Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 07:00 AM · On: Into the woods
Very good. i'd leave mr annoying there if he doesn't want to take any notice, theres always one lol.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 09/08/09 11:49 PM · On: Into the woods
Rescued by campers! I LOVE it!
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 07:48 AM · On: Time spent waiting
A good link, so John knew about this creature, if its in his journal, am intrigued now. The banner is good. Jacq
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 11:13 PM · On: Three sheets to the wind?
Hmm....doesn't like groups, snatches off loners....nope, still no clue what it is! Glad you're back! Hope you had a good vacation!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 04:53 PM · On: Time spent waiting
still loving this one.... glad to see the update!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 03:54 PM · On: Time spent waiting
I'm with Sam, i can't wait to find out what it is lol, a great update and i really love your banner.
Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 11:35 PM · On: Glimmer of hope
Hi, I came over to check out your banner - nice job! - I like it. Of course while I was here I had to read your story again. You know what is fun? Just reading one chapter right after the other :) Thanks again for sharing your stories with us. Take care.
Author's Response: Awww...it's so sweet of you to leave me a review over here, too! *hug* I'm really glad the banner worked for you. I was happy with it, especially since it was only the second one I've ever done. I'm thrilled you liked it! And that you liked the story, even upon a second reading! What a lovely compliment! Thanks again! :)
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 10:00 PM · On: Glimmer of hope
Hope to heaven the campers are friendly, and not the damned loggers who put him there in the first place..... So, the creature doesn't like light either. Two weaknesses - iron and light. Think it's time for Sammy to get his geek on so they can end this thing - after feeding the loggers to it. And what do you mean you're on holidays???????? You owe me another 1800 words! Get back here!!! LOL! Hope you have a great holiday, Beth. Looking forward to that 4000-word chapter when you get back. Jules
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 05:48 AM · On: Glimmer of hope
Thia was very good, loved it. Have a lovely holiday.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 05:15 AM · On: Glimmer of hope
Another amazing double drabble chapter, the pain and damage the creature inflicts! So much out there to get Dean and the forest hampering his escape, and at the beginning a reminder with Sam's few words that this is a story being recounted...and Dean wants to tell it in full with-out interruption! But are the campers safety? Loved it...have a good vacation. Jacq x
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 10:13 PM · On: Out of time
“So how’d you get away?” “Hold your horses, dude, I’m gettin’ there. Y’said you wanted the whole story.” “Fine.” And I just bet there was a little annoyed huff on the tail end of that "Fine"...lol! So the thing is man-shaped - sort of....werewolf? Or something far worse? And those loggers left Dean to be EATEN????? That "Flicker. Coming. Flicker. Closer" was a really effective way of describling the guttering flames making the scene appear as if the images were winking in and out - and it was quite creepy....especially as it's a really windy day here, and the building is creaking with the stronger gusts....lucky the sun is shining, or I'd be a bit freaked right about now... But the creature obviously can be defeated - it backed off from the iron knife. Spirit? Manitou? Goblin? Boogey-man? (okay, I'm clutching at straws now...) So - the two-hundred word drabble was a lovely treat - any chance of adding an extra zero onto the end of that next week, huh, huh? Whadda ya say? 200....2000 - it's only one little zero.... *bats puppy dog eyes* Jules
Author's Response: LOL Nice try, Jules, with the "only one little zero" thing. *snort* Thanks for continuing to read and review, I really appreciate it! I'm SO glad you picked up the huff at the end of that "Fine." I wanted SO badly to write that in, and just couldn't trim any more words off to do so. I'm glad you picked up on it anyway. I'm also really tickled that you liked the "flicker" scene. I've been trying a few different things, technique-wise, that allow me to tell the story in a dramatic way even without many words. I'm thrilled that one worked so well for you! I'm really pleased the creature is still intriguing you, too. Your review really made my day! :) Thanks again for taking the time to leave such a wonderful, thoughtful review. Another chapter will go up Monday. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 04:01 PM · On: Out of time
Ass-h..e loggers and now a nasty sounding creature... Dean has the worst luck- lol! Love the recounting of his missing days.... Sam's impatient need to know and Dean gonna tell as he's darn good and ready.... just love it! Well done! Cant wait for the next bit. I'm really loving drabble-stories like these.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming over to check out another chapter of my drabble fic. I really appreciate the great review! I'm glad the story is still holding your interest, and that you like how I've done the flashback chapters. That means a lot to me! Another chapter of this will go up Monday. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 11:10 AM · On: Out of time
