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Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 08:37 PM · On: Another world inside of me

OMG!By giving his blood to his brother, Sam has woken evil Dean. It's like Dean has a split personnality, Dean blacked out when evil Dean is getting out to kill people. What Dean and Sam're going to do, can't wait to know.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yep, it looks as if Sam has woken up a nasty side to his brother by feeding him blood laced with demon.

I will update shortly, cheers Mary x

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 06:01 PM · On: Another world inside of me

Aww dude, evil, just evil leaving me hanging like that. Lol. Love me some evil!Dean. 

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, I love me some evilDean too! I hope not to leave you all hanging too much longer. Mary x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/07/09 04:18 PM · On: Another world inside of me

Hey Mary.

Oh you mean girl, leaving us there and going off on holiday! 

Have a lovely time and then write some more.

bev x



Author's Response:

Hi there

Sorry I've left this hanging for a little spell after my hols, which were great thank you, I will update shortly, Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 05:50 PM · On: Two become one

Fantastic chapter, has the demon blood turned Dean into a killer? Can't wait for the next chapter, more soon Please...

Author's Response:

HI Maureen

Thanks! It looks that way doesn't it? I will try to update asap.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 07:36 PM · On: Two become one

Ruby didn't have the power to send Dean flying, that's cool. OMG!After a bloody vision Dean woke up with no recollection about what happened, that's scary. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hi

Yeah, her mojo wasn't working on Dean it seems. And Dean now has to find out just what he did.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 10:10 PM · On: Two become one

uh oh, Dean what did you do!?!?  Sam had better fix this and make everything okay.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Indeed, what did Dean do? Sam will have to find out what is going on before he can fix it.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 04:26 PM · On: Two become one

An exciting chapter, looking forward to finding out more.

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks, it picks up in the next one too!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 03:54 PM · On: Two become one

Awesome awesome chapter. Loved the violent interaction between Dean and Ruby and you did well with Ruby's snarkiness. Glad you were able to update I'm really enjoying this story. Hope to see the next chapter soon wanna see what happens next. lol.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you so much. Dean and Ruby going at it was fun to write, glad you liked. I will try and keep this coming, but it will be finished even if it takes a while!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 03:50 PM · On: Two become one

Nononono...Dean can't turn evil!

Author's Response:

Hi GTS

Dean turning evil...I wouldn't do that....would I?? *innocent smile*

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: nurple_girl (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 12:25 PM · On: Two become one

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome!

Author's Response:

Hi!

Thank you...it gets worse!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 11:22 AM · On: Two become one

Mary

powdering her warts...made me giggle so!

Loved the Ruby Dean interface and love the fact that you have maxed out Dean's mojo. Looking forward to seing where it takes him.

The slammer lip locking was nice too!

Bird xxxx



Author's Response:

Hi

Could let the fact that she was a witch pass without the warts powdering!!

Ruby was fun to write with Dean at this bit and as for Dean's maxed out mojo....he might not like where that goes!

I had to have a little flirty Dean in this, my favourite one.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 11:13 AM · On: Discovery

Hooha, glad ya woke him up hunny and now desperate to know how the vision looked.

I liked your petulant, pissed off Sammy he remonded me of spoilt-ish brat Sam of season one, when things were less complex!

reading on.

Bird xxxx



Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, had to have my boy back and he's getting vision...that can't be good.

I loved bratty Sam in S1, so I may have based my Sam on that one!

Cheers Mary xx

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 10:10 AM · On: Two become one

Oh boy, that is so dire and has Dean really killed someone...ooh err.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Jacq



Author's Response:

Hi Jacq,

That is the thousand dollar question and I have the answer! *smiles evily*

Cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 09:45 AM · On: Two become one

Yikes! If Dean murdered someone, he will never, ever get over it. I believe he would kill himself if he had. That was one intense read. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

Hi there

Did Dean murder someone...it looks that way and maybe it is? It would be hard for him to go on if he had.

Next chapter should be quicker, Mary x

Reviewer: Glitterbelle (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 09:30 AM · On: Discovery

Sorry I haven't been to review this story and your others (I know I have only done a few reviews but I was hoping to do it more regularly, but real life keeps me away.)

I remember my review from chapter two and I just knew I would enjoy this story. I was wondering what Ruby had up her sleeve, I can't believe you fed Dean her demon blood, thats very demonically clever of you. Its going to be very interesting to see how it affects him. I can't wait, you have to keep writing this story please. I liked Sam's anguish over the situation too, but he made the right call, he couldn't lose his brother, they can deal with the backlash later.

Oh what was Dean's vision of himself? I have to know.

:o)

Gemma

xx



Author's Response:

Hi Gemma

No worries, life gets busy sometimes, hence the fact that the update on this still hasn't been done yet, I promise it soon.

Yeah, It was croatoan that gave me the idea, to kill the plague with demon blood. I will keep writing this, the plot line and everything is sitting there, but I was trying to finish Fight to the Death first.

Sam did the only thing that he could, he had to save Dean, you're right.

Glad you like it so far, Mary x

Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 01:24 PM · On: Discovery

Loved it ,poor Dean , you can understand, why he is worried,visions, Oh boy, Sam only done it because he could'nt live without his big brother in his life, I would'nt like tobe Ruby, when Deans gets whole of her, looking forwards to your nexts chapter,..............

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks.

Dean has seen first hand what the demon blood did to his brother and now it seems to be happening to him. Sam's reason was a good one and it is hard for Dean to comment on that after all he made the deal to save Sam. Ruby is not in the good books at the moment!

I will update as soon as I can, Mary x

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 04:30 PM · On: Discovery

This story of yours got me hooked instantly. I can't wait to see the full effects of the demon blood running through Dean's veins. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. ^_^



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you. Sorry the updates are a bit long on this one but there is another story that I really need to finish and then this and Meltdown will be the priorities.

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: f250 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/09 09:09 AM · On: Discovery

This story is just great, I am really hooked on  it , poor Dean, he has a lot to cope with,  Sam will have to stay strong for him



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, I am glad that you like it. Dean does have a lot to cope with and Sam is part of the problem but also the solution too.

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/05/09 06:46 AM · On: Discovery

Wow, Dean had a vision, an exciting chapter, looking forward to finding out what the vision was about.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, he's had a vision of sorts, I will let you know soon what it was he saw.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 09:39 PM · On: Discovery

Terrific chapter. Wow!Dean got a vision, can't wait to know what he saw. Great work Mary, I'm looking forward to more. 

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks. yup Dean had a vision, I will let you know soon what he saw.

Glad you are enjoying it, Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 05:54 PM · On: Discovery

Fantastic chapter, so Dean is better and obviously the demon blood has done something to him if he's having visions too, But what was he doing that freaked him out? Can't wait for read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

HI there

Dean's up on his feet and yes the demon blood has affected him, but his visions aren't like Sam's. I will explain shortly.

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 11:19 AM · On: Discovery

What a cliff hanger!  I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, I love cliffhangers, even the ones that I have to wait to find out the answers to myself. Glad you like.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 09:52 AM · On: Discovery

Yowza! So Dean does have some of the Freaky powers of the demon blood. Dean really did well to keep in his anger at Sam, I guess he understood Sam's motives. I'm dying to know what Dean saw! 

Author's Response:

Hi there

He has. But I don't think that they are going to do to him what they did to Sam.

Dean kept a lid on his anger, he's been where his brother was and he's watched before as his brother struggled to save him too, so yeah, he understands the motives. He just might not be happy with the outcome! *evil smile*

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 25/05/09 09:32 AM · On: Discovery

Oh dear, what on earth did he see, you've got me hooked again, I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter, good one

Jacq



Author's Response:

HI there

Dean has had a vision, but it's not like Sam's.

I'll update soon, but I'm glad you're hooked! *smiles*

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 06:41 PM · On: Back from the Brink

How Dean'll react to the news?I think is going to be pissed, so very pissed. Can't wait for Dean to wake up.

Author's Response:

Hi Oceane

Thanks. I think pissed might be an understatement! You'll find out next.

Cheers Mary.

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