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Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 05:04 PM · On: Yeast Rolls

i really hope to see an update soon i really am enjoying this series you have

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 05:40 PM · On: Bananas

i really hope you will update soon

Author's Response: Whoops! I completely forgot I even had an account here! Thanks for the reminder! I should put up the next chapter next week or so - depending on my beta. (Eternal gratitude to Pickles, you rock my grammar-ophiliac friend) 

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 17/11/09 01:05 PM · On: Yeast Rolls

I hope you plan on updating this soon i am really enjoying reading this story i love the direction you have taken it

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 15/09/09 12:41 PM · On: Bananas

I really hope you plan on updating.  I really enjoy all your stories but this one in particular.  Keep it up!

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 05:43 PM · On: Bananas

cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 05:23 PM · On: Bananas

cant wait for the next chapter to see how jess reacts

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 28/07/09 05:19 PM · On: Bananas

cant wait for the next chapter i like that jess is ok with the hunting

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 01:38 PM · On: Bananas

It was another great chapter, but I ha ve just one little question - where did the blood come from? 

Author's Response: It's Sam's. That's why there was a bandage on his arm.  Glad you like it!

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 10:55 AM · On: Bananas

Oh wow, GREAT twist there!  I'm wondering if John was wrong in assuming that it's the Aztec god that's got Dean feeling suicidal (maybe it's a denial, thing?), or if the god was being less than truthful...

Thankfully Bobby's on the way and he's THE MAN when it comes to getting to the bottom of things.

GO BOBBY!



Author's Response:

John's working off theory, but if one of his boys did start hurting himself, I think John would look for a supernatural cause before he'd accept an emotional one. I guess you'll have to wait and discover the truth with Sam. 

 

Bobby is my hero. Ever since they showed us the apocalypse fallout shelter, I've felt unworthy of the man.

Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed) · Date: 23/05/09 11:45 AM · On: Ketchup

cant wait for the next chapter when bobby arrives

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 07:48 PM · On: Ketchup

I am enjoying your story so far.  I can't wait to see where you take it next.

Reviewer: Dolly Doyle (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 05:16 PM · On: Ketchup

I usually loathe AU stories for a whole host of reasons and not enough time but I have to admit I love this story and I can not wait until the next installment.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 09:56 AM · On: Ketchup

Oh wow -- angst overload, PLUS the plot thickens!  You've given a real treat here!

WOO HOO!

This was really excellent.  Poor Dean's suffering, and Sam's desperation to keep his brother safe, to keep him from hurting himself.  I could actually feel his anxiety, felt my stomach tying itself in knots, with his worry about all the ways Dean could hurt himself.

And it's both adorable and tragically sad that Dean's not fooling anyone with his promises.  Sam knows he's still a danger to himself, even though Dean's trying to hard to reassure his little brother that he won't "do anything."

Cannot WAIT for the next chapter to find out what that hoo doo skull thingie in the mirror was all about.  But my guess is someone's seriously messing with Dean.  And coughing up the bead?  Both gross (fishing around in the puke bowl) and intriguing.

BRING IT!

Reviewer: Dottyoz (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 08:00 AM · On: Ketchup

This story is so heartbreakingly sad.  It's amazing.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 04:12 AM · On: Ketchup

Amazing. More please.

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 02:29 AM · On: Ketchup

After that, I'm finding myself really hoping this goes way AU and Jess survives! As always, you bring me to the brink of tears then throw in a snarky joke or an ominous shadow to stop me plunging straight over the edge. I gotta know what's going on! NOW! (I'm a tad impatient. Sorry.)

 

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 19/04/09 12:11 PM · On: Soap

My oh my, I didn't see that coming! I do hope that you plan to enlighten us about the job Dean and John have just come off that a) means Dean has to lie low with Sam and b) has Dean seriously contemplating suicide, 'cos I seriously want to know.

That was one amazing chapter, so scary and so emotional. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 19/04/09 10:56 AM · On: Soap

Oh holy sweet Jesus!  That had me seriously choked up!  Poor freakin' Sam, waking up to discover that Dean was about to kill himself, in such a horrible and violent way!!

I'm surprised Sam didn't take him straight to a shrink or something!  Makes you wonder what you'd do in a similar situation.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 19/04/09 10:05 AM · On: Soap

How incredibly sad! Dean being suicidal was so heart wrenching. I hope Sammy can get Dean some kind of help. His dreams are coming true. I hope Sam realizes that he has had bad dreams of Jess, too. Wonder what has brought Dean to such a crossroads in his life. He's so broken here. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 12/04/09 01:58 PM · On: Steak Fries

I liked this, another fine addition to your story. Dean and the all-American pasttime, baseball--a perfect fit. Of course he'd be good at it. Now I'm wondering if Dean's going to actually take the chance to tryout for the Tides?

Sue

Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 09:41 PM · On: Steak Fries

I really love this story, looking forward to more!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 08:19 AM · On: Yeast Rolls

I love the real life moments like when Dean started missing his swings and Sam could he him plotting the strategy in his head. That was awesome.  Only bad thing is that I keep waiting for evil to peak around the corner. Hey! I guess it is like real life:D

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 07:48 AM · On: Steak Fries

I really enjoyed this chapter. It was nice to see Dean and Sam hanging out and enjoying themselves. I did feel badly for Deans pensive moment, wonder what was going through his mind? His father probably. Hurry back!

Reviewer: dancr (Signed) · Date: 03/04/09 07:03 PM · On: Coffee & Donuts

I really hope that you don't kill off Jess. After making her so cool and having her be a big part of Sam (and Dean's lives) it would be awful to kill her. Maybe initiate her into the hunter lifestyle via a close encounter and have Dean set up base in Palo Alto so they could have the best of both worlds? 

Anyway, love it so far! Keep going.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/03/09 07:32 PM · On: Coffee & Donuts

When what is over? Dean leaving? I'm still curious as to why Dean was ordered to go stay with Sam. I'm really enjoying reading Dean being oh so domestic. It's great that Jess has really warmed up to Dean (who wouldn't ???). Looking forward to the next chapter!

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