Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 12
What a creepy boogeyman description! I think it's unique and very compassionate to give violent offenders a supernatural reason for their crimes. Clever using the bit from the pilot episode as such an important part of this story. You pick out so many details and expound upon them. That's a great gift!
Author's Response: Thanks again!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 11
I love Dean's growl! What a unique endearment. Good shot from Sam about Indonesia! Cancel that passport. Ooohh---superb cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Thanks so much...I really appreciate all your comments. Laura
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 10
Cute line---mass appliance suicide. Maybe there needs to be a support group for depressed small appliances? Okay, I think this is my second favorite chapter! I can't say anymore than that---stupendous!
Author's Response: Aawww...thanks so much!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 9
Incredible!!! This is the best chapter----I LOVE it! So much insight and introspection. It truly defines the relationship between the brothers. This is amazing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
You seem to start every chapter with a bit of Winchester-like humor. I love it! So good to see Dean aspire to something---even if it is drinking, sex and fighting. Amusing cell phone piece!
Author's Response: Thanks yet again. I enjoyed the cell phone thing myself.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
What a heart-breaking (well-written) chapter! Those poor boys.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
I hope we get to find out more about Craven and his past. A camel is a pretty ugly animal so naturally it's hindquarters wouldn't be too pretty. The next chapter should be spectacular---John and Craven using all their charm.
Author's Response: Heehehe...thanks for reading! There will be a bit more on Craven, and he'll be in the story after this one.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
Love it! Busy reading...
Author's Response: Thanks for all the comments!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
Marvelous chapter! So amusing! I can't wait to see how the secret reveals itself!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
"Speak with effect." Good one! Cool troll, especially the eyes blinking sideways! Uh oh! If Dean has to truthfully answer a question posed by a troll they're in deep trouble!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Dean and the troll were far too much fun.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
A very intriguing character, Craven! An excellent vantage point of the traumatic accident and the fall out in the hospital! I really like this point of view. It expresses so clearly the intense dynamics of Sam and Dean's relationship. Amazing piece of work! As if telling us Craven was going to speak to John wasn't enough, your chapter end notes are more cryptic and teasing.
Author's Response: This was one of my favorite chapters to write. Thanks.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love Dante's quote. I wrote it down from "The Coming Storm." Jeez, I never knew peanut M&M's were required school supplies either. My poor children are so deprived. At least there's hope for next year. I like the eerie house and the creepy professor! Good set up for the story!
Author's Response: Hehehee...thanks so much.
Reviewer: pau (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 2
Im sorry but I acctually don´t like the Sam that you present, he is more introspective, you just put him like a big babe
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and offer your opinion, all feedback is appreciated.
Reviewer: snaturalfreak (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 15
hey i'm loving this series this one especially!! i hope u write another one soon i really wanna no whats gonna happen i vote for storm surge that sounds cool!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I think Storm Surge is winning out in the title department.
Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 15
i loved this story and cant wait for thet next one in the series! hurry please!! =D
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: tsweeny (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
I enjoyed this chapter and appreciate the different point of view.
Author's Response: Thanks..I sort of like to show the boys from someone else's perspective every now and again.
Reviewer: poohbear1234 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 15
I really enjoyed this story can't wait for the next one. thanks and keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it means the world to me. Laura
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 15
That was a terrific and so captivating story, I loved it start to end. You did an amazing work Laura. Can't wait for the sequel. Storm Surge is a great title for the next story.
Author's Response: Hi and thanks again for your kin words. Your comments mean a lot to me. I think Storm Surge will be the title of the next in the series. Laura
Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15
Hurry with the next chapter I like Storm Surge sinse there is a big storm come it just masks sinse to call it that hurry with the next series please
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm hard at work on the next adventure. Laura
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 15
Hi again.... I'll definitely re read this story in case I've missed something... as for a title for the next story... Storm Surge is good because its sort of building up to something... while Eye Wall is a good that seems to be as if they are in the middle of something... (I've been outdoors during a Hurricane...being from Southern Texas I got to see a few... or atleast feel the warm Gulf winds slapping my face with rain... during the Eye of the storm it stopped raining... got a little quiet... for a few minutes before it started up a agin...) Landfall seems to me it would be a culmination of events leading up to it. Does that help or have I ranted on? Anyway as I said before of all the new characters added to the Winchester stories... Concha and Dante are by far the BEST!!! P.S. Although I live now in the UK... I'll always be a Texas girl... so if you want to know of any place in Texas the boys could venture into... let me know... take care, aripapetx_uk@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I might have to take you up on your offer about Tx. I was in Houston last year, but not anywhere else there. Loved it. Thanks for all your great comments. Laura
Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this series. Great ending. Loved the call to Sheridan. Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. Laura
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 15
Another close to another wonderful story, Laura. I loved every bit of it and I am so happy I could be a part of it. This series is so addictive and you have such a wonderful way of tying these characters together (Sam and Dean, and your OCs). I am sad to see this one come to an end, but I am so excited for your next one! Great job, sweetie! :D
Author's Response: AWww Thanks Steph, couldnt do it without your help. L
Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 15
cool! damn! crazy to the 2 part!!!! it seems very atractive!!! hey, what's with concha, is she in problem too.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting! Laura
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
Lovely final chapter Bayre, especially the conversation with the doctor. Very revealing, about both boys, and a nice way to do it without coming straight out and saying it! I very much enjoyed the whole story, thank you so much!
Author's Response: THank YOU ciel for all your comments and for reading. It's much appreciated. Laura
Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 15
great story lovin it please hurry with the next chapter can't wait
Author's Response: THanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you liked it. This is the final chapter of this fic, but it's series and I'm working on the next installment. Laura
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