So, English is not your mother tongue? Wow I didn't even notice. Though English isn't my mother tongue either so... Anyway. Like I said in my previous review, you write weechesters well. I loved how you described little Sammy's thoughts; how he wondered if salt wasn't good for spirits the same way salt wasn't good for small children; how he wanted to give Dean a band-aid... etc.
I think this was just sweet and not cheesy at all. Yeah, I guess I like this one more than your other fic too although I like both. I really think you should keep writing, you are good already, but you can always improve.
Oh I almost forgot... Welcome to the site!
thank you for your thoughtful reviews, you made me smile :)
i guess that john is my weak spot and i tend to portray him as the mean one, because it makes things easier...i'll have to work on my shades of gray ;)