Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 08/03/10 03:02 PM · On: Problem Shared, Problem Halved?
*blushes* Okay, so the last chapter LOOKED like chapter 11....you get two reviews for that, I guess! I totally want to go back and read the whole story when it's done so I can see the whole big picture when it's all put together. Now, as to the REAL chapter 11....Of COURSE Sam is supposed to wear the amulet! It's perfect, and it makes me excited to see what the effects will be. I'm NOT surprised that Anna was done with it with the way she slept all last chapter. It was clear she was getting worse. I hope she's recoverable! I'm still glad that you are still working on this story! Keep that muse going, but since I know you started writing because you were feeling yucky, I'd really prefer that you feel healthy AND have the desire to write both at the same time!
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/03/10 08:40 AM · On: Problem Shared, Problem Halved?
Well that was worth waiting for, excellent as always,i'm glad that you updated.
Author's Response: aw, thanks babe! I tell you, I was on the brink of giving up on it. It just wouldn't work and I got very angry - even considered giving up writing altogether. I am glad you think it was worth it. I hope to update soon. Especially since I have a new multichap in my head that needs writing too. Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 08/03/10 12:19 AM · On: Revelations
Of course you're allowed to use the host/vessel concept! In fact, I think you've done pretty well updating the story to the new information this season has given us! I did feel a tinge of regret over Anna. I like what you've done with her, and I'm sad the show killed her off. Mostly, I am very VERY glad that you were inspired to write more of this! Thank you!
Author's Response: Oooooh, a second review here. Ta! So, you feel sorry for Anna? Me too. Although I can't promise you that she'll survive the apocalypse. Remember Amy? *evil grin* I am not saying I am killing her. But if/when you read the 11th chap you will see there is a lil trouble for her in the immediate future... Hugs and thanks again for never losing you faith in me! Ilka
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 14/10/09 10:02 AM · On: Revelations
I love the idea of ancestry.. It has always bothered me that all we get is "it's always been you Sam!" or "it has to be you Sam".... WHY? This makes sense to me and I hope the writers have that in mind as well... it works. Smart you!! Thanks
Author's Response: *blushes* not smart but creative and obsessive I would say. LOL. Soon as Cas said "it's in your blood" I went and looked up special relations between angels and human and BANG: there it was. LOL. Thanks for reviewing and I am sorry to have kept you waiting for an answer this long. I promise it won't happen again! Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 11:18 PM · On: Revelations
I KNOW! This has been posted forever, and I'm only now reviewing it! Life kind of exploded, and I'm struggling to deal with the mess. I've had this up in a window all day today as a prize for me being a good girl and getting lots of things done. So here I am enjoying my reward! And what a reward! WOW! I love the Nephilim stories, and I'm glad to see how you've worked the legend in so easily with Supernatural. You've also given us a good explanation about why someone might make a good vessel for angels. Although, I don't know if the angels would be very happy about vessels created by the fallen host of heaven that followed Lucifer. Kind of evil, you know? You also had some very yummy boys in pain moments. Mmmm. Yummy. I think you can use whatever details you want to. Okay, so it follows the show. So what? You're writing a good story, don't feel guilty about it. That's what the disclaimer is all about, right? Keep going, and have fun!
Author's Response: Jules... *hides face in shame* I could I not have answered this one? Damn... Sorry hunny... Well I don't really think of the Grigori as fallen angels but as similar to Anna. They chose to follow their free will. And over time they mixed with humans rendering their celestial and loyal siblings able to walk among the human beings. So, I kinda think that's okay. On the other hand, just look at how the angels talk about their meatsuits. They don't seem to like em that much, do they? That's sorta consistent with my idea... Hugs and thanks in advance for the second review of this chappie. I love that you came back again to read and review! hugs you tight, Ilka
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 10:25 AM · On: Revelations
Loved this chapter and the idea of the fallen angels. I did look at something like that for a story but I couldn't get it to go the way that I wanted. I think you should just stick to what you are going to do and never mind where the show takes it's own version of the mythology. Half the time I think Kripke steals from us fanfic-ers anyway! lol I think that it is an interesting way to go and I for one would love to read it, so go for it girl! Mary x
Author's Response: Mary! I am so awfully sorry that I am so late on responding to your review. Thanks for the stars as well. Know, that your comment is very much appreciated and that I am sticking to the idea of the Winchesters being related to the Grigori. Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/10/09 09:38 AM · On: Revelations
I loved this chapter, lots of tension when Dean and Sam were driving to meet each other, i think your idea of the Winchesters being descendants from the fallen angels is fantastic,really interesting. looking forward to finding out more.
