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Reviews For Frozen Apple Pie
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 05:57 PM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

Well, I never know what to expect with an AU, but this is great! It's only AU in terms of the timeline, the boys sound very recognizably Winchester. This just doesn't feel like a complete story to me, probably because I don't want it to end so soon;-)

Sue

 

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 02:11 PM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

really really enjoyed this!! Great job and thanks for taking the time to write and post

 B x x

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 02:00 PM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

Wow, you really caught their voices Dean's reluctance to tell Sam what happened, hiding behind lame jokes, then blurting it out in one go, spot on!

But I would love to see some more - how does Sam try and talk to Dean, how does he get on with Jess? What's in Boby's care package? (Car mags, beer - spiked with holy water! - M&Ms, whiskey...)

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 01:40 PM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

great little story. I didn't want it to end.. really wanted to see what happened when dean woke up!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 10:39 AM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

Loved your story. I like it that Dean was able to come to Sammy after that horrible hunt. Talk about creepy! That would make for a great story in itself.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 10:36 AM · On: Frozen Apple Pie

I know you say this is complete, but I really would like more. You can't tease us with the idea of Sam being Dean's alibi and not tell us how Jess reacts to that gem. Plus I want to hear more blackmailing stories.

Please, pretty please write more.

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