Supernaturalville
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/09 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 10

haha its okay, the formatting wasnt THAT bad, but it was a good chapter, glad caleb finally told mac some of the thinngs that were bothering him.:)

Jess

p.s. did you try pressing the buttons really hard? that worked for me



Author's Response: Oh bless you Jess - you lie so sweetly... LOL!!! Thanks for the support, but the formatting BLOWS!!! No I've tried slaming the keys .... after they stopped working!!!! I was hoping there was some command key or something!!! Doomed damit!!! I have another Fic on FF.net that is way past due posting and I can't post until I visit someone with a working keyboard - how bad is THAT??? Glad you enjoyed this chapter though.... I was in the mood for a Mack-Caleb moment. Greatly appreciate the review .... as Always!!!!! Abi.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/09 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 9

UPDATE SOON!!! ILOVED IT!!!

(p.s I love caleb)

Jess



Author's Response:

Jess! All Capitals hmm? Glad you liked it!

Yeah Caleb... what's not to love?!!! LOL. I am kind of going to town hurting that boy, and I fully intend to put him back together again... promise. There is a mac and Caleb Emo scene coming up - when I've written it!!! :) Hopefully won't keep you waiting too long!

Abi.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/11/09 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 8

update soon!!! this was well worth the wait! loved it! update! update! haha

Jess



Author's Response:

Whoops missed this - I know I read it and it would have made my day!!! As always - shinning, starry review lady - Thanks!!!

Abi

Reviewer: LovinJackson (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh my dear dear friend. You have no idea how grateful I am to get to see your work before its final cut. I am IN LOVE with it and this chapter was no different. Just so freaking awesome. Ohh the teenage angst ... hell angst in general and the confusion in Dean ... and the oblivious Sammy and the fatherly Mac .... oh I loved this chapter for so many reasons.

I have another reason for being grateful for your writing ... I now have a new awesome friend ... bring on more. I know I'm ready!!!

Tara x0x



Author's Response:

Aww Shucks Mam' you sure know how to damn near make a grown woman blub!!!

Your efforts to set my scribbling to rights are very near heroic!!!! I love how patient you are and how enthusiastic about all my rantings. I was very nervous about a) letting anyone see the rough stuff but also b) letting anyone have a say (control freak I know!!!) but with you it's like that amicable "deep" discussion at the end of a really great dinner!!! LOL. You only add to things - in the best way! Thank you - you know your off the hook for these reviews right - you have suffered this chapter enough when you beta.... but thanks for the thumbs up!!! :)

And have to agree with you- better than read counts and reviews was getting to know you, it alone makes writing this a worthwhile thing - besides there  ain't enough drool in one woman for Victor - C'mon?!!!!!

Thanks a million for everything Tara.

Abi

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 7

OMG!!! this was SO worth the wait!! I loved it!! I feel so bad for Caleb:(! and what he must be going through. Just imagining that is....wow...well this was another mindblowing chapter, maybe the best of them all! now I just cant wait untill you upload the next chapter....update soon!

 

Jess



Author's Response:

Hi Jess,

Happy as always to hear from you.... really really happy that after making you wait so long you thought this chapter was worth it. Things are going to get worse before they get better for poor Caleb I'm afraid!!! :)

I have to say Jess - your reviews always make me smile, your support throughout this story makes it a pleasure to write - I know in my head that as people read and the count goes up you should get enough of a buzz from that, but there is nothing like being told your work was worth there time, or that they are enjoying what you write - you have always done this for me - so BIG thank-you for that. To show my appreciation, on this occassion ... I can take requests, is there anything you think / would like to see happen, I'll give it a shot?!!!

Cheers Abi.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/09 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

loved it! update soon!!



Author's Response:

Jess!!!

I didn't take it out on Caleb so much in this one then - thankgoodness eh?!!!LOL.

 

Can't promise anything for the next couple of chapters - he kind of gets wailed on a bit!!

 

Thanks for your continued support - and the shiny stuff !!!! (Feel the stars deserve a street name - what do you think?) ;)

Abi. 

Reviewer: LovinJackson (Signed) · Date: 19/08/09 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

Well lets me honest? Who knows how far Humpty could have gone if all the kigs horses and men had gotten there sooner? lmao ... im still half asleep, that's my excuse for this mornings sanity! I am loving this  story. Oh I know I have told you this already but no harm in hearing it over and over and over again? I thought not. Black T-Shirt ... Caleb ... ahem ... yes story and plot! Seriously, mate, all of it is so awesome and its paced well too. Makes it all the more enjoyable to read as your story climbs that hill ... LOVE it!!

Tara x0x



Author's Response:

Hey Tara!!

No absolutly no harm in being told your on the right track - but I am getting addicted to it!!! LOL.

 

Glad you liked the T-shirt moment, it was done for you!!! :) (Story... plot -indeed!!!!)

 

Thank you for all the awesomeness you bring to the table and I am really pleased to hear you say the pace is working - was nervous about this.

Looking forward to what you make of the next chapter.

Abi x

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

please update soon!!! can't wait to read more:)

I feel so bad for Caleb again haha



Author's Response:

Jess - *phew* - I feel it's still going well as your review is here!!!! LOL.

 

Seriously though- thank you for sticking with this and letting me know how you were finding this story. (Ok I mostly seem to make you feel bad for Caleb - ha ha - but that's kind of my aim... don't worry no permanent damage - yet???!!!! Bwhaaaahaaahaaa ;)

Really pleased you are enjoying this - know ch 5 was a bit lacking in the action department. But hope to make this up in coming chapters!

Take Care. Abi

PS - OHHHH the STARS (you sooo have my number ... shameless shiny junkie that I AM!!!!)

