Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Very well done!

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

I had faith in you and you didn't let me down. Excellent how you wrote this!

Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read on this or any other fanfic site for that matter. Seriously, incredibly well donne, totally beleivable, and perfectly characterized. The action and buildup was awesome, and your portrayal of Dean was spot on.

Seriously, loved it.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

Seriously Refur, you NAILED this story and I absolutely loved it. Your version of Dean snark in stream-of-consciousness format is hilarious and heart-wrenching at the same time - and I'm not usually a fan of that form of narration because it can sometimes be draining for the reader. Not when you use it so capably. Eve though this story was really from Dean's POV, you still managed to demonstrate the bond between the brothers, and their mutual concern for each other, so well. I truly loved that about this piece. And I would LOVE to see you write a story with Sam narrating it, because...well, just because I think you would do a great job with it!  Many thanks for such great entertainment!

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

It was fun to take a ride in Dean's mind in this story.  You did such a great job with his running commentary. Even at his deepest angst he was still Dean: funny, sarcastic and so human.

Loved the text messaging part -- you said so much with so little. Of course stealing the ambulance was priceless too and smart.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 25/04/07 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great! As always just too many great lines to mention. Ok, just one, the "guy" whose job it is to fuck up Dean's life - and especially the business cards to go with the position lmao!

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

Once again, what an awesome chapter.  I can see both boys points of view on this one.  Dean wanting to keep away from Sam for his health, but Sam needing his brother close by and willing to fight this by "killing him".  I don't envy Dean at this point.  I can't wait to see what happens with your next chapter!

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 3

Refur, thoroughly enjoying your tale... so much so that I thoroughly got lost in it and will be completely late for work!!!!! (unrepentant!!!!)

Love the way it's all told through Dean's train of thought. This is at it's best when you see that Dean is not comfotable with the "chickflick" stuff - justifying holding Sam's hand when at his hospital bed or staying when Sam asks him not to leave- even in the safety of his own head! Really believable freaked out Dean - frantic, defensive sarcasim works a treat!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 2

Set of skis in hell - just great.  Great Great Story. K

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

Another great chapter, it has everything: angst, humour, twists, banter, you name it! And while I'm having such a great time reading such an entertaining piece of writing, I can't help but admire the way you always keep your eye on the crux of the whole matter - brotherhood. Loved these lines so much:

 He doesn’t even remember where he was this morning, what he was doing, and OK, he doesn’t really know what he’s doing now, but he knows what he is. He’s a brother, and he’s not letting some goddamn extra from The Craft take that away from him without a fight.

And I hope you don't mind that I "eavesdropped" on your conversation with another reviewer, but if you have other work somewhere else I am so heading off to read it. I am normally flat out keeping up with reviews on this site, but I might have to make an exception in this case!

Thanks again. 

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

"I’m hunting you down and hugging you.”---OMG you had me rollin!  I think this is my favorite story of your so far which kinda sucks because ya know its not completed yet and I have to WAIT and me not being so good at the waiting part...

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this story, keep it up!

 

Laura

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

Holy Crap!  What a way to get to Dean--Make Sammy deathly sick whenever he gets close.  Dean is gonna pulverize that witch!