Author's Response: Thanks hunny and I have to apologize for being this much behind on responding to you kind words. It only shows how little time I have... sorry. Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/09 05:57 PM · On: Linked
That was another great chapter. I hope the boys find each other soon. I hate it when they are apart. :p
Author's Response: Hey zz1989, Oh, rest assure they will get back together! Been apart long enough now. Thanks for reviewing and these ickle starsies! See ya! Ilka
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 09:15 AM · On: Linked
HI Ilka This is great honey, I've really enjoyed it so far and can't wait to see where you take it. The fight in this chapter was awesome and finally Sam is free of Lucifer. I worry for how long though. Loved Lucifer's touch eating away at Dean's insides too. Just a little short review to let you know that I am reading and loving! Mary xx
Author's Response: Hey Mary! Nice of you to drop by and leave some lines and the pretty stars! Yeah, the disgrace thing is just one of my ideas to enjoy my sick habit of hurting Dean. LOL. Such fun! And I think your worries might be coming true... hehehehe.... Thanks for reviewing and feel free to come back for the next chappie! Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/10/09 05:57 AM · On: Linked
This was an exciting chapter,a great fight scene between Gabriel and Lucifer. So glad Sam's free, just need him to get to Dean now, looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay! My fav reviewer is back! YAY You liked the action scene? I find them particularly hard to write, so I am even more excited you liked it! I will start writing 10 on Sunday and hope to finish it then too. See you on the next one then! Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 30/09/09 11:54 PM · On: Linked
Oh WOW that was fabulous! The fight between Gabriel and Lucifer ROCKED. Seriously, I was breathless through the whole thing, and the fact that Sam was able to break free was GREAT. Of course, now things are really a mess. Poor Sam is hurt- with scars to boot. Dean is hurt. The angels are suffering. Things are definitely not pretty. On a side note, I'm really glad Sam took Gabriel's sword. I HATE it when the good guys don't take the weapons. I was telling Sam through the whole getting patched up part of the chapter to get back there and get the sword. Now I hope it helps them. Thank you- Cal too- for having a chapter up for me before I left. It was a good one. I'll miss everyone while I'm gone. I'll miss the boys too, since we won't be able to catch Thursday's episode. Sigh. It's a good thing it's HAWAII. It's a tough trade, but I think I'll survive it.
Author's Response: Hey hun, I hope you're enjoying the trip as much as you should! You missed an awesome episode! Thanks for reviewing babe! And I am glad that you liked the fight. I am totally scared of writing action. Always very hard for me. Don't do action that well... And yeah, all of the guys need some down time, huh? Guess what? They ain't gettin it! Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 09:22 PM · On: Bleeding Guilt
I hope your muse lets Sam be saved, and Sam and Dean get to be brothers again. I'll be keeping my fingers crossed for that! :p
Author's Response: Hey there! Nice to see you again! mmmh. My muse is a bitch... but... hmmm No I won't tell you! You'll just have to keep on reading! Hehee. No seriously. I thank you so much for leaving these words! And I will try and persuade the muse, promise. Cheers! Ilka
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 03:37 PM · On: Bleeding Guilt
That was an exciting chapter, i don't think it's to close to the show, remember this is your story and i love it lol.
Author's Response: Hey Lindsay. Thanks for reviewing so consistently. You don't know how much that means to me. I have already started writing chapter 9 which will hold a little more action. So, stay tuned! Thx again, Ilka
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 26/09/09 08:47 AM · On: Bleeding Guilt
I feel so bad for Sam, suffering the way he is. SO not good. So the archangel Gabriel is the bright light. That's going to be bad. Based on Castiel's reaction to what happened to Anna, I'm guessing her putting on the necklace has problems we didn't guess at. So intense! You threw in a lot of pop culture references, and I'm trying to figure them all out, because a few were lost on me. I got Affleck and Willis , but I couldn't figure out Jim Morrison's lyrics... As always, I'm looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hey hun. Glad you took the time. Reviews are precious in these times... The Jim Morrison line refers to the song The End (which I hope will be in next weeks's epi!). The line is: This the end, my friend/my only friend...the end. I like doing pop culture refs if I find any that fit. They are fun on TV every Thursday/Friday and fun when writing. Grinned my way through that section. And Luci just seems the guy who'd say all that stuff. Anyhow, thanks for reviewing... reviews have been very scarce so far... Hugs you, Ilka
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/09/09 11:50 AM · On: Blasphemous Acts
Excellent chapter as always, please don't bin this story, you've had your plot since May and of course it's still worth telling.
Author's Response: Lindsay! Thanks for your kind words. I needed them. Felt very awkward about the plot and its similarities towards the new season... I am in fact writing chapter 8 and have outlined the rest of the story since May. Would love to write it ... see what the other say. Hugs you, Ilka
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 01:34 PM · On: Blasphemous Acts
Reviewing here too, because, well, why not? I went back and read a couple of previous chapters, and I think you've got a good thing going with Lucifer's plans- opening up the Devil's gates. Hell on earth. It's just lovely. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks Jules. YOu don't know how much I appreciate you reviewing here too. This chapter has been really slow in reviews. And I fear I have lost a lot of my readers due to the long hiatus. And over all I don't feel too happy about this chapter either... So, thanks a bunch. Love you for that. Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 21/09/09 11:11 AM · On: Blasphemous Acts
Oh, do please continue writing! No need to apologize for any storylines that might or might not have the same plot, you hear!
Author's Response: Hey dear, nice to have a review! Thx for that. And I am gladto hear you like the plot and would go on reading even now that I am closer to the canon than I planned. Cheers, Ilka
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 25/07/09 01:34 PM · On: I'm On Dry Land, Won't You Help Me, Please?
Wow! - Some powerful emotion in this chapter - This is a really incredible story here, Ilka, and I'm totally enjoying it ;) -- Hopefully you haven't given up on it -- I am soooo looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Nah Ash, I haven't given up, just taken a break. What with the fire challenge and RL being a bit of a bitch lately.
So you will have to wait for another week at least. But after that I might get back into it. I wanna finish before the show premieres. Sorry for keeping you waiting, it's just time issues. Thanks for the review and the pretty stars hun. Glad you liked it! Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 07:10 PM · On: Lower Power
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: 'nother new reader! Nice to meet you... Thanks for reading and reviewing and the nices stars! And I can't wait to write it and read your next review! *winks* Cheers, Ilka
Author's Response: PS... should've read more closely... heh. It's a sickness (write first and think later) sorry... Enjoy the next two after taht you'll have to wait another week...
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 03:41 PM · On: I'm On Dry Land, Won't You Help Me, Please?
Wow, now that was worth waiting for,a brilliant chapter, poor Sam having to watch while Jenna was killed the same way as Jess and Mary,looking forward to finding out what Dean's cures gonna be.
Author's Response: Hey ya Lindsay! I just didn't feel the muse over the last month. Maybe she took some weeks off hooking up with Dean? Or she got bored of all the angst...
God, you don't know about my own angst fests over the last weeks. At first I was anxious about my exams and the finale. Then Asylum loomed (I was so nervous... gawd it was embarrassing!) and it was a BLAST! So, it took another week to recover from that mind-blowing experience (too bad you weren't there... would've loved to meet you in person finally) and suddenly the muse was back on track again! Glad you like the chappie. The bit about Jenna dying on the ceiling wasn't in the plot at all. It just happened while I was writing the scene... maybe because she became a hunter-Jessica-look-alike... Just made sense in a cruel and completely sick way, LOL.
Anyway, I can see you guys want to know more about the cure, huh? But don't think that'll be easily done and afterwards it's all rainbows and unicorns... No such things in the Winchester 'verse! Careful what you wish for! Take care and thanks for your patience... Hugs, Ilka
Reviewer: Zatnikatel (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:58 PM · On: I'm On Dry Land, Won't You Help Me, Please?
Gah, I hate the thought that Sam's meatsuit is being used to kill hunters. Love the Bobby-Dean interaction... the whole father-son vibe between them gets me every time and plays a big part in a story I am posting here too. I don't even mind Anna too much and I hated her in Show. Looking forward to finding out just whatis involved in Dean's 'cure'...
Author's Response: Hey again... I am so checking out your story now... there angst and hurt in it? Hope so. About Sam/Lucifer killing hunters. It isn't merely about killing hunters. You'll see... *grins knowingly* I actually liked Anna but I prefer her as a rogue angel. She has an edge to her that agrees with me more than that college student Anna did. I was sad to see Pamela die. I'd have loved to see her "take on" Dean... LOL. OK. I might be a little smutty at times... The cure will be revealed soon. Just be patient... Thanks for your review marathon. That completely made my day! Hugs. Ilka
Reviewer: Zatnikatel (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:52 PM · On: So I Dub Thee Unforgiven
Love how you have set up Dean's reliance on Castiel to heal him as something comparative to Sam's reliance on the demon blood. Really clever, dude... ...and forgot to say in my last review how truly disturbing it was to see Sam craving the blood despite the fact that it helped cause his downfall...
Author's Response: *cheers Kate on* You're the first one to get that parallelism! YOU ROCK. I am actually glad someone commented about it finally. Was afraid no one picked up on that or it was poorly done... THANKS Well, as I said in a previous reply. I am 100% certain that Sam's addictzion will play an important role in the next season so who am I not to put him through withdrawal? I love him jonesing... makes him even more vulnerable and pathetic. No worries... Sam will find a way to use it to his advantage... brain of his size... freakin' ginormous head... Hugs you for leaving stars and reviews on every chappie... Ilka
Reviewer: Zatnikatel (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:43 PM · On: Lower Power
Wow, great stuff. Love the Cas-Dean bickering and the way Bobby observes with such love - and exasperation! Am really intrigued to see where this is going and what it means for Dean to potentially be 'tainted' by Lucifer...
Author's Response: Hi again, Kate. Thanks for reading and reviewing back to back. It is an awesome experience for me as I get the chance of hearing/reading your reaction every step of the way. I won't be telling you anything on future events though *winks* but there will be more about the Disgrace business. And I love the way Cas and Dean seem to banter in their own way everytime they meet on the show so I had to put something like that in. Bobby is just awesome. I have no words for how much I enjoy Jim Beaver's excellent acting as Bobby every time he guest stars... Cheers... off to respond to the next one. Ilka
Reviewer: Zatnikatel (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:34 PM · On: Higher Power
Great stuff... I love Castiel's introspection and his devotion [non-slashy, of course!] to Dean. I'm really intrigued as to where Show will take their growing respect and affection for each other in S5 - it will be interesting to see how both Dean and Sam cope with the fact that Dean has a confidante outside of Sam.
Author's Response: Oh, you're doing every chapter? Now, that's pretty awesome! re Cas: first of all, NO SLASH. EVER. Heh, however, I have a few ideas about how Castiel's character will fit in the brother theme. Cas is being hunted from now on (just like Sam and Dean) too but still believes in God and Good. So, there will be a few verbal sparring matches coming up between him and Dean in the future. And Sam still has to cope with his addiction and his self-delusion that led to freeing Lucifer. Speaking of Lucy, he will of course have some impact on the season... GAWD. Bring on September. I am deffo in withdrawal! Thanks for taking the time, hun. Catch you on the next one! Ilka
Reviewer: Zatnikatel (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 01:25 PM · On: Gehenna
Ohhh, I wondered if Sam was in there when I was reading Chapter 1. Oh Sam. Oh Dean. The angst is going to be so, so pretty...
Author's Response: Hey Kate. Thanks again and I really do wish upon stars sometimes, so thanks for adding them to the review. I love angst and hurt. So, strap in for more! Poor Dean never really recovers in my stories, or if so he will be bashed up soon after or wallowing in angst. Heh. I am a sick puppy... Cheers and thanks again. Ilka
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