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Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/09 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 3

Poor Mallory, first she looses her boyfriend, then everyone laughs at her, except of the boys and then she hears the voice on the radio telling her she needs to end it and although she doesn't want to, she has to. Now that is totally sad. Great development though. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/09 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 2

So Sam still wants to find their dad, but he isn't pushing the issue anymore, I guess he learned his lesson. I always thought it was funny that Dean, who stayed with John, didn't try to find him as much as Sam did. But maybe it was because Dean always followed orders and knew his dad would let them find him, when he wanted, while Sam was always more of his own person and now had something in common with his dad. Anyway, so now they are getting involved in this case, even though Dean is really not sure yet. Great chapter. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/09 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

How intriguing. So the dude hears his name on the radio and then he dies the same way. So what is doing this? Is it like a recording from the future? Nah that would be to easy. Guess I have to read on to find out. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh nooo...not her too? It is nice to read a S1 story, have had to miss so many lately because of spoilers, your story would fit in very well as an extra epi for S1, looking forward to Chapter4...Jacq

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

A brilliant story, i don't know how i missed this, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 2

I would love to get a wet tissue and wipe an eggy drip off Dean's cheek! mmm. Great part 2, nice to be back in S1, on to Chapter3...Jacq

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Noooo...I had hoped he would think, Oh no, the Radio voices - duck!! That was so creepy...
reading chapter 2 now...Jacq

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

Sorry I'm late....real life...guh! *smacks forehead*....
Anyway - so, Dean having an orgasm over breakfast - must have been some pretty good bacon and eggs. He'll have to remember to eat there again - LOL. I'm with Tree - gutter mind. Hey, it's late, and I'm tired!
Got to love Sam's fishing for information. And it's paid off - and the hunt is on.
Can't wait to see where you're going to take this one, hon.
Jules

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

Dude- finally got the chance to read this one in its final form... gotta tell you that the opening piece with Dean eating- painted such a great picture that I could see it in my head.... all the way down to the food on Dean's plate. I could even see the look of digust on Sam's face as he watched/listened to his brother.... nicely written...
Same with the beginning of the second piece- Sam's rolling his head- working out the kinks- feeling the pop- I just love when this plays out in my head like I'm watching it on TV...
OH- and btw- since I cant leave a review without a little 'gutter moment' - let me just say that Dean can 'suit my mood' anytime he wants... LOL!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 28/03/09 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love the premise- excellently spooky. I'm definitely looking forward to more chapters, it's shaping up to be a lovely scary story.

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 28/03/09 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 2

ooo its just starting to get juicy!! Thanks for taking the time to write and upload, I'm really enjoying this fic and can't wait to see what else you make of it.
B xx

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, that was just damned spooky...
I liked the similarity between the young couple and the boys - with Dylan loving the same music that Dean does, and Mallory - well - *clears throat* - going all 'Sammy' on him - lol.
But the radio bit was downright creepy. If I hear static coming out of mine, I'm switching to a CD!
So, it's a ghost who can predict a person's death - or is somehow causing their death and can't resist giving away a spoiler.
Roll on chapter 2, and more creepy goodness! Great job with this, hon.
Jules

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/09 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

great start, just loved it so please update soon

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

fantastic start, very spooky!
can't wait for more

Reviewer: Stokes (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter, Steph!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is even better read the second time.... and dude- I swear- the least little bit of EPV I hear on the radio- and I think I'll probably getg a cold chill... major creep factor!!!
ok- so now- gimme some Winchesters! Get writing..

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent beginning! Dylan and Mallory seemed came across as very likable characters. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Judging from this chapter this story is going to be very interesting.

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