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Reviewer: EmmaSparrow (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 02:34 PM · On: Poem

This is amazing! Great job!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks! Mary xx

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/04/09 12:54 PM · On: Poem

great job loved it

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks for that, glad you liked!!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 05/04/09 03:25 PM · On: Poem

I loved it! Getting goosebumps are always a good indicator to me that it was chock full of awesome goodness.

Author's Response:

Hi WynterSun

Thanks!. Goosebumps are always a good sign. Awesome goodness...that made me smile!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 31/03/09 07:19 AM · On: Poem

Beautiful!  I especially liked that their slates have been wiped clean and they can have normal lives!  I hadn't thought of that.  what a blessing that would be!

Author's Response:

HI there

Thank you. I really want their slates wiped clean too, although my friend said that she thought they were dead at the end of this which I suppose you could say.

I really want them to get a little shot at normal. Somehow though....*sighs*....don't think that'll be.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: phoenix222 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/09 03:45 PM · On: Poem

Really cool poem, with lines that capture the mood and atmosphere of what's happening perfectly :)

Can I just point out one thing? I don't mean to be pernickety but should the line:

Two brother split, now again are one

Be two brothers?

Apologies for my annoying eagle-eyed-ness... Please correct me if I'm wrong!



Author's Response:

Hey there

Thanks for the review, glad you liked this!

I don't mind you pointing out errors, shows you really have read and paid attention to the story/poem.

This wasn't beta'd so all mistakes are mine! I did actually notice this but I hadn't time to sort it and then forgot, so thank you for bringing it back to my attention - it's sorted and appreciated.

Cheers Mary x

 

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/03/09 10:17 AM · On: Poem

Not strange at all.i liked it, i want a happy ending to ,not sure that we will get one.

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Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks Lindsay. I so want a happy ending, or even one were one or both of them don't die would be nice...I seriously don't think we are going to get it though! Not unless we bully Mr K into submission! lol

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 27/03/09 10:06 PM · On: Poem

Gosh....I hope that's how it ends!!  Great poem!


Author's Response:

Hi there

So do I!

Thanks! Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 27/03/09 11:39 AM · On: Poem

Awesome poem- I love it- simple and poignant- yet capturing everything thats been going on.

Nice offering- well done.



Author's Response:

Hi Tree

Thank you so much, I wanted something different for my fiftieth story and to get a featured means a lot.

Mary x

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