Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 05:57 PM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

Well, I never know what to expect with an AU, but this is great! It's only AU in terms of the timeline, the boys sound very recognizably Winchester. This just doesn't feel like a complete story to me, probably because I don't want it to end so soon;-)

Sue

 

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 02:00 PM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

Wow, you really caught their voices Dean's reluctance to tell Sam what happened, hiding behind lame jokes, then blurting it out in one go, spot on!

But I would love to see some more - how does Sam try and talk to Dean, how does he get on with Jess? What's in Boby's care package? (Car mags, beer - spiked with holy water! - M&Ms, whiskey...)

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 10:39 AM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

Loved your story. I like it that Dean was able to come to Sammy after that horrible hunt. Talk about creepy! That would make for a great story in itself.