Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
That was a realy good story, and challenging from the 2nd person perspective. I felt like I was looking out of Dean's eyes but watching him from the outside at the same time. Nice one. Jacq
Author's Response: Ooh - thanks for all the reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed it - and persevered with the 2nd POV. It was fun to write and one of my earliest stories. If I was to go back and rewrite I think I'd do some things differently, but not many :)
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
That was so action packed, and there is another chapter to read....great Jacq
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
Now Charlie has messed with Sam's head...not good Great chapter Jacq
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 20/08/09 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 3
Chapter 2 & 3: This story is drawing me in and I almost don't notice the 2nd person point of view now, yeah with Dean's last question, I wonder why, as well. Jacq
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 19/08/09 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Jenny Thank you for the link to this story, its an entirely differant reading experience. I found that because I had to think in 2nd person that I took longer to read it so absorbed more details, The experiment is good, the story I like, Poor Dean, everyone seems to think they are such a couple lol I am now wanting to read the whole story, but must do the paid work thing so will check out Chapter 2 this evening. Jacq
Author's Response: Hey Jacq, Because it's not a common POV it does take longer to get your head round it I think. People aren't used to seeing 2nd person and you're right - it does take a bit more effort to read (and write) it. It's easy to slip back into 3rd so checking and double checking is really important. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/06/09 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed reading your story. I'm glad they were able to send Charlie to where ever he is meant to be. I guess in away Sam is right, he did leave Dean and that did hurt him. Looking forward to more of your stories!
Author's Response: Yeah, Sam did leave Dean but I think by this point they've both accepted that it happened and they're both able to move on from that hurt. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
Thanks for the great read, i enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks for sticking with it and for all the reviews. I really appreciate each one.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
An action packed chapter. I must say that the first thing i thought of was the Chipmunks when i read the name Alvin lol.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another great chapter! This story just keeps getting better as it goes along.
Author's Response: Thanks - I hope I can keep it going in that direction for you :)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
This story's getting really exciting, i'm enjoying it, can't wait to find out what happened to Sam.
Author's Response: Ooh - I hope I can live up to expectations on that one. I have to admit there is a glaring plot hole in this story but I'm going to try and fix it before I post the next chapter. Thanks for all the reviews - they make my day.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/05/09 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hmmm....wonder why Charlie chose Dean? Does Charlie know that Dean and Sam are brothers since he's been in his mind (Charlie thought Dean was being dishonest with him earlier). I'm really looking forward to the nextp post, and I love the Dean POV in this story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like Dean's POV. I just got myself into his head (and it's quite a scary place lol) and this is what happened. Thanks for the reviews, I do appreciate them.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/05/09 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great update, i enjoyed this chapter, looking forward to finding out what Charlie does next.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/05/09 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter, so Charlie's the ghost, poor Dean having him inside of his head. Im loving this story, looking forward to more.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/05/09 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
Yikes! Poor Dean! That must have been pure torture for him to have an entity in his mind reading his darkest deepest secrets that he doesn't share wiht anyone. I guess "Charlie" figured out that Sam and Dean are not a couple, but brothers instead. I wonder what Charlie will do next. I'm really enjoying your story with Dean's POV.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
Another good chapter. I like the writing style. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
A great start to this story, i liked how you wrote it from Dean's pov, looking forward to finding out what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm playing around with POVs at the moment, deciding which I like best.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
I hope you don't leave us hanging too long. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Next chapter should be up on Wednesday. I'm aiming to update weekly. Hope you can wait that long :)
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm...very interesting. I wonder who the ghost will go after? Dean or Sammy? I really like Dean's POV in this story. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Hi - thanks for the review (and rating). The POV was an experiment really so I'm glad you like it. I think it turned out okay :)
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