 

Reviewer: LovinJackson (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hey there!! You are SO welcome for the help! Betaring for you is a gift to me too. I love this story, I love your writing and I LOVE how you write the characters Brotherhood and Canon. Seriously awesome work, my friend!! You definately do more than justice to these amazing (and incredibly sexy :P) characters!!

Thanks for giving me the chance to be involved :)

Tara x0x



Author's Response:

Tara - what a massive pat on the back to get the thumbs up on writing Caleb (and the Brotherhood) from you. I know you have set yourself really high standards when you enter this AU as you have a deep respect for it and I share that.

Your help was more like fun than a necessary function for my writing - can't thank you enough for being so professional, yet supportive with your Beta-ing (?). I was grinning so much when I read this - seriously, Thanks!

 

BTW - I wrote sexy???? *Blush* That   was NOT in the Catholic schoolgirl handbook!!!! LOL. Much just be the Caleb appreciation!!!! (Enough said - as if I go on I may need to 'M' rate this response!!!LOL)

 

So looking forward to sending you the next chapter... and looking out for yours!!!! (No pressure - but I do sob a little every day I don't see it!!!! *Evil waggling eyebrows!!*)

 

Abi xx

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 12/08/09 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW!!!!!!!!!

I really love this story!!!!! Caleb  is like a 3rd Winchester to me and his well being ranks right up there with Sam and Dean.AWESOME writing!!!!!

You have so skillfully bounced us back and forth , in and out of Caleb's mind- suspense by the truckload!! OUTSTANDING!!!

I love how Dean , as usual , is aware that sonmething is off with his best friend - always the protector.

You have vividely  set the stage and shown us the evil that is hurting Caleb and will hurt the rest of "the family ' thru him EXCELLENTLY  done!!!!!

I love the Brotherhood, and you have done it justice in this story!!!!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you for the very encouraging review.

 In the Brotherhood world Caleb is something of a favorite of mine - I see him as exactly that, the 3rd Winchester! 

You clearly love Ridley's work and it is such a huge compliment that you believe that I am doing it justice - can't thank you enough for that alone... and I haven't even gotten to all the other ego growing comments you made!!LOL :)

 

I am pleased all the twists are coming across clearly for you - writing in the first person and then switching perspectives sometimes blows up in my face!!!! But just thrilled that you seem to have enjoyed this so far

Thank you for your kind review and taking the time to read this - hope it continues to entertain you, and please feel free to let me know how it's going. I am a BIG brotherhood fan too and would hate to be missing the mark when trying to write this AU.

Abi

 

 

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

oooo I loved this!! although the "we will talk again Lucifer" was kind of confusingg...lol, im am  VERY interested to see where this goes, and I LOVE her story I n the Company of Dragons!!!! but Rites of Passage is my fav...lol

 

update soon!

 

-jess



Author's Response:

Jess!!!!

Always a pleasure - good to know you are still enjoying this, sorry for the wait!

"We will talk again Lucifer" - was just Ceceile's way of taunting Caleb about his Demon past. A parting shot.

Oh Rites of Passage IS a great one!! Are you a huge Caleb fan lady? I totally understand!!!!!!!LOL!

You spoil me with the stars - hooked on those!!!! Appreciate how you always make the time to review, a real boost for me. Feel free to let me know how this goes anytime - good or bad ok?

Cheers Abi.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Awwww I feel SO bad for Caleb!!!!

please please PLEASE update soon!!!

jess

9ten stars again! haha)



Author's Response:

Jess - I am a little worried that I'm beating on Damien too much for your liking!!! Is this so - cause I promise Dean will be waiting to step in!!!!! ;-)

I hope to be fairly regular with my posting and not keep you waiting too long. Chapter four is taking shape - just two plot bunnies that refuse to go quietly!!!

Thank you for reviewing every chapter - real boost to know another Brotherhood fan is enjoying this.

Abi.

PS. Just sparkle me up and call me Glitter Barbie  - just saw the stars!!!!LOVING THOSE!!!!!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 2

Aww poor Caleb I feel so bad for him! he is my favorite character in the Brotherhood universe lol.

jess

(you get ten stars again:-)



Author's Response: Hee Heee thought I was the only one who did this!!!!!! :-)

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

Aww poor Caleb I feel so bad for him! he is my favorite character in the Brotherhood universe lol.

jess

(you get ten stars again:-)



Author's Response:

Hey Jess,

I like that you are empathising with Caleb - I DO fee bad for what I put him through, and all the stuff to come!!! (He stays in one piece though  - if that helps???LOL)

He is a favorite of mine too - it makes this story SO much fun to do.

You are making a sparkle addict out of me - thanks for the generous helping of STARS!!! :-)

Abi

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow loved it!

Author's Response:

*Blush Blush * Thank you for reading and reviewing - and OMG all those stars!!! LOL.

Seriously it is a relief that a fellow Brotherhood fan like yourself rates this - please feel free to let me know how it's going!

Cheers Abi

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/05/09 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey hon, I give you props for giving this one a go.  I'm a big fan of Rid's work also and have always entertained givin' her world a go. 

What I read so far is good, just one thing...Caleb Reaves is how you spell his name... not Reeves.  Looking forward to seeing what Porter's got going. ;) Kel



Author's Response:

Hi Kel,

Phew - thank you for a spelling tip!!!! Pretty awful mistake to make !!

As for having props - nah... just no self control!!!! LOL!! I have toyed with this idea forEVER - Ridley (and Tida's) work just fires the imagination you know?

All I was aiming at was to stay faithful to her characters and try to do her creative world justice (I may sound a little stalker chick there??!!!) I was so happy to see your review as you always tell it straight in a constructive way.

Thank you for taking the time.

Abi.

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