Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 10:31 PM · On: Little Moments
Hi Mary, This is a fun little chapter, it feels kind of business-like. Explains how the Impala got fixed and Dean's limp, and leaves us with Sam and Dad locked in the library (sounds like a game of Clue) and not discussing college. How long will that last? I'm beginning to think that this is Sam's last hunt before college, that this ends with Sam's acceptance letter and full ride to Stanford. And if it's actually set months before that momentous event, I trust you'll keep cranking out chapters til we get there;-) Sue
Author's Response: HI Sue Glad you liked, needed to lighten it for a little while and I need certain things to happen here for later. Not Sam's last hunt before college but close too. I want to end with Sam leaving but I have a road to take before it wil get there. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 07:04 PM · On: Little Moments
Love it! John and Sam will never stop arguing about College. I guess when Sam does leave and John tells him to never come back, it will crush Dean to no end. I love how they locked Sam and John up together, wonder what they are planning. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Hi there No they won't and Dean will be the one to suffer. Their revenge will come later! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 11:13 AM · On: Little Moments
Great chapter, It didn't take John and Sam to start up again, did it? Now that all the excitement of Saving Dean had passed, things have slowed down dramatically, Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Hi there No, they are going to circle round this until Sam actually goes! Slowed down the story for now I need certain things in place for later!? CHeers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 09:11 AM · On: Little Moments
I enjoyed that chapter, it serves John and Sam right, shouldn't be arguing lol. the frog was really funny.
Author's Response: HI there Thanks, they did didn't they? I couldn't resist the frog, needed a little humour. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 06:10 AM · On: Little Moments
Loved that chapter. When Dean and Sam saw the frog thinking that it could be their father, so funny. Dean locking Sam and John in the librairy worked in some way, they didn't talk about college and they didn't kill each other, no, they're plotting a way for Dean to pay for what he did to them. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you I couldn't resist the frog, it had to be done. Locking in the library was just a way of showing how really mad his is at them! It probably won't change anything. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 10:35 PM · On: Little Moments
I don't know if locking them in the library is going to do anymore than have them kill each other sooner. I liked the frog- nice touch. It's good to see John with a little bit of a sense of humor. I don't see that often. I am SLOWLY getting better, but have a lingering cough. It has NOT changed the fact that I am being nice and good.
Author's Response: Hi It won't but it let Agnes take Dean out for a little r and r away from them so it has it's up point. I couldn't resist the frog. I wanted a little fun in it and I've painted John so black in bits of this I wanted to show a little lighter side for a few minutes. CHeers Mary x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 31/05/09 10:02 PM · On: Fun and Games
LOL! Oh dear! That hunt didn't go well, did it? I hope Bobby can save them. I have a bad cold, and am going back to bed, but I'm STILL being nice and good!
Author's Response: Hi there No it did not, but they got out in one piece so it wasn't a total disaster! Sorry you're feeling poorly. *hands tissues over* Wrap up warm and get well soon! Mary x
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 10:53 PM · On: Fun and Games
Nice chapter full of all sorts of things, it almost reads like a full story on its own. I like that Dad trusted the boys to tackle this spirit on their own. Sam's comment about not doing this (hunting) for much longer shows that he still only sees the world on his terms, altho at least he's worried about his words' effect on Dean after he says them. And you messed with the Impala, having the nasty ghost blow out her windows! Ack! Sue
Author's Response: Hi Sue It was kinda a story all on its own wasn't it? It wrote itself, one of those ones that you sit down and your fingers just type. Dean needs to be shown John trusts him but Sam as you say is still a typical teenager - it's still all about him! Had to give the Impala some pages time. No story is complete without it! lol Cheers, Mary x
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 09:09 PM · On: Honest Truths
The scene between John and Dean is great. I like that John kept on point in his apology and explanation, knowing that even tho Dean looked asleep to all intents and purposes, he was awake and listening to every word. A nice, quiet chapter! Sue
Author's Response: Hey Sue Happy Birthday! I'm glad you liked the scene between them, I left Dean 'sleeping' because I wanted John to talk and for Dean not to try and stop him, he needs to here that his father loves him.
Story needed some down time too, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 08:34 PM · On: Fun and Games
Yep, Dean had a bit a pleasure and pain in this chapter. He doesn't seem to be able to get a break. Sam will think twice about a potty break while on a hunt! Looking forward to the end of your story but at the same time hate to see it end. Sigh..
Author's Response: Hi there Had to be nice to him at some point in this story! But only for a little while! Poor Sam - he ought to know better! Story is nearly there, cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 06:54 PM · On: Fun and Games
Dean seems to be a lot better, Great chapter, The boys are back in business and joking around, Nice,
Author's Response: Hi Maureen Thanks, yeah, Dean is well on the mend now and the boys are back on a level ground. It'll stay that way now.
Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 05:38 PM · On: Fun and Games
What a nasty spirit, she hurted the impala, at least the boys're alright. I'm looking forward to the ending.
Author's Response: HI Oceane She was a meany, the Impala was getting neglected in this one so I had to give her a little starring role. End is in sight now. (I hope) Cheers Mary x
Author's Response: HI Oceane She was a meany, the Impala was getting neglected in this one so I had to give her a little starring role. End is in sight now. (I hope) Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/05/09 01:10 PM · On: Fun and Games
A great chapter, that was a close shave with the Impala and the grave.
Author's Response: Hi there Thanks, yeah the car was nearly buried too, Dean with it! CHeers Mary xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/05/09 10:00 PM · On: Falling Into Place
This chapter put a smile on my face. No tension, no angst, loved the break. How cool, the brothers hunting together with no John around. Agnes wants a word with Julie-Anne and Dean, they're going to be grounded, lol. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hi there I made me smile too! Needed a little break and for them all to start coming together now. The hunt won't exactly go as planned but they manage it anyway. We won't hear 'the talk' but we will get the parking part! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/05/09 12:51 PM · On: Falling Into Place
A lovely warm hearted chapter,i enjoyed this one.
Author's Response: HI Lindsay, I wanted a little softer tone to this bit, starting to wind it down and mend some fences. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 28/05/09 08:29 AM · On: Falling Into Place
Ah! Two updates, and I didn't review! I wasn't nice and good! I will work harder at it :) I'm glad that things are piece by piece getting healed. I definitely think that letting Dean take a hunt with Sam will be good for him. I'm still loving Agnes. I love her revenge on John, although it does make me sad knowing what Sam leaving does to the family in the long run.
Author's Response: Hi there I snuck the 2nd one in so you're still nice and good in my book!lol Things are slotting into place and will end soon, Dean getting to go hunting with his brother shows trust on John's part and that is what Dean needs. Glad you still like Agnes! Cheers Mary x
Author's Response: Hi there I snuck the 2nd one in so you're still nice and good in my book!lol Things are slotting into place and will end soon, Dean getting to go hunting with his brother shows trust on John's part and that is what Dean needs. Glad you still like Agnes! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 28/05/09 07:38 AM · On: Falling Into Place
I loved this interlude of family healing and forgiveness. Poor Dean, he had better watch out because Agnes had his number!! Looking forward to the rest of your story!
Author's Response: HI there Thank you, I wanted a few quiter chapters to end, only a little to go now. Yeah and Agnes has Dean's number! Not much more to go now, hope you like, Mary x
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 27/05/09 08:01 PM · On: Getting on the right road
god I love Agnes, Dean could so use someone like in his life.
Author's Response: Hi there I love Agnes too! We could all do with someone like that in our lives. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/05/09 06:27 PM · On: Getting on the right road
What a surprise for Dean when he saw the physio, Agnes loves teasing Dean. I enjoy the sweet banter between Dean and Agnes. Another tense conversation with John and Agnes. Great work Mary, I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hi there Time for me to be nice to Dean, 'cos I've been bad too long to him in this one! Agnes loves teasing Dean but she's gonna have some words in the next few chapters for him! John needs someone to stand up to him, Agnes is that person. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/05/09 02:43 PM · On: Getting on the right road
Great chapter. it's nice to see that Dean is feeling better, i liked Agnes's talk to John.
Author's Response: HI Lindsay Thanks. Yep Dean is getting much better as the next chapter will show! Someone has to made John see sense. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 27/05/09 11:26 AM · On: Getting on the right road
Great, Glad that Dean finally seems to be recovering, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: HI there Thanks, yeah Dean is almost back to being Dean and I've already posted the next chapter! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/05/09 08:01 AM · On: Getting on the right road
I very much enjoyed this chapter! It was great to see Dean being so "Dean" with Julie-Anne, all the flirting was so like him. Loved that Dean got all bothered about being called pretty, and he is a very pretty, gorgeous, beautiful, and handsome man!! Agnes talk with John was wonderful, gave him food for thought. Looking forward to the next post, so hurry back, pretty please!
Author's Response: HI there Thank you. Dean is getting to be more Dean again and the flirting is back! There are no words to describe just how gorgeous Dean is...well yummy springs to mind! Glad you liked Agnes' talk to John, he wont listen but she's still put the thought there! I've post already! Two days in a row. What is the world coming too! Mary x
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 10:49 PM · On: Honest Truths
I'm glad Agnes doesn't put up with Dean's crap either! Although, I've done just a little bit of therapy for a teeny little medical problem, and it STANK. I don't think Dean will find it fun for all the problems he was having. I'm glad John at least SAID something to Dean, even though he was "asleep" Too bad John doesn't seem to have the courage to say it to his face. My friends are wondering what's wrong with me, I'm being so nice and good. :)
Author's Response: HI there Agnes doesn't suffer fools lightly. Dean is on the mend as much as Dean can be mended that is. I wanted John to open up and I don't think he would have if Dean had been 'awake' but a little bit of me knows that Dean was really asleep. Does that make sense?
Nice and good for just a little while longer...you can do it! lol Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 10:03 PM · On: Honest Truths
What an awesome chapter. Beautiful what John said to Dean. Poor Dean, too bad that it's a guy who'll help him to get on his feet, lol. And Agnes, still love her, she's quite a woman. Nice work Mary, I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hi there Glad you liked John in this one, I had to redeem him! So sure there that Dean's physio will be a guy? This was Agnes remember! And she is a tease. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 19/05/09 02:35 PM · On: Honest Truths
Nice quiet chapter, with no-one yelling at no-one, Glad Dean managed to get through a whole chapter without needing pain relief from Agnes.
Author's Response: Hi there Needed to step back a bit there. Dean is on the mend despite the little set back. Cheers mary x
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