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Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 17/05/09 09:25 PM · On: Back Where I Feel I Belong

An update!  Hmm, Dean's going home to Bobby's, I wonder how that's going to go.  I hope Sam and Bobby don't forget anything.

Author's Response:

Hi there

I know! I'm sorry, the updates are a bit slow on this one but this Dean is difficult to write and I already have two other ones running in my head just now from the other stories. It driving me a little crazy too!

On the way to Bobby's, that should be interesting!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 10:52 PM · On: Back Where I Feel I Belong

Mary,

good chapter.  i like that Dean is going to Bobby's and Mag will be there to  help.

but i am thinking you have something more sinister up your sleeve; i am thinking Bill might be more than he seems.

hope i am wrong.

hope the next chapter will be soon.

Renee



Author's Response:

Hi Renee

Thanks. Going to Bobby's will help and Mags will be there for Dean.

Me? Sinister? NOW what would make you think that? *evil laugh*

Will update as soon as I can, Mary x

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 03:47 PM · On: Back Where I Feel I Belong

I hope you post another story soon.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you, I will!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 01:33 PM · On: Back Where I Feel I Belong

Another lovely chapter,i'm loving all of the beautiful brother moments.

Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks, I really need some brother moments, glad you are enjoying them too.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 10:41 AM · On: Back Where I Feel I Belong

Well, Dean seems a little better, and Sam is at last doing something right, staying with his brother and not going off with that Ruby, Please update again soon can't wait for ch. 10

Author's Response:

Hi there

He has his moments, but he's calmer now than he was. Sam being there will help but Ruby will have a part to play.

Will update as soon as, thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 16/05/09 10:14 AM · On: Back Where I Feel I Belong

Ahhhhhh.....I love that Sam and Bobby are going to help Dean along with Mags. It never occurred to me that Dean was quite vulnerable where he is currently. I hope that between the 3 of them, they can get Dean to his old self soon. Loving the story.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeh, take him back to familiar ground and people that he trusts. Dean was vunerable at the clinic especially with Sam not there. Old Dean is on his way back, something will pull him out!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/05/09 12:37 PM · On: Somewhere there is my brother.

Awww, a lovely chapter, this is what the boy's need, to be together.

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks, after S4 it's what I need too!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 10:22 PM · On: Somewhere there is my brother.

Awesome as always.  “If I can’t see me how do I know that I’m really here?”  That seems so unlike Dean, it's so sad, but unfortunately I can see this Dean saying it right now. 

Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters as RL has been taking all of my free time, but those chapters were great as well.



Author's Response:

HI eeyore

Thanks. I loved that line. My boy is lost in this but he will find his way back, I love this Dean, it's great to write.

No worries, I sometimes only have time to read and not review all the time too, but as long as you are enjoying it I'm happy.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 09:59 PM · On: Somewhere there is my brother.

Awww...Dean is so vulnerable, it's heartbreaking. I'm glad that Dean opened up to Sam. I hope that Sam'll stay with him until he gets better. So a poignant story, I can't wait for more. Take care Mary.

Author's Response:

Hi there

He is isn't he, I kinda love this Dean and I wish that they had shown a little bit more of his struggle with what he has been through on the show, but I understand that there are time limits on them that I don't have.

I want the boys to be there for each other in this one, so don't worry.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 09:22 PM · On: Somewhere there is my brother.

Great update..Loved the bit at the end with Sam and Dean..Can't wait til the next update..thanks for writing.


Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks Jennifer, I liked that too, after S4 I need the brothers to be there for each other in this story, 'cos Mr K and Co are breaking my heart!

Cheers Mary x

PS My email is broken! I will get back to you when I fix it. I really need a new PC! lol.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 28/04/09 09:02 PM · On: Somewhere there is my brother.

OMG, that was so heartbreaking, poor Dean, can he suffer through any more of this?? Is Sam going to be able to help him?  Please post again soon.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, Dean is a little lost at the moment but something will happen to bring him back. Promise.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: flamelily (Signed) · Date: 18/04/09 01:40 PM · On: Heading for a breakdown

I love this story and a great chapter, poor Dean - will Sam come...update sooooon please

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you. I will update asap, I've been finishing off Fight to the Death but I haven't forgotten this one, promise!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 15/04/09 11:36 PM · On: What about now

Another great chapter..Is Sam going to come back or stay out with Ruby? Looking forward to more..Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Hi Jennifer

How's things? Is Sam coming back? I'll let you know soon! Promise.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/04/09 07:52 AM · On: What about now

I've a bad feeling that Sam won't answer to Mags call. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

HI there

I'm sure he will? I think! He will won't he?

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/04/09 03:46 PM · On: What about now

Great update, i want Sam to come but i hope it doesn't make Dean worse, well i'll just have to wait and see wont i?

Author's Response:

Hi there

You will just have too at that! I haven't actually written the next chapter for this but Sam should come and see his brother, don't you think...unless of course something stops him??? Is that evil or what!

Cheers! Mary xx

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 13/04/09 10:04 AM · On: What about now

Great chapter, will Seeing Sam help Dean? Will Sam even come?  Can't wait for the next chapter, Please post again soon.

Author's Response:

Hi there

There's a lot of questions there Maureen and I will try and answer them soon. I will probably finish Fight (it is almost there) and then get into this and My Blood too. Thanks as always, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 06:18 PM · On: The pain inside of being me

I'm loving this story, i think Dean may be starting to get a little better, he seems to trust Mags.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks. I really wanted to write this one so I'm glad you are enjoy it.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 05:44 PM · On: The pain inside of being me

Dean trusted Mags enough to talk to her, he even smiled to her. With this connection between them, I hope it's the beginning of Dean's recovery. I'm so loving this story, I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah there is a trust with Dean and Mags that I want to explore. I need it for later on. *cryptic smile*

Hope you like the rest. Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 05:54 PM · On: The pain inside of being me

Take all the time you need..this is a great story..Dean opening up to Mags was so sad..Glad his talking a little..Can't wait til the next update..Thanks for writing.


Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, I really want to get into Dean's pain in this so I may indulge myself a little!! I liked the little scene with Mags and Dean, he needs to talk.

Hope you like the rest, cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 11:04 AM · On: The pain inside of being me

Brilliant, I'm surprised that Dean was so willing to talk, just shows how broken his spirit is. Maybe Mags can help him after-all. But Sam isn't helping going off with Ruby, taking more to do with her than his brother. Hate her. and Sam's not that far behind.  Great stuff, Please update again soon.

Author's Response:

Hi Maureen

Dean is really broken and needing help at the moment. Mags can help but Sam will too soon, don't worry.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 05:00 PM · On: Different ways to try and make things right

Great update, poor Dean, i hope you are going to mend him soon lol.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, I will but it will be a bit longer before we patch the pieces back together.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 01:54 AM · On: Different ways to try and make things right

Great chapter..What are Sam and Ruby up to? Poor Dean..can't wait to read more..Bobby and Mags would be so good together..lol..Thanks for writing.


Author's Response:

Hi there

Sam just needs to do something to keep his mind off his brother. Poor Dean, I will be nicer to him soon. I love the idea of Bobby and Mags, might explore that further!!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 10:16 PM · On: Different ways to try and make things right

Come on Dean, you don't need people checking your mouth and watching you shower.  You need to get better.  Chapter was awesome as always.



Author's Response:

HI there

He kinda does at the minute but he will get better. Glad you liked.

Thanks Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 07:09 PM · On: Different ways to try and make things right

Thank goodness, Mags is there for Dean. Sam and Ruby're going after Lilith, I've a thought that something bad is going to happen during that hunt, hope I'm wrong. This story is so riveting, I want more already.

Author's Response:

HI there

Mags with get Dean to the point where Sam can help, although going after Lillith may not be the best idea. Haven't quite decided what he's going to do with that - I have too ways for this story to go.

Thanks for the constant support, I love it. Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 07:01 PM · On: Different ways to try and make things right

Great chapter, How could Sam go off with Ruby, I know he couldn't visit Dean but he shouldn't have left with HER. Poor Dean, it's so sad seeing him like this, I hope they can help fix him. Please update again soon.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, Sam just doesn't want to sit about doing nothing and thinking of his brother, but yeah Dean would so not be happy if he knew.

I really wanted to write this story so I'm glad you are all with me and get it. I will fix him as best as I can. Promise.

Cheers Mary x

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