Very sorry for being this late, I had an especially crazy week at work and am still behind everything a bit. The idea of this project is fascinating without end and I absolutely will check it out.
Loved this first scene a lot. As always you write the brothers' bond in a lovely and touching way (never can get enough of this!!) and also a wonderful John, not only a hunter but a concerned and caring dad. Bobby pointing out the difference between Dean and Sam was another highlight here (adored his "I have a feeling he and his brother will make a hell of a team one day." yep!). Really liked Dr. Manheim (that's the name of my hometown you know), cool guy and great doctor, sensing the close connection between our boys. The best part for me however was that you brought the true Sam back to us, the wonderful innocent geek boy I miss so much these days. And extra thanks for John praising Sam for his work, know this meant the world to Sam! Great read, thank you so much!
Author's Response: I understand that live can get pretty crazy at times. Thanks for taking the time to read and review anyway and don't apologize for being late, it doesn't matter as long as you liked it. I actually chose the name Manheim consciously because I wanted something really German and I remembered having a friend in school who was from their. I wanted to also give John a chance to be a real good dad for a change. Hugs, Vonnie