Another exciting chapter! Thanks!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of my story. I really appreciate the review you left! I'm glad you liked this one, it was a challenge to do, but I was pretty happy with how it turned out. If you're enjoying this story, you might like another I'm currently posting, "Always With You." If you check it out, I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again for the great review. Another chapter will go up on Monday.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 03:48 AM · On: Out of time
Very good, at last a glimpse of the creature, a really scary one, guessing maybe a skin walker or maybe wendigo?? but the glowing eyes...claws, oh dear not sure now...lol Loved it again look forward to the next chapter Jacq x
Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of this. I really appreciate the great rating and review you left. I always love to hear from you! I'm glad the creature's intrigued you. You'll see more of it in the next chapter, which will go up Monday. I posted another wee!Chester extended drabble that you might like. It's called "Life's Lessons: Evil Doesn't Stand a Chance." I'd love to hear what you think if you check it out! :) Thanks again! Have a good weekend!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 10:42 PM · On: Out of time
"...pores oozing malice." Great word picture! That's a lot of mean! "...time crawling frame-by-frame. Flicker. Coming. Flicker. Closer. Flicker. Looming. Flicker. Reaching. Flicker." Very effective technique in gauging the monster's advance toward Dean.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for the great review you left for this chapter of my drabble fic. I'm so happy the technique I used on the "flicker" part worked for you, and that the description painted a good picture for you. If you're enjoying this story, you might like another one I've been posting on, "Always With You." I've been experimenting a little with technique and structure in that one, too. It's another action/adventure hurt/comfort. If you decide to check it out, I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again for the great review. It really made my day!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 05:22 AM · On: Out of time
What WAS that thing?!? Ew! I'm glad iron seems to work on it.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming over to check out another chapter of my story, I appreciate it! I'm glad you're still finding it interesting. Another chapter will go up Monday. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 09:25 AM · On: Out of time
Very good, so like Dean, putting Sam first.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of my story, I really appreciate the review. I'm glad you felt this chapter was in character for Dean. I'm happy you're still interested in the story! Another chapter will go up on Monday. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 10:27 PM · On: Belly of the beast
They left him to be eaten by whatever was lurking in the woods?? They are so going down for that. Sam's going to make sure of it. That is so Dean - his first thought is to make sure Sam's not in danger. Jules
Author's Response: Hey there, Jules! Thanks for continuing to read and review each chapter separately. I really appreciate the support! I'm glad you liked this one, it was another difficult chapter to do with just a few words. I'm happy you're still enjoying the story! Another chapter's up now, if you're interested. :) If you're enjoying this story, you might like my (longer) story "Always With You." I'm trying some different things with storytelling and structure, and I'm really pleased with how it's going. I'd love to hear what you think! Thanks again!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 10:25 PM · On: Logger Alert
Those rotten b**tards! Hunting in a pack like dogs. You managed to paint a wonderfully detailed picture with just a few strategically placed brushstrokes, Beth. That fight was very well described. And no, that doesn't mean I'm changing my mind about liking drabbles...*pokes tongue*... Jules
Author's Response: LOL Good to know, Jules. ;) I'm really glad you liked this. The fight scene was such a challenge to do within the word limit. I'm happy it worked for you! Those loggers will get what's coming to them, never fear! LOL Thanks again for the great review!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 10:22 PM · On: Goodwill worn away
Yep, thought Sam was gunna go off his tits. I could just picture the whole pacing, arm-waving, eye-popping episode, followed by that cold look he gets when he's really, really pissed. Looking forward to a few loggers being turned into logs. Jules
Author's Response: Hey there, Jules! Thanks for continuing to read and review! I appreciate the feedback. I was SOOO glad you said you could picture this with the gestures and everything. It killed me not to be able to include those descriptions that I normally so love to do. I'm glad you were able to envision it anyway. Yep, some Winchester justice will definitely be served before it's all over. ;) Thanks again! Another chapter will go up Monday.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 10:20 PM · On: Vigil
A rope-chafed wrist???? What the hell has happened to Dean? And was he saying that Sam's got to stop asking questions, or that he does - giving us a possible hint as to what happened. Perhaps someone took offence at his search for information? Sam's gunna go off his tits when he finds out, isn't he? Carnage coming up, I feel. Jules
Author's Response: I just have to say, your review cracked me up. I think there may be some non-American definition of "tits" that I'm not aware of. *snickers* But yeah, Sam's gonna be on the warpath, for sure. And you may just be on the right track with your reasoning about Dean's ramblings. I was thrilled it made you wonder--you were the only reviewer who mentioned his statement at all. I'm glad you're still intrigued by this! I post once a week on it, usually on Mondays.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 10:17 PM · On: "Steady, big brother. I gotcha."
"Relief. They were together. Everything else was fixable." That epitomises it for me - as long as they are together, everything is fixable. So - this is even more intriguing than the first little snippet...but that's all part of your evil plan, isn't it? *wags finger* Ooh - and have to say that I love Sammy in protective mode - that last line was just scrumptious! Heaven help whatever or whoever, indeed. *rubs hands with glee before moving on* Jules
Author's Response: Hey there, Jules! Thanks for coming back to check out more of my story, I really appreciate it! Yep, that line kinda sums up their relationship and lives for me, too. Glad you liked it! And who says I have an evil plan? *whistles* *looks innocent* ;) Oh yeah, Sammy in protective mode--LOVE him. We'll get to see him in here for sure. And if you love protective Sam, be sure to check out the regular-length fic I've started, "The Soul Collector." Loads of protective Sam in that one! Thanks again, Jules!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:52 PM · On: Belly of the beast
Oooh! So scary! There was so much to love in this chapter! You have a gift for finding the perfect word combinations for your descriptions (like "the rotting- passion-fruit-scent of death" and "devouring velvet-clawed darkness lurked").
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for the wonderful review you left for this chapter. I'm so tickled to hear that you liked the descriptions I came up with. Having a really strict word limit has compelled me to come up with some phrases and wording that I've been really happy with. I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying them! And I'm thrilled that you found this chapter to be scary. I was definitely going for that, but wasn't sure how successful it would be with such a short chapter. I'm tickled to hear that it worked. Thanks again for the wonderful reviews. They really made my day! I update this story once a week, so the next chapter should go up on Monday. Hope to see you back here then! :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:48 PM · On: Logger Alert
Wonderful technique breaking up the repeated lines to insert the blows Dean sustains. And the intensifying darkness lets us know the condition Dean is in. Incredible!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you, so much, for the great feedback you left for this chapter. I really appreciate hearing what you thought of it! The fight scene was a real challenge to do within the word allotment, so I'm thrilled that it worked so well for you. And that you picked up on the intended purpose of the darkness lines. If you're enjoying this story, you might like another that I'm working on. It, too, is done using a word limit for each chapter, though I do allow myself more than drabble-length after the first couple of chapters. It's an action/adventure hurt/comfort, too. I'm experimenting with a couple of different things in it, regarding technique, structure, and storytelling. If you're interested, it's called "Always With You." I'd love to hear what you think, if you check it out! :) Thanks again for taking the time to read and review!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 10:46 PM · On: Goodwill worn away
Loggers? what? Not what I'd expected. But then people are sometimes more dangerous than the supernatural.
Author's Response: Hey there! I'm so glad that this chapter held some surprises for you. I love fics where the boys go up against humans. "The Benders" was one of my favorite eps. I think it adds an interesting element and also restricts the boys, because they don't just want to go around killing humans. Anyway, I'm really glad the story is holding your attention. Thanks for taking the time to read and review! :)
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