Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 13
I want a Dean !...
Author's Response: Me too. Thanks for reading and commenting. Laura
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter...I know I say that for every single one, but I can't help it! You are doing such an incredible job with this! You had a lot of emotional mixed with the humor. I especially loved the whole "pee" conversation with Sam and Dean...so funny! I love how this has really affected Sam, that he's not just bouncing back from what happened to him. And I still love Craven! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you!
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 10
ahhhh I love your writing...
Author's Response: thank you so much for reading and commenting. Laura
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 12
I am so much enjoying this story. You keep changing the direction for the brothers, but every new threat brings them closer together and demonstrates the true beauty of their relationship. Love conquers all. Loved this little insight into their childhood as well: You kept me from being scared, not Dad. Dad scared me more than the monsters in my closet.” See you again soon!
Author's Response: Ah, thanks so very much, as always your comments are very appreciated! Thanks for reading. Laura
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 12
This was a much happier chapter!! I loved the way Dean saved Sammy in the school. I thought poor Sammy was gonna have a heart attack. I liked the part where Dean was watching Sammy sleep and he figured out how the boogeyman was picking the victims. Now they just has to figure out how to stop it and everything will be ok
Author's Response: Thanks so much, so glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for commenting. Laura
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 12
Captivating story about the boogeyman. The bond between the brothers and the fact that they believed each other about that thing saved their life. Can't wait to know how they'll get rid of it. Terrific work Laura.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying this. Laura
Reviewer: Soulstorm (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 12
I love the series so far,and I really enjoy the fact you are giving Dean some credit for having a great hunting sense. It is only logical considering the way he was raised and the fact that he had been hunting solo before coming after Sam at Stanford. I also appreciate the relationship between the boys from your stories, you capture it very well. Can't wait for the next update, keep up with the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting. This is really how I see Dean, and it makes sense to me too....lol Laura
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 12
YAY! Dean got Sam away from this tings that makes even my skin crawl. I love this villian so much and I think you are doing a fabulous job of making the Boogeyman into something of your own! Great work, Laura!
Author's Response: Awww, shucks, thanks so much! Laura
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow, loved the way you developed all the threads of the overall story in the bogeyman section so far. There is the learning curve and what Craven is teaching them about themselves and fear. The growth of the relationship between Dean and Sam and their need for each other. And the awesome work just in expressing the new evil they are facing in the bogeyman. You have taken a "simple" childhood fear and made it truly scary. Sam's fear was palpable. When Sam was wrapped it the black it really felt like it was raping his soul without your ever saying it in so many words. WOnderful writing --Jenny
Author's Response: Ohhh....you don't know how great you made me feel! Made my day...thank you so much. I'm glad you like it, and what I was trying to get across got there....lol Laura
Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 12
I thought it was cool hurry with the next chapter please
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, your comments mean a lot. Laura
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 12
another great chapter, the creepy and the brotherly moments. Want more, want it quickly !!!
Author's Response: Hard at work on another chapter. Thanks for all your comments and encouragment...and most of all for reading. Laura
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 12
Another fabulous chapter. Loved the monster confrontation and how you used Dean's tugging Sam's hair throughout to show their connection. Loved watching Dean work through the problems he encountered. As always, I await your next chapter with bated breath!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Laura
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
Evil cliffhanger - and I was sailing along, enjoying the banter and the brotherly love so much! Loved this line: He didn’t say he was scared something would happen to Dean if he weren’t there with him, that something awful might happen to Sam if they didn’t stick together, his brother got it. His brother always got it where Sam was involved. That is spot on, and beautifully expressed. I was late to this story (I always seem to be running late at the moment!), but I wasn't late enough, because now I have to wait for another chapter *trying very hard not to whine* See you again soon!
Author's Response: ciel as always your comments are so appreciated. Thanks so much. Laura
Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
lovin it so far hurry with the next chapter could you add alittle more funny parts to it
Author's Response: Not much funny in the next chapter, but there will be more funny parts. Thanks for reading and commenting....glad you enjoyed it. Laura
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/05/07 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 11
Loved the banter between the brothers at the beginning of the chapter but the last part was spooky. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for always commenting. The next chapter I can say takes a bit of a turn to more creepy.
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
Here I am...about you give you some stars! Great chapter...the Boogeyman totally creeps me out...seriously, the chills will not go away! And Sam freaking out the way he is...it just tells you how bad this SOB is. Update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Oh you know I will update soon. Creepy thing is only going to get creepier...mmuuwwwaaahhhhhhh Thanks Steph for reading, helping, commenting. Laura
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG Just when Sam and Dean have finally gotten back together again and things are ok, things start to go wrong again. Why did you have to choose the boogeyman for huh. Are ya trying to give me nightmares or what. :) Can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response: I picked the boogeyman for an ongoing story line. And it's something everyone is familiar with. Sorry about the nightmares. Thanks for reading and commenting. Laura
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 11
OOHHH - you used it!!!! Boogey-person - *dances and claps with glee* - too cool. Such an awesome chapter. the interaction betweent the boys is just fabulous. Heads together over the research, on the road in the impala, and my absolute favourite - the growl as a term of endearment - Sam liked the growl - I swear that had me tearing up! This story in itself could be an entire series - the fairy tale of the week...Ok, so slightly evil cliffie - I know, you gave us a very generous chapter here - but please post soon..... And a BOX of cookies for you - triple chocolate chip!
Author's Response: Well, if it's triple chocolate chip I'd better get going....lol I couldn't resist the boogey-person, it was too good. Thanks for that. Glad you liked the chapter, will be updating soon. Laura
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 11
arghhhh, your skill in the emotional parts almost made me forget how you completely rock in the creepy anguishy (?) ones ! And not mentioning the damn cliffie. Greeaat chapter, happy to see the guys in motion again, waiting for mooooore !
Author's Response: Ah, Fredo, thanks so much. You're comments always make me feel so good. Laura
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/07 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 10
Forgot to mention in the last chapter that I adored Sam's apology to Dean, and that Dean not remembering which pie was his favourite and which was Sam's made me melt. *sigh* On to this chapter.... Loved this line: I hate when all the appliances opt for mass suicide and jump at once.” Hee hee. And it's hilarious that Dean wants Sam to eat the real food before the dessert - just like a parent! And I love you for Dean's whole speech and that whole final paragraph.....that was a hug, right? This is my new favourite chapter in this story. Many thanks.
Author's Response: Yes, that was a big, sloppy hug! LOL As always your comments and opinions are so very much appreciated. Laura
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/07 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
Gosh Bayre. I'm so sorry to be late, life just went a bit pear-shaped this week! This is another great chapter. Love the way you are writing Dean's hung over thoughts - there is quite an art to that type of stream-of-consciousness writing and you have great control of it. Also, thought it was so typical of Dean that he would be angry at himself, rather than angry at Sam - the guy is a hero in his relationship with his brother, in my opinion, and I love it that you write him that way.
Author's Response: ciel4...thanks so much. Thanks for all your continuing comments too. Laura
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 10
I am glad that Dean was as supportive of Sammy after he made his declaration. I am really suprised that Dean actually said that he would punch his father. I thought that day would never happen. I knew that Dean could never hate Sammy, he is Dean's pride and joy in this world.
Author's Response: Yeah, I've wanted some resolution there, so just went and did my own...lo Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me when people take the time to do that.
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
I really loved this chapter! I have a new found respect for Craven. I liked the way he handled Dean after he woke up with a hangover. Craven also was very helpful in getting Dean to see from Sammy's point of view. (Poor Sammy)
Author's Response: Craven is a character that surprised me, I'm keeping him around, he's really turned into a great guy. Thanks so much for reading and your comments are so greatly appreciated....glad you like it so far. Laura
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
What a beautiful chapter you gave us Laura. They finally talked. Their conversation was so poignant, emotional.I loved, loved the hug at the end, sweet and very touching. Awesome work Laura, can't wait to know what you've in store for them in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. Laura
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 10
your a very good writer. I love this story as much as the first one. Thanks you for posting,
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and your comments are very much appreciated.
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