.
Reviewer: cheria (Signed) · Date: 03/09/09 09:23 AM · On: always with you
Really like this story---loved the last few sentences is this chapter!!!Great job!
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 09:59 PM · On: memory's murky waters
Wow, awesome story here, you handled the reveal very well, and I was right, it is Dean. Sam's been a real trooper, looking after his confused big brother for agonizing days, too. Love it! Sue
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/09 09:10 AM · On: always with you
I finally got a chance to catch up with the story and read everything so far with eager 'gulp-like' wave... amazing story-telling... I truly wasnt 100% sure which of the brothers was injured and which wasnt until the last chapter or so... Found it very true that even concussed and memory scrambled- the two things Dean still managed to cling to was 'hunter' and 'brother'... so VERY telling. I really enjoyed this and cant wait for the remainder.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/08/09 06:05 AM · On: always with you
Awww, that was a lovely chapter.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 21/08/09 03:20 AM · On: always with you
Oh good, he's back with us, poor Dean, forgetting Sam, now that would be torment indeed Jacq
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 07:38 PM · On: always with you
I loved your word choice throughout the whole chapter. Great job on Dean's memories of Sam. Thanks for the great update.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 02:04 PM · On: always with you
I was right! I was picturing that Dean was the one who was hurt all along, and it didn't even occur to me until later in the story that you really hadn't told us. I'm glad to find out. I loved the brotherly moment here.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 09:23 AM · On: flight
Argh..his head bounced on solid rock, with your words I am feeling every agonising moment. great chapter and I look forward to the next one. The Banner is great as well. Jacq
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 09:16 AM · On: flight
OW! That had to hurt! GREAT battle. That fleshes out all the details of the fight, which was tense and descriptive and tons of fun. Now we have a few more holes to fill before we get the whole picture.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 06:43 AM · On: flight
Another very well written chapter, i love your banner.
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 01/08/09 06:53 PM · On: flight
I loved the Sesame Street and McDonald's references. You really write well for Dean. I loved your word choice for the description of the creature. Another well written chapter!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming over to check out another chapter of my story. I really appreciate the kind words and the rating. I'm glad you liked the pop culture references I threw in there. If you're ever looking for anything to read, I have several other stories up. I hope you'll take a look! I plan to get another chapter of this up in about a week or so. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/09 09:02 AM · On: a voice in the dark
Very well written and descriptive as usual. I think I have figured out which brother is which but I will definitely keep reading to see whether my suspicion is correct. Another fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of my story, I really appreciate the great review and rating you left! If you're enjoying this one, you might like my ongoing fic "Not So Drunk as You Think I Am." If you decide to check it out, I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again! I plan to get another chapter of this up this week, if all goes well. Hope to see you back here then!
Reviewer: thirdwatchfanatic (Signed) · Date: 14/06/09 02:21 AM · On: a voice in the dark
Pretty good, but I'd love to read more of The Soul Collector.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming over to check out my new story, I really appreciate it! Yeah, I'm way overdue on posting the next chapter of The Soul Collector. I'm really sorry about that, I got a bit overextended on the writing front, and real life's been hectic lately. I'm nearly done with the next chapter of it though, and will try to get it up as soon as possible. I plan to get another chapter of this one up this week, if all goes well. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 03:55 PM · On: a voice in the dark
Ah ha! You're deliberately keeping us in the dark and unsettled, so we can relate to Dean, right? Clever and sneaky... the Winchester way. Another good read! Sue
Author's Response: Hey there,Sue! Nice try, but I can't confirm who you're supposed to be relating to, LOL. Though you're right--part of why I chose not to reveal who the injured brother was is so the reader can discover it as he himself does. I'm really glad you're still enjoying the story! I hope to get another chapter up this week, if all goes well. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 03:27 PM · On: a voice in the dark
Such tender moments, soothing to have the contact that they do well together, just hope sleeping brings memory back. Short chapters are good, like that Jacq
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for coming back to check out another chapter of the story. I really appreciate the great rating and review you left! I'm glad you like the way I've structured this, with the shorter chapters. I plan to get another chapter up this week. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 03:15 PM · On: a voice in the dark
Another wonderful chapter, looking forward to finding out more.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of this, I really appreciate the great review. I'm glad you're still intrigued by the story. I plan to get another installment up this week, if all goes well. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: vengeance71 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 02:15 PM · On: a voice in the dark
Why are people having to guess? If you know the brothers it is pretty obvious. I like what you are doing and can't wait for the next chap.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for coming over to check out my story, I really appreciate it! I'm glad you think it's fairly obvious which brother is which, I hope it's becoming pretty clear to people. I've been putting in clues since the first chapter, so I think people are starting to have a pretty good idea by now. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far. I plan to get another chapter up this week. Hope to see you back here then! :) In the meantime, if you're looking for other stories to read, I have a few others up. "Not So Drunk as You Think I Am" and "The Soul Collector" are both action/adventure hurt/comfort. I'd love to hear what you think, if you check any others out! Thanks again!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 12:50 PM · On: a voice in the dark
Good chapter! I'm glad the fight with the dragon (I'm guessing) didn't end badly- you made it VERY tense, you know. Still lots to figure out.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of the story. I'm glad you're still enjoying it! I will definitely let you know before the end what the creature is, but it's one that's indiginous (in the lore ;) ) to North America. I plan to get up another chapter this week, if all goes well. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 09:28 AM · On: sacrifice made
You can't end it there! no... Sharp shiny claws about to tear him Dean? apart. I love the beastie...terrifying...lol Jacq x
Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! I'm so glad you came back for the latest chapter of my story. Thanks for the great rating and review! I'm really happy you like the creature. I spent a TON of time looking for one that would be unique and scary. I'm so glad it's working for you! I plan to get another installment of this up in the next few days. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 10/06/09 09:23 AM · On: feels like home
Yes But is it Sam or Dean? Very descriptive and one again a really good picture painted in a short space. Sorry I missed this had been posted, onto chapter 3 Jacq x
Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! I'm so glad you made it back for another installment of this, and felt like I was able to paint a good picture here, despite the word limit. I really appreciate the review and rating you left!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 08:27 AM · On: sacrifice made
Exciting update, looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for coming back to check out another part of my story, I really appreciate it! I'm glad you're still enjoying it! I plan to get another chapter up within the week. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 08:42 PM · On: sacrifice made
Well written, descriptive and interesting
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for coming over to check out another chapter of this, and for leaving such a great review and rating. I really appreciate both! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. I plan to get another chapter up within the week. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 03:45 PM · On: sacrifice made
And what? AND WHAT???? You can't just LEAVE it like that!!!! :) Still in, and waiting for more.
Author's Response: LOL Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of my story, I really appreciate the review you left. I'm so thrilled that you're still interested in the story. I plan to get another chapter up within the week. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 03:45 PM · On: sacrifice made
Ack! Evil cliffie, shame on you. But I've convinced myself that the dreamer is Dean, at least. Really hope you plan on updating this soon, Beth! Sue
Author's Response: Hey there, Sue! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of my story, I'm happy you're still enjoying it. And it's not really TOO evil, is it? I mean you already know that whoever it is survived, right? ;) LOL Glad you're still intrigued by what's going on. I plan to get another chapter of this up within the week. Hope to see you back here then! :)
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