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Reviews For Fight To The Death
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 11:57 AM · On: Honest Truths

This was a lovely chapter,John's talk to Dean was beautifuly written, it brought tears to my eyes,all of them broken dreams, the banter between Dean and Agnes is really funny, a brilliant chapter both sad and funny.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, glad you liked it, I had to redeem John 'cos I like him too much to leave people mad at him! Dean and Agnes are fun.

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 11:39 AM · On: Honest Truths

I'm so glad that John was able to tell Dean his real feelings about him. I loved the telling of Dean's birth and Sam's, too. I had a feeling Dean was hearing everything his dad was telling him. I hope he believes it. The banter betewwn Dean and Agnes is great. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi there

I liked writing that bit, and Dean heard him.

Agnes and Dean together are fun to write and I love Agnes.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/05/09 10:50 AM · On: A Word To The Not So Wise

I'm glad that Dean opened up to Agnes. Good for John to hear some truths about himself from Jim, maybe he'll finally realize that Dean is not a soldier but an amazing son who'll sacrifice anything even his life for his family. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response:

Hi Oceane

Thanks! Hey Dean needs someone to talk to. Jim has put the words in John's head, now all he has to do is listen to them.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: riniedean (Signed) · Date: 15/05/09 12:51 AM · On: A Word To The Not So Wise

wow Pastor Jim just saying ma exact opinion on John and Sam. Not just on this fics but on the whole

Author's Response:

Hi there

He did didn't he, now if only John will listen.

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 14/05/09 12:27 PM · On: A Word To The Not So Wise

I really wanted to see Agnes rip into John, but Jim did a pretty good job too.  Boy, the Winchester family doesn't do anything small,do they?  Still being nice and good!

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi there

Jim had words, Agnes has something far more interesting planned for John! Half measures are not a Winchester trait.

Thank you for being nice and good!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/05/09 11:11 AM · On: A Word To The Not So Wise

I really loved this chapter. I hope Jim will make John (and Sam needs to do this to), see that Dean is self sacrificing where those two are concerned, that Dean needs to learn that he is very important part of the family. He should not have to sacrifice himself for those two.  Agnes needs to make Dean believe in himself more. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks. Jim and Agnes will hopefully bring them all together again. I'm afraid though that they'll never see it until it's too late.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 14/05/09 10:38 AM · On: A Word To The Not So Wise

oh that was such a great speech that JIm told to John, every word the truth..but unfortunately nothing will change.  The best lines were this "e loves you and that brother of his more than either of you have any right to expect. He gives you everything he has and he takes nothing back in return. Not that anything would be forth coming any way. You and Sam your selfish to the core and do you know what?” " perfect!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, I kinda liked that and only Jim or Bobby would get away with saying it to John.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 14/05/09 09:43 AM · On: A Word To The Not So Wise

Great chapter, John and Sam were always a selfish pair, it make you sick to hear the rubbish Sam comes out with later on. Please update again soon, Hope Dean starts getting better now that John's away.

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks. They are aren't they? I will update as soon as.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/05/09 09:34 AM · On: A Word To The Not So Wise

Dean does hold the family together doesn't he and he's always stuck in the middle, and as for John he does love them he just doesn't do a very good job of showing it.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Dean does doesn't he? And he is always in the middle.

John is a bit of a poster boy for tough love but sometimes it takes more than that.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 07:53 PM · On: That's Just What Family Does

Wow! A lot of emotional baggage is being thrown all over the place here. But Dean seems to be able to dish it out, too--he really gave John an earful, didn't he? I really want to see how this gets resolved! Please update soon.

Sue



Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, handbags flying everywhere! I needed Dean mad enough to hit back but I did try not to take John soo far that he couldn't come back!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: riquitv (Signed) · Date: 13/05/09 03:48 PM · On: That's Just What Family Does

wow, this was the best chapter so far, it was amazing, really, i hope you can update soon, pleaseeee :)

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, I wasn't sure if I had taken it to far but the reviews are positive so I'm thankful for that.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 09:57 PM · On: That's Just What Family Does

OMG!How John told those harsh, hurtful words to Dean, he even got Sam angry to Dean too. Dean's feeling terrible once again, thanks to John and Sam. When Agnes'll know what happened she's going to be so pissed. Can't wait for more. 

Author's Response:

Hi there

John was very harsh, and he used Sam to get to Dean too. Agnes is going to be more than a little annoyed at things.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 06:24 PM · On: That's Just What Family Does

cant wait for more!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi there

I will post asap on this one!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 02:11 PM · On: That's Just What Family Does

Wow, that was brilliant, John was so nasty and now Dean's recovery has been set way back, I hope you don't plan on killing him Isn't Agnes going to be pleased when she hears about this.  Please update again soon.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, John was pretty harsh in this chapter and Dean is set back but only a little, Agnes will help.

No more death for Dean in this, promise!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 01:23 PM · On: That's Just What Family Does

OUCH!  John is so HARSH!  Somebody ought to smack him!  Where is Agnes when we need her?  I'm going to keep on being nice and good for YOU, but no more nice and good for John.  Grr.

Author's Response:

HI there

Yeah he was really harsh to Dean, and you are right someone ought to smack him down. Agnes is on her way and she isn't a happy bunny at all.

I love the Grr! Made me chuckle! Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 11:06 AM · On: That's Just What Family Does

wow this is quite a chapter...god you just want to kill John...he is such a selfish jerk but then again Sam isn't exactly helping the situation...good update and great story

Author's Response:

Hi there

It was. John was out of line here but I plan to redeem him...I hope!

Glad you like, cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 09:15 AM · On: That's Just What Family Does

Great chapter, lots of shouting going on here, John said some cruel things, i think Agnes should turn him into a frog till he calms down lol.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, there were a few harsh words thrown about here.

I'd love Agnes to turn John into a frog but she has other ideas for him.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 08:10 AM · On: That's Just What Family Does

This chapter just brought tears to my eyes. How could John tell Dean that all he was good for was watching Sam? Or that all Dean wanted was for Sam to go so he could fianlly  be the favorite son(that's how I read it!!), John had the nerve to tell Dean that he's his father and not him. Well, who really raised Sam??? Hmmm..? Then he tells Dean he couldn't really make it in the real world, that he would just be able to do menial work, that he is actually too dumb for anything else!!! Then he tops it off by using Sammy against him. John took every self esteem problem that Dean has and attached them! I am glad that Dean stood up for himself and Sam, but at what cost?? Dean looks like he is about to crash here. John needs to be taken down a peg or two, and I hope Agnes does it. I'm biting my nails here, and can't wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks.

John was pretty mad in this and he'd let it boil for a while waiting for Dean to wake up, but he was cruel.

John and Agnes are going to have a little chat but it might not be what you think!

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 09:57 PM · On: Friends and Family

I can't believe John and Sam sometimes. At least Sam has the excuse of being a teenager, they're all self obsesssed! But John is just an ass!

I absolutely love this story, you have to use Agnes in another story sometime please.



Author's Response:

Hi there

John has no excuse, except that he is a single minded idiot sometimes!

I love Agnes too, and she isn't finished yet!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 09:36 PM · On: Friends and Family

Hi Mary,

Oooh, a couple of good, angsty chapters. I kind of wanted to shake Sam when he told Dean about his college plans, but then I remembered that this is teen Sam, and he's been raised to think that he's special, the center of everything. College is a big deal, too and he really wanted Dean to go with him, but I think he also knows Dean never would take him up on his offer.

And then you have John overhearing Sam talking to Agnes and I can tell things are gonna get lively in the next chapter! can't wait.

Sue



Author's Response:

Hi Sue

Thanks, and it's not over yet. I want to shake Sam too but he is a young boy and as you so rightly say - he thinks the world revolves around him, mainly thanks to his brother!

Dean would never leave but John is going to push him hard in that direction.

John up next and it ain't pretty!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 09:28 PM · On: Friends and Family

Poor Dean, he doesn't need a confrontation with John after his talk with Sam. At least, he's not alone, Jim and Agnes're there for him. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hi there

He really doesn't but I'm evil so it's gonna happen anyway! lol

Jim and Agnes are going to step up for him, don't worry.

CHeers Mary x

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 03:05 PM · On: Friends and Family

great story cant wait for more update soon!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks pendays - next one is up, finally.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 11:12 AM · On: Friends and Family

Oh GOD John!!!  Don't do it!  Don't be such a frickin' idiot!!!

I love John, but he can be such a bastard sometimes.

 



Author's Response:

Hi there

I'm afraid he is going to, the red mist is down. I love John and I will redeem him in this .....I think...but for now.....not so much. If you didn't hate him before.....

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 10:23 AM · On: Friends and Family

Again poor Dean, he really is having a bad time of it, it's a pity John and Sam don't understand him as well as Agnes and Pastor Jim.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Dean really is taking a whomping in this and no one has even touched him! Pastor Jim and Agnes need to show John and Sam how it's done. And they will.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 09:54 AM · On: Friends and Family

Holy sh*%! I can't believe John is actually lying in wait for Dean to wake up? Dean will really be stressed big time when he gets blasted by his father. Wonder what kind of set back that will do to Dean? I imagine Agnes is going to turn John into a frog then fry him up after he upsets Dean. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please hurry back!!

Author's Response:

HI there

Yeah, imagine waking up to find John glaring at you? Well imagine no more 'cos the next chapter is up. Dean's stress level is about to rise.

Agnes threat of turning John into a frog might seem mild to what she'll do when she finds out what he does!

CHeers Mary x

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