Reviewer: TozaBoma (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 09:37 PM · On: Tricks & Dust

Woah, excellent! I'm enjoying this big time! It flows so easily, it pulls you in - it's neatly done.

Hoping I can find chapter two in between flying in planes and being on holiday! At least I'll have a few chapters to get back to, right? LOL

By the way - 'Dog Soldiers'? 

Author's Response:

Cookie to take with you on your hols hun - spot on! Chapter two is ticking over, but it's not coming as nicely as the first. Dean's thought processesare a little... twisted.

Glad you enjoyed, and have a great holiday!

Ta hun,

Cal

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 10:21 AM · On: Tricks & Dust

Great start.

Didn't expect that, at the end of the chapter.

Author's Response:

*evil grin* Thanks!

Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 07:57 PM · On: Tricks & Dust

WHAT? Dean! Hold on! What just happened????

Ok... calming down...

This is awesome, the way you write Sam's thoughts, it just sounds so... Sam. I LOVE it.

The part about the wishing well, and that his wish had already come true... so sweet. And his frustration for not visiting the Grand Canyon before! It was lovely.

And then came the werewolf and pushed Dean over the edge! Loved Sam's dark humor about the movie, but I'm at the edge of my seat here, ready to fall off! Please save me from injury and update soon :) 

 

Author's Response:

Hee, stay calm. Don't panic! Glad it worked as Sam - I had a few moments when he went all shy and quiet in my head, so I wasn't too sure... The wishing well one just came out of nowhere - I suddenly thought, 'surely the one thing he would've wished for is Dean back?' Schmoop. Unashamed schmoop.

Don't fall off - though I haven't actually written the next chapter yet, I've got an idea of where it's going, so it shouldn't take too long. I hope...

Thanks!