Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 16/01/07 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I'm really liking this.
Author's Response: Hooray! *grins*
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 14/01/07 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, great chapter! I really like the flashbacks.
Author's Response: Thank you -- glad you like the flashbacks. It's really the only way I've yet been able to write John... Hope you enjoy the rest! GS
Reviewer: ReddiF (Signed) · Date: 13/01/07 10:00 PM · On: Epilogue
If I was in a book store and saw your name - I would buy the book because, I would know, that I would enjoy every minute of it.
Author's Response: Wow. I almost don't know what to say to that except... thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story... hope you enjoy future ones that are posted here. Thanks so much for reading. :) GS
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 12/01/07 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great opening chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest... Happy reading... GS
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 06:20 PM · On: Epilogue
This is my first ever review! By the time I had discovered this website, you had 3 completed stories up, and so this is really a review of all 3. Congratulations! I was enthralled. It is the bond between the brothers that appeals to me in the show, and you have captured it beautifully. Of course, you have developed this theme beyond where the show would probably go, but as far as I am concerned you could not go too far! Dean's heroism in the show is a little underrated too, but I feel that you portray it wonderfully through Sam's growing understanding of his brother. I also admire your drawing of the characters of Brenna and Abe. For me they reflect your audience's admiration (well, mine at least!) for Dean and Sam. I hope you have another story in the pipeline, because I am longing for more! My compliments, Ciel
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you. I really appreciate your review and especially the kudos on Brenna and Abe. Including an OFC is usually chancy in this fandom, but I really wanted a way to show a part of Dean -- inside him, if you will -- that he wouldn't willingly show us himself. And thus, Brenna appeared. I so love these brother's and their bond, so thanks for saying that for you I did them justice. I have some more up my sleeve, but have been writing for a different medium for a bit. I'll have another to post in a few weeks. Hope to see you then!
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
lol...sorry i didn't mention this story when i reviewed Holding on to Let Go...Ramble On...both were very interesting...loved how you incorporated flashbacks from the show within the confines of your story...Sam and Dean were right on the mark!!! i read each one through in one sitting...lol...i am a very fast reader and after only one week of discovering this awesome site, i have darn near ran out of stories!!! so...i look forward to reading more of your work soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I appreciate the kudos as this was one of those challenging stories for me. I'm glad it worked for you. :) I am working on more, but it may be a bit before I post. Hope to see you on the review pages when I do, though. PS -- gotta ask... are you a BSG fan? Your penname makes me think yes... ;) GS
Reviewer: finch (Signed) · Date: 06/01/07 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awsome couldn't stop reading
Author's Response: Thanks, Finch. I appreciate your taking time to send me a review! Hope you enjoy the rest. GS
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 04/01/07 03:01 PM · On: Epilogue
Whew, I couldn't write myself tonight, so I indulged myself in the remaining chapters! I totally enjoyed this and hung on every word. Once again, thank you so much for sharing this here with us....
Author's Response: You're welcome. I was honored to have been invited and am excited to be a part now that it's... what, live? Is that the lingo? I'm so last year in my terminology. I'm glad you liked the story and I hope to see you on a review page near me again ... whenever I get something completed enough to post! :) GS
Reviewer: Novembers_Guest (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 11:27 PM · On: Epilogue
Well, you already know I love it. What's the point in saying more. Again, congrats on the zine invite.
Author's Response: Thanks. On both the review and the zine comment. And even if the love is known, it's always good to get confirmation. ;)
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was just totally excellent! I'm short on time, so I'm going to have to restrain myself to a chapter a night, but I already know it will be worth the wait!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Well you're welcome. Thank YOU for reading. :) Can't wait to see what you think of the rest.
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 10:43 AM · On: Epilogue
I think you made the right decision ending it where you did, but I also think this was an excellent standalone. Your OC's were wonderful and deserved a little time to reflect, and it always does my heart good to know that John wasn't ignoring his boys all that time. The best line was the one when Abe said he was proud to stand in John's shoes, because he'd never forget the way Dean looked at him when he thought Abe was John. Hmm, this is a three icon story, LOL, which means nothing at all except I'm bored and like to post icons in my reviews. LOL.   
HT
Author's Response: Thanks -- I'm glad I posted it here to see what ya'll think, but won't be posting it anywhere else. John's a hard one for me to write -- mainly because I'm weak and project my own parent issues onto him. I'm glad you liked it enough for three icons. LOVE the 'killing him softly' one... yowza.
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 10:43 AM · On: Epilogue
I think you made the right decision ending it where you did, but I also think this was an excellent standalone. Your OC's were wonderful and deserved a little time to reflect, and it always does my heart good to know that John wasn't ignoring his boys all that time. The best line was the one when Abe said he was proud to stand in John's shoes, because he'd never forget the way Dean looked at him when he thought Abe was John. Hmm, this is a three icon story, LOL, which means nothing at all except I'm bored and like to post icons in my reviews. LOL.
HT
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 8
Haha, the line about Dean running out of choices when he was four made me think of the last chapter of LOL where Dean had to ask for options. That poor boy. Stuck in such a rut, and for some reason we love to see him angsting away in it. I sincerely hope he finds a way out someday. HT
Author's Response: Ditto... but not too soon... because of the way that angst plays across that beautiful face. Sigh.
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 7
Awww, schmoop. Teehee. HT
Author's Response: Dude, this was one of those chapters that pulled me down with it, you know? I swear I rewrote it like four times because I kept crying myself when Dean was forced to realize that John hadn't really been there... 'Course, I am, pretty much, the world's biggest sap... Hope you like the end. :)
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 5
Awww. *gives cookies for using the word palpable correctly. * LOL.
Author's Response: *Takes cookie with grin* I'm not one bit sorry that you're still reading instead of partying. Not one bit. ;)
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh yeah, forgot to mention, Fire bad, Tree pretty, LOL. From BTVS, LOL. HT
Author's Response: I'm glad you got that one -- only one other review mentioned something about the buffyverse reference. heh.
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
Ha! Made it through another, darn my hide. HT
Author's Response: *claps hands gleefully*
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
haha, you learned about cliffie blackmail somewhere, you bitch! Here's a secret though, it dont really work at 2 a.m. bwahahahaha, but I"m gonna try one more chappie before bed. HT
Author's Response: My take on cliffie's? They are a way for a somewhat insecure writer (moi) to try to ensure her readers will return... Sigh. Thwarted by the early morning hours... sorta... 'cause, well, you're still reading... ;)
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oy! Loving teh flashbacks. Poor broken boys. Sniff. HT
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to find a way to write John and taking a peek into their past was the best way I could think of...
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/07 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hmm, totally intrigued. It's after one a.m, LOL. Obviously, I'm reading instead of partying, but woohooo! Blood party in the wendigo cave. HT
Author's Response: Eh, I'd prefer to party with the Winchesters any day... Wendigo or no Wendigo. Psyched to see you're reading!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 12:55 AM · On: Epilogue
GS - saved my review till the end cause i read it in one sitting - wonderful story- loved the flashbacks -esp to the old hunts -epilogue was good too -glad u put it in
Author's Response: My first spnville review! Thanks, Tree for reading. Glad you liked it.
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