Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 24/08/09 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 18

Wow what a great end chapter,  so glad that the boys got out in one piece and the nasty got what she deserved.  Thought Deputy Lewis took the supernatural story a little to well, those pesky demons get everywhere, don't they?  Thanks for writing this.

Author's Response: Thank for you wonderful words.  I didn't mean to make the deputy so easy on the supernatural thing but I have friend in law enforcement and they seem to be very open to the unusually.  Deputy Lewis was kinda molded after him.  Glad you like this story though.  I am working on another one and hope you like it too.Keep an eye out for its posting.  Thanks again for the reading and reviews.  The R&R does feed the creative juices.  Thanks again  D

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/09 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 16

Now I don't know if Sam is still under the influence or if there really is an invisible woman causing all this.   I'm looking forward to reading more of the story to find out.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter, too short though, now I have to wait for the next update.  Poor Dean, I hope that Sam and Bobby are able to bring him back, . Can't wait for the next post.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 14

Poor  Dean. I'm sure he is hallucinating here. That really played into his self doubts about himself. 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 12

Yikes! I'm with Sam! I'm not sure what is real and what is not? Is Dean dreaming about the evil in his room, has it possessed him in his coma? Has his heart stopped? I'm really anxious to find out!!

Author's Response: Evil has its limits and so does this story.  The problem now is when will it end for the brothers.  I still have a few more "FUN" things to do and I hope you're still with me on them.  Thanks for reading.  D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

Well, hopefully, Dean is having a nightmare here. Looking forward to what you have in store for us next.


Author's Response: Nightmare?!?  What is a nightmare and what isn't?  What is a dream and what isn't?  The pieces will start to fall into place soon.  BUT How much more will there be?  Thanks for staying with me.  D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/06/09 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 10

Well, looks like both Dean and Sam are being tortured both physically and emotionally. I wonder what the witch is going to do next. Seems like they are actually in a real hospital, the staff are being hoodwinked by this crazy woman. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: YOu have given me an IDEA!  THanks.  And thanks for reading.  D

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 9

Are these poor boys ever going to get a break?  :D   I am enjoying this story and can't wait to see where it goes next.

Author's Response: Break the boys?  That's an idea!  Thanks for reading and thanks for enjoying walking through my crazy little mind here. (Evil grin)  More to come  Thanks again.  D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/06/09 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh my god! What the frak was that? Is Sam still dreaming? What's going on? Please, please don't leave us hanging here long with this bit!!!

Author's Response:

Is he?  Dreaming that is.  The fun is not over yet.  (whisper to self) I am having so much fun.  (rubs hands together.  Thanks for staying with me, Dude.  More fun to come.  :)  D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 7

Did the blood start straying (not so bad) or spraying (really bad!)? I'm really worried for both boys here, wonder what the demon's motives are. She or he (?) sure likes to torment Sam mentally and Dean physically, it seems. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that someone will come in soon and help out both brothers. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: (Rubs head) How bad was it spraying?  How bad would cutting the carotid artery bleed?  I am having so much fun here.  (evil laugh)  I found being mean to the boys really turns on the reviews.  Thanks for reading.  Don't worry.  I won't kill anybody, imporant anyway.  :)  Thanks again. D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/05/09 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

I think you should continue. I wonder if Dean will ever find out what really happened? Will he be used again in this "game"? What exactly does she want Sam to do? Is it a real hospital that they are in? I think he needs to come clean with what really happened to Dean. I think he is more vulnerable here not knowing. Looking forward to more (I hope).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  I have to say, I am having so much fun on this story.  I hope you  like the direction I got with it.  (Evil Grin).  Please stay with me and enjoy the ride.  Thanks again for reading.  D

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 5

I don't think you should it here.  We need to know how they get away.  Right?

Author's Response: Oh don't worry.  I will get the brothers back to safe ground eventually.  thanks for reading  D

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 17/05/09 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm interested in learning who this woman is and why she's so keen on getting Sam to use his powers.

Just a quick note: I think you mean 'catalyst' and not 'catalyze.'

Author's Response: Thank you.  I didn't realize I used the wrong word.  I spell so bad even spell check gets confuse.  Thanks for reading.  More will come soon.  D