Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 02:34 PM · On: Parking lessons
LOL - trust Dean to pick on something totally inane like how the Chevy is parked...*rolls eyes*... And that's doubly funny, since it was probably Dean who taught Sam how to drive in the first place. Installments have to be drabble-sized? No problems - just write forty or so drabbles and post them all up on the same night - problem solved! ROFL Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 10:18 AM · On: Parking lessons
YaY! I always love when Dean's giving Sam crap, especially on behal of his beloved Impala. I guy's gotta look out for his favorite girl!
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 10:13 AM · On: Parking lessons
Really good to have a breather, Dean can be so picky!!! lol Nice one. Jacq
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 09:49 AM · On: Parking lessons
Dang,,, I haven't been reviewing.. I had added your story to my favorites.. if that counts at all. I like your story ..now I have to look at your past stories and see if I was good or not. I tend to not review as much on this site as I always forget to login.. so when I'm ready to review.. I have to log in.. then find the story again etc etc... basically I get too lazy. Not an excuse.I know. But I do thank you for your effort and enjoy reading your fics.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 07:10 AM · On: Parking lessons
Heh. Dean being a snot cracks me up. I should be all caught up on reviews now!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/10/09 06:37 AM · On: Parking lessons
Wonderful, lol.
Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 22/10/09 12:53 AM · On: Coming home
Were you trying to copy the Patti Smith stong about counting down steps? B/c it kind of sounds similar. Anyway, loved the detail about Dean having the helpful campers drop him off at the wrong hotel. Even injured and concussed, he's still paranoid enough to protect Sam's whereabouts from strangers. Very well-written!
Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for coming over to read and review! I appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback. I don't know who Patti Smith is, and I haven't heard a song like this, so I wasn't trying to copy anything. If there are similarities, they're purely coincidental. Guess it's true what they say--there's nothing new under the sun!
I'm glad you liked the detail about Dean having the kids drop him off at the wrong hotel and that you thought the writing was good. That means a lot to me. If you're enjoying this story, you might like another I just finished, "Always With You." If you check it out, I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again! I plan to get more of this up soon. Hope to see you back here then.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 08:24 PM · On: Coming home
I like how you told this from Dean's point of view. just get to Sam was his only concern. great job on this story. Now that we are back to where the story started i am wondering what is next.
Renee - DDDDDD
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for coming over to read and review, I loved hearing what you thought of this chapter. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far. A couple of new chapters are up now, if you're still interested. I'd love to hear what you think! :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 06:49 AM · On: Coming home
Another wonderful chapter! Even in his weakened condition, Dean is ever the vigilant hunter. I was surprised that he'd let the kids know where he was staying and then more suprised when it wasn't their real motel. You got me both times! You made Dean's trip to the motel laborious and tense. With every sentence, I found myself pushing him onward and scooting a little closer to the edge of my seat. Having him take strength from the Impala was fabulous! I was so relieved when he finally reached the door. *whew!*
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 06:40 AM · On: Coming home
'He was trapped in a foreign car with emo music and people who weren't Sam.' ROFLMAO! Oh, my poor Deany-babe. Never mind his injuries and the fact that there's something evil out there in the dark - lol. Loved how he set up that diversion by walking into the motel they weren't staying at, then doing a bunk as soon as he was out of sight. And really loved the countdown - twelve steps left - eight - six - four - two. Until he reached home - and Sam. Awesome - just one thing though.....where are my other 8,700 words? They're coming, right? Right....... Hmm - what do I have to do here.....ah! *Julie - D.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 05:24 AM · On: Coming home
Another fantastic chapter. * Lindsay,S, can't wait to find out what you are up to lol.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 04:30 PM · On: Coming home
ahhh -- I'd gotten behind on this one. I love how it was the "crappiest" road trip ever- just because there was no food, no Impala and no Sam... thats sooo sweet. I cant wait to get them back to the present. I Imagine Sam has a few things to say to Dean- heehee...
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming over to read and review this chapter, I really appreciate it! I'm so glad you liked the detail about Dean's attitude toward the road trip and why--I like throwing little things like that in there to show how important the boys are to each other. And yeah--Sam definitely has a few things to say to Dean, LOL. A couple more chapters are up now, if you're still interested. I'd love to hear what you think! :) Merry Christmas!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 02:36 PM · On: Car rides and kid brothers
*snicker* Treating his brother like a child....interesting how that's been an issue in the current season....
Author's Response: Hey there! I'm so happy you got a laugh from this chapter, I've had it mostly written for a few months now, and it gave me a chuckle when I did it. I was surprised to see it come up again in the recent ep, right when I was due to post this, LOL. I don't know if you've read my story "Parenting Your Gifted Child," but it explores a bit why it might be that Dean has such a hard time not treating Sam like a kid. If you check it out, I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again! Your reviews really made my day!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 02:34 PM · On: Losing the light
I hate Jack. I'm glad Dean punches him later.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 02:33 PM · On: Time spent waiting
I think Sam might have guessed what it was, he was so smart. Love the banner, btw.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 02:32 PM · On: Glimmer of hope
I don't think I even READ this chapter. Which might have made future chapters make more sense. *hangs her head in shame*
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 02:30 PM · On: Goodwill worn away
I'm frankly really surprised at how many chapters I've missed reviewing. I thought I was doing so well! Great chapter, of course!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 02:27 PM · On: Vigil
Why didn't I review this chapter earlier? I remember the chapter very well....hmm....Of course the Sammy comfort chapter is wonderful. Glad Dean gets to sleep.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 02:26 PM · On: Coming home
Oh, I love surprises! I don't remember if I've reviewed every chapter or not! I'll go check! In the meantime, I think this might be my favorite chapter so far. Two blocks isn't that far, but when you're injured? FOREVER. For me, I did that in a pair of REALLY HIGH heels I'd never walked in before. Okay, not as bad as Dean, but I got slower and slower as the distance lengthened. I thought I'd never make it. I felt that with poor Dean too. Just loved it. Julie * (or will be) N
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 19/10/09 01:10 PM · On: Coming home
I really lived every step as he stumbled the two blocks to get to Sam, think I may have been holding my breath too...lol Again much said with few words, nice one. Jacq
Reviewer: birdandbaby2008 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 07:01 PM · On: Car rides and kid brothers
Hahaha!! The last lines are perfect! :)
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for coming over to check out my story and leave me a review, I appreciate it! I'm glad this made you laugh, and that you liked the last line. I've had this chapter written in my head for a while now and was really anxious to get to it, so I'm glad you liked it! A few more chapters are up now, if you're still interested. I'd love to hear what you think of them, if you decide to check them out! :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 08:21 AM · On: Car rides and kid brothers
Another fantastic one lol.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 06:59 AM · On: Car rides and kid brothers
"---it was enough to make him wonder who in the universe he’d ticked off this time." Hilarious! with the Winchester kiss of bad luck, I'd think I'd seriously pissed off someone just about every day. Sam's protest at the end was great! Not only does he get to put in his two cents but we're reminded that Dean is retelling the story to his brother. I knew Dean would hate riding in the foreign job! Thank you for putting that lovely little tidbit in! The eye twitch was a perfect addition and really reinforces how loyal he is to the Impala.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 04:39 AM · On: Car rides and kid brothers
Oh I really love this one (and all of them) but that everyone thinks Sam is a kid just makes me laugh, and I can just see Sam's face at the end! Funnee...glad they're finally getting out of trouble. Nice one. Jacq
Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 12:06 AM · On: Car rides and kid brothers
Funny!
Author's Response: Hey there! I'm so glad you liked this chapter of my story and thought it was funny. I've been trying to do more humorous stuff lately. If you like humor, check out my drabble "Turbulence." I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again for the feedback. Another chapter's up now, hope you enjoy!
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