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Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/03/09 09:40 PM · On: Help Me If You Can

Sam wanted to protect Dean to be hurted but using his abilities on him was a little shocking, no wonder Bobby reacted like this. Poor Sam, to see his big brother so vulnerable, so lost it's heartbreaking. I'm afraid the next week it's going to be tough for Dean, and Sam as well. Very poignant story so far Mary, you're doing an amazing work with this one, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hi there

It was the right thing to do but the wrong way to do it. (Does that make sense?)

The next week will be tough but Sam may have a distraction.

Glad you like this, thank you for the support as always, Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 25/03/09 04:42 PM · On: Help Me If You Can

Oh, Sam, I know he wanted to keep Dean from hurting himself, but I kinda want to agree with Bobby.  Awesome update.



Author's Response:

Hi there

I agree with Bobby to, Sam did the right thing but in the wrong way...a feel a theme starting there!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/03/09 03:59 PM · On: Help Me If You Can

A very emotional chapter, looking forward to the next part

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks Lindsay, will update asap after Fight is up.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 25/03/09 03:54 PM · On: Help Me If You Can

Great chapter..I feel so bad for Dean..Sam's going to have a hard time staying away for a whole week..Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing..

Author's Response:

Hi Jennifer

Thank you, I feel bad for him too, Sam may have a distraction though!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 23/03/09 01:01 AM · On: Falling Into Me

awesome chapter..Really happy to see Mags back..I like where you are going and am happy Dean has people with him to help him thru it..Looking forward to more from both stories..Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Hi Jennifer

Thanks, Mags will hopefully be a good addition to this story and Dean will not be alone.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 22/03/09 08:23 AM · On: Falling Into Me

Wow, I guess Dean is really broken.  Poor Sam, he doesn't really know how to deal with this.  Nice to see Mags.

Author's Response:

HI there

Yeah Dean is not well at the moment at all and Sam has done the best thing he could. Glad you like that Mags is back, I love her lots.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 09:50 PM · On: Falling Into Me

OMG!Dean. He gave me the chills when he was talking and playing with the knife showing no emotion. He's so broken, vulnerable, Dean is like an empty shell. I'm glad that Sam called Mags. When Dean'll wake and find himself in the hospital he won't be happy. Very poignant story so far, what's going to happen next, I can't wait to know.

Author's Response:

Hi there

I've had the first few chapters of this written for a while, and I was dying to post this chapter to see what you guys thought.

I loved Dean in this, he's in bits but at least he has help.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 11:31 AM · On: Falling Into Me

OMG, Absolutely brilliant story, just read all three chapters and can't wait for the next update.  I'm a Dean fan and hate seeing him struggle with what he did in hell, At least you have Sam here helping him unlike the Sam in the TV series.  Please post a new chapter soon.

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

Thank you so much. I'm hoping to really put Dean through it in this one, and Sam will be there to help.

Will update as soon as, Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 10:31 AM · On: Falling Into Me

Great update, it's nice that Mags is in this story.



Author's Response:

Hi lindsay

Thanks, I had to have a doctor in this, thought it might as well be Mags, I like her too.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 08:44 AM · On: Crashing

Wow, a very powerful chapter. can't wait for more of this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks Lindsay

Hope you like the rest, a little broken Dean in this one.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 10:48 PM · On: Crashing

evil muse is back full force on this story..The first 2 chapters have been great..Please update as soon as possible..Thanks for writing.


Author's Response:

HI there

Yeap, evil muse will be running the show on this one from start to finish, Dean is going to be a little 'buckets o' crazy'!

Thanks, Jennifer. I'll speak to you soon, Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 10:10 PM · On: Crashing

don't leave it here!!! you've gotta update soon - please?

Author's Response:

HI there

Sorry, I will update as soon as!

Thanks for reading, Mary x

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 07:46 PM · On: Crashing

omg! you can't leave us with such a cliffie! hahahahaha i love it!

Author's Response:

HI there

Sorry...but believe me what comes next might be worse!!??

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 07:33 PM · On: Heading for a breakdown

very good story and you better update this one pretty soon! ( did that sounded like a treath? GOOD! hahahahahaha nice work mary

 



Author's Response:

HI

Thank you, I'm glad you like the start! You lot are very scary do you know that! I will try to keep this coming if maybe not quite a quickly as Fight.

Cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 05:29 PM · On: Crashing

What a dramatic chapter. Dean is losing it, thank goodness, he's not alone. Heartwrenching story so far, I can't wait for more.

 



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you. He's is isn't he. It's going to get worse, I always wanted them to show Dean loosing it completely on the show, that's what I want to do here!

Hope you like, Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 13/03/09 09:17 AM · On: Heading for a breakdown

cool start.looking forward to more

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks! Hope you like.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 12/03/09 07:45 PM · On: Heading for a breakdown

Awww...Poor Dean, he's emotionally broken, no wonder after what happened. Gotta love worry!Sam and worry!Bobby. What'll happen next, can't wait to know.

Author's Response:

HI Oceane,

Yeah, Want to try and take him apart a little in this one, hope it works! Love Bobby and Sam in full worry mode.

Cheers, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/03/09 01:20 PM · On: Heading for a breakdown

Poor broken Dean, i'm looking forward to more of this story.

Author's Response:

Hi Lindsay

A very broken Dean in this one!

Cheers, Mary x

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