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Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 25/06/09 11:14 PM · On: The Last Hunt?

EEP!!!  Okay, the pressure's on, very very tense here.  I have been VERY nice and good for a lot of chapters so you will update quick and fix this yes?



Author's Response:

Hi there

Just a little pressure, and yes you have been exceptionally nice and good and I will try to reward you accordingly...nervous yet?

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 25/06/09 05:35 PM · On: The Last Hunt?

What a cliffhanger. Hope that Dean'll show up soon.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks! Dean is on his way.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 25/06/09 03:38 PM · On: The Last Hunt?

what an evil cliffe!

Author's Response:

HI there

I know, I'm sorry!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 25/06/09 12:42 PM · On: The Last Hunt?

Brilliant update, oh no it bit Sam,i hope it's not a Werewolf,that wont be good.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yup, it bit Sam...not good!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/06/09 01:09 PM · On: Pale Moon On The Rise

Terrific chapter. Sam and John went to hunt a werewolf but Sam is not convinced it's a werewolf, I'm afraid something bad is going to happen.  Thank goodness, Sam called and Dean following by Agnes and Julie-Anne'll be there soon. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Something bad happening on this hunt...would I do that...actually....yeah!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:46 PM · On: Pale Moon On The Rise

Brilliant, John can be a right dick sometimes, most times actually.  Hope Sam is going to be OK on this hunt, Will Dean get there in time if he's needed. More please...

Author's Response:

Hi there

John can be, he means well but his method of showing it is wrong sometimes. Sam being ok on this hunt...er what can I say....

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 12:47 PM · On: Pale Moon On The Rise

Great chapter, looks like theirs gonna be trouble on this hunt.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, you know, you could be right!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:06 AM · On: Pale Moon On The Rise

We definitely had a calm before the storm, didn't we?  I liked Dean's work with Paul, that was a lot of fun!  Now I'm worried about Sam.  John usually isn't this careless, grr.  (still being nice and good:)

Author's Response:

Hi

Yeah, slowed it down for a bit but will be picking up the pace again. Dean's great with Paul, pity he's being pulled away.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/06/09 07:21 PM · On: Watching You

Dean is a compassionate person no wonder he can help others, I like the idea of him to be an empath. After seeing Dean with Paul and then with Julie-Anne John is  worried to loose him as well. With only Sam and John on a hunt, I'm afraid we're up for lot of tension, can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response:

Hi Oceane

Thanks. He is isn't he? I liked the idea of him being a bit empathic too. Sam and John on a hunt doesn't bode well, we will have to see...

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 13/06/09 09:08 AM · On: Watching You

Another complex chapter, proving how devious Agnes is. I think she did dally just long enough for Dean and John to bump into each other.

And you're doing what John and Sam are doing; you're ignoring Dean's pain. You made it clear that he stayed in contact with Paul and felt his pain, but you didn't show any after effects for/on Dean. There should've been some, with Dean only barely healed himself.  

Dean's comment about John asking Agnes instead of him about his activities at the clinic rang true. Julie-Anne is right; Dean would make a great detective.

Sue



Author's Response:

Hi Sue

Agnes is a devious, devious person when she wants to be. And yeah, maybe she did keep John just that little bit too long.

You know I love your reviews, I didn't notice that I had did that to Dean but you're right! I will redeem myself in the next chapter. Thank you for pointing that out!

Yeah, John was maybe a little frightened to ask Dean straight out, but I'm sure he would have grilled Sam and badgered him to find out more, if Agnes hadn't let him see.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/06/09 09:55 PM · On: Watching You

I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the idea of  Dean having empath type abilities even if it just his way of being in tune to people's feelings. John checking up on Dean and seeing how he works with others was quite revealing to dear old John. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks. I like the idea of someone seeing that Dean would be good for something other than just hunting, and he is very attune to his family's needs all the time.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 10:32 PM · On: Watching You

Of COURSE he would be the perfect person to help the one guy- he was just like Sam!  I like seeing Dean in this light- tapping into another aspect of who he is.  Still nice and good.

Author's Response:

Hi there

He is a caring person is our Dean isn't he. More to come soon!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 05:21 PM · On: Watching You

I think Dean would be good at a job like that.

I got my bloody valentine the other day, got a shock at the end, i hadn't guessed.



Author's Response:

Hi there

So do I, he's got a caring nature underneath it all hasn't he.

I'd seen the original MBV and half way through watching this one (I saw it in the cinema) I was like - did they change the end? It was very sneaky of them! I liked it, it was a just sit back and enjoy film and JA was in it, what more can you want!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 10:57 AM · On: Watching You

I know I know that it won't happen but I so wish that Dean would stay there.  He deserve to have people care about him and appreciate him...oh well wishful thinking...

Author's Response:

Hi there

I know it would be nice but Dean wouldn't do that...would he? I does deserve to be shown that he's love more than he is.

Cheers Maryx

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 09:10 PM · On: Worried for the wrong reasons.

So Dean is working at the clinic and he felt needed, it's a little sad when he doesn't feel that way from his family. I'm afraid that John won't be very pleased with Dean's new job. Can't wait for John's reaction.

Author's Response:

Hi there

It's about time some recognised that our boy is good at what he does and he got some positive feedback, his family do take him for granted. No, don't see John being pleased at all.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 01:16 PM · On: Worried for the wrong reasons.

Permanent job??  Huh.  That's not a career I would have thought of for him, but he would be good at it.  Still being nice and good.

Author's Response:

HI there

It's just an offer but you are right, he would be good at it.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: black_werewolf_101 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 11:34 AM · On: Worried for the wrong reasons.

Ooh... Dean's gonna be in trouble....

Haha no. I think that's a good idea. And John will be the one in trouble if he says otherwise.

Love the story Smudge! Keep it coming! ;)

~Kristina 



Author's Response:

HI there

Yeah John isn't going to be happy is he?

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 11:00 AM · On: Worried for the wrong reasons.

Great chapter, glad John and Sam didn't do anything nasty to dean he didn't deserve it.  Looking forward to see what Dean is doing at the clinic, It would be great for him if he did take the job of course he won't but you can always dream....  Please update again soon.

Author's Response:

HI Maureen

Thanks. All will be revealed shortly.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 08:51 AM · On: Worried for the wrong reasons.

Don't think John will be very pleased when he finds out about the job offer, looking forward to finding out.

Author's Response:

Hi there

No, don't see John being happy at Agnes trying to steal both his sons away! Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 08:14 AM · On: Worried for the wrong reasons.

I just love how Agnes "handles" John. Cant wait to see what Dean's up to and John's reaction.

I also liked Dean making the comment about it being nice to be needed. Would hope Sam would get the hint...

Great chap Mary!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Tree

Thanks. I love Agnes' handling of John too!

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 09:17 PM · On: Wants and Desires

Well, well, well, Agnes and John, together, I never thought it would happen. Awww... loved Agnes teasing Dean, it's so sweet. Can't wait to know what's Agnes proposition. I'm looking forward to your next chapter Mary.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, well they say that hate lives next door to love - or lust in the occasion.

Agnes proposition coming up, hope you like. Cheers Mary s

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 06:23 PM · On: Wants and Desires

really funny the way you got John and Agnes together!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Glad you liked. It does have a purpose! Promise.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 01:28 PM · On: Wants and Desires

Oh MY....now that was a fun little diversion!  It's nice that Agnes is able to get Sam a full ride, but I do like the idea that he managed that all on his own. 

This chapter put a smile on my face.  I am having a hard time coming up with more ways to be nice and good, though.



Author's Response:

Hi there

It was wasn't it? Agnes wants Sam to go to college, she was in the same position, trying to get away from a controlling parent bus she isn't going to make it easy for him.

You are always nice and good to me by reviewing, don't worry! Mary x

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 10:16 AM · On: Wants and Desires

So that was interesting, John and Agnes??   John still not accepting that Sam is going.  Are the two of them going to get Dean back, that would be really nasty of them considering they almost killed him a few weeks back. 

Author's Response:

Hi

Yeah, that was a turn up for the books eh? John is really going to fight over this but he will have to be careful that he doesn't end up pushing everyone away.

Cheers Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 05/06/09 09:57 AM · On: Wants and Desires

Well i didn't expect that, can't say i blame her mind lol.

Great update.

 

.



Author's Response:

Hi there

Neither did Agnes! It has a purpose of sorts!

Thanks, Mary x

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