Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 16/04/09 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

This was fantastic!!! I loved the clear-cut plot, the guys were kept in character, the other characters were just right from the deputy, Ms. Hancock, the sheriff, even the woman who ran the inn. I especially loved Ms Hancock with her non-existent tea and cake along with her horny dog. LMAO. This was a good story without all the angst of this season. One thing, there were a few misspelled words and one that you seem to have a problem with is "barren". Baron is a title while barren is meant as empty, such as the barren fields. You might want to try to make the spelling corrections and then resubmit the story. More ppl need to read this. Maybe put in the summary that this is from season 2. Anyway, thanks for the good read!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review! :-) I really appreciate it. Thanks also for pointing out about spelling mistakes, even though I re-read my work over and over before submitting, some of the little blighters still go un-noticed by myself! LOL! I will take you up on the advice, I'll go over it all again and make the corrections. And yeah; that whole baron/barren thing - I stupidly trusted the computers dictionery to change that for me and didn't look properly at what it had changed it to, I will know better next time!!