Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 01:57 AM · On: Epilogue
Ok, understood. But I would like, if the nude part out. Semi-nude is ok. Enjoy it, got wierd dream after reading it though.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 12:54 AM · On: Epilogue
Great job. i like how you had Castiel coming to Dean in a dream. Sam thinking what he is doing is good is what is getting him into trouble. hope to see a new story up soon. Renee
Reviewer: badaiwind (Signed) · Date: 02/05/09 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 5
There was no way he was gonna give any credit to the stranger wearing a trench coat that had come out of no where to warn him. Until the stranger bowed his head and showed him the wings. Confused?? Refer to whom? Castiel? Since when? Gordon, dont think he ever been in army. Wandering...
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/09 07:23 PM · On: Epilogue
Awesome job venturing into DeanWhumpageLand- LOL... Loved the conversation with Dean and all his "demons" as it were.... and my heart was breaking when Dean made Castiel promise that he wouldnt die inside... Also glad that the guys were back together again- I was a bit worried about the implications when Dean saw what Sam had done at the end of last chapter... thank goodness for unconsciousness??? Great job- really enjoyed this one!
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 02/05/09 04:22 PM · On: Epilogue
This was a great story - I thoroughly enjoyed it -- you do a mean hurt!Dean, and heal him up just fine! What a bittersweet ending, though -- Well done!
Reviewer: CatzEye (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow--! You're doing a stellar job with this story -- I'm anxious to see just where it leads --Good stuff!
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 26/04/09 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh holy CRAP! Sam just killed a HUMAN with his mind?! Wouldn't it be freaky deeky if they actually gave Sam that power on the show? Twould turn my blood cold, it would. Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/09 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
oh boy- I didnt see that coming. Thought for sure that Tigerman and his gang were going to torture Dean some more... Cant say that I mind them being dead though. Now Sam just needs to get there and get to his brother... Cant wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/04/09 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hey Natty Okay so here's the deal I read your summary and actually nearly didn't come read 'cause I thought your naked Dean was a bit undignified but I have to say you are doing it with suck aplomb that i'm cool with it! Oh and Dean whumpage...you're a natural hun! bird xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/04/09 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hey hunny Me again. "God's own way of making them bark like chickens" gee i love that phrase! Poor Dean how that salad has messed with his grease conditioned gut. You have a wonderfully energetic style of writing, I feel 'in the moment' with them. Very cool. Reading on and tagging ya hun. Bird x
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/04/09 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey natty well this is an interesting premise! You have me intrigued...what did he do to attract their ire? and I have to say this is inventive whumpage! I'm reading on. Bird xx
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 20/04/09 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh holy sweet freakin' lord!! That Tigerman was one screwed up SOB. And the demon took his face off with the gunshot blast...! And someone crawled away, but we don't know yet who (though I'm guessing it wasn't Tigerman, considering his face was blown off). Hopefully Sam won't get caught in the crossfire of whoever survived and snuck away. And hopefully Sam can get Dean untied and clothed again soon! lol. Poor Dean!
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 19/04/09 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
Argh! Where's Mo? What's he up to?
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 15/04/09 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
dude- you have certainly hit your stride with the DeanWhumpage. I love you "Dean-voice"- love all the snark and sarcasm even considering the dire situation he's in. I also like the your premise. I totally buy that the 'hunters circle' would have caught wind of everything that happened with the boys... no doubt they'd put two and two together and figure ground zero was directly underneath Winchester feet. Well done! I tore through these first chapters and I cant wait for the rest.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 15/04/09 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
Holy crap these nasty SOBs mean business! I'd love it if Cas showed up and kicked their butts, but I have a feeling that's not going to happen. :( And to them, I'd imagine that freaky burn on Dean's shoulder would look far more ominous than like the celestial burn that it truly is. Poor Dean!!!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/09 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was a great chapter! i want more. Renee
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 07/04/09 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
Who are these freakin' guys?! Weenie cowards the lot of them, ganging up on a guy who could kick their butts any other day of the week! Looking forward to the next update! :)
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 05/04/09 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wonderful start, haven't been on this site in a while but I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. Which means I'm going to be on more often looking for updates. And hopefully updating my own stories >.<
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 05/04/09 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ho-leee COW! Dean's in a bad way, and we have no idea how he got there! UPDATE PLEASE! lol